Where The Flowers Never Fade

Written in response to: "Set your story in a place where the weather never changes."

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The sky over Evermere had never known the frost. A soft golden glow stretched endlessly, casting a perpetual warmth over the verdant world below. Here, the flowers never withered, their petals forever caught in a slow, mesmerizing dance upon the breeze. The rivers shimmered like liquid glass, their waters rich with the scent of nectar, and the wind whispered secrets through the blossoming trees in a voice older than time itself. Birds with iridescent plumage flitted between the boughs, their melodies weaving seamlessly into the hum of life that filled the air.

At the heart of this eternal spring stood the village of Lorien, nestled like a hidden gem among the rolling emerald hills. Vines heavy with fragrant blooms adorned the thatched rooftops, while great willow-like trees arched protectively over cobbled paths lined with lanterns of glowing pollen. Fires burned low in their hearths, not for warmth, but for light, their embers casting flickering patterns upon the carved wooden walls. In this world of endless bloom and soft breezes, survival was an afterthought, but mystery lingered in the petals of every flower, in the shadows of every glade.

Eira, a girl of seventeen springs, had never seen the world beyond Lorien. She had grown up on the stories of those who had dared to seek the mythical edge of Evermere—where, it was said, the green ended and the unknown began. None had ever returned. It was folly, her elders warned, to believe in such things. The bloom was all there was, all there would ever be.

But Eira did not believe them.

She clutched the leather-bound journal she had found hidden among her late father’s belongings. It smelled of aged parchment and crushed petals, its pages worn from years of handling. It spoke of an expedition—one he had planned but never embarked upon. Maps sketched with trembling hands marked a path leading north, through the Meadow of Whispers, across the Petalvale Ravine, and beyond.

The edge of the world, the journal called it.

One evening, beneath the ever-drifting petals, Eira made her choice. Wrapped in a shawl of woven vines and carrying only what she could fit in her pack, she stepped beyond the boundary of Lorien and into the wild.

The deeper she ventured, the more the familiar hues of Evermere began to change. The vibrant golds and lush greens of home gave way to stranger shades—blush-colored meadows that stretched like ocean waves, forests where the leaves shimmered silver beneath an ever-dawning sky. The air was thick with a strange energy, the hum of unseen forces pulsing just beneath the surface of reality. Her food dwindled, her resolve wavered, and the whispers of the wind turned to murmurs, questioning her foolishness.

Then came the beasts.

They emerged from the foliage like living shadows, their coats shifting with the colors of the blossoms around them, their eyes burning with golden fire. They moved like wraiths, fluid and soundless, their elongated limbs treading over petals without a whisper of sound. Eira barely had time to raise her father’s carved staff before they fell upon her. She fought, though she knew it was hopeless. One of the creatures lunged for her throat—and then stopped, mid-air, as if caught by some unseen force.

A figure stepped forward from the meadow. Cloaked in living vines and crowned with blooming flowers, they raised a delicate hand, and the beasts slunk back, melting into the sea of petals from which they came. Eira, panting, barely able to stand, met the stranger’s gaze.

“You seek the edge,” the figure said, their voice like rustling leaves. “Why?”

Eira could not explain it fully, not in words, but she knew she had to see it—to know that Evermere was not all there was. The stranger studied her for a long moment before extending a hand.

“Then come,” they said. “But know this: the edge is not what you think.”

And so Eira followed, deeper into the wilds, toward the truth hidden beneath the blossoms.

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Eira walked behind the stranger for what felt like hours, guided only by their steady steps through the shifting glade. The air shimmered with drifting motes of golden pollen, and luminous vines pulsed like veins through the earth. She had many questions, but the hum of the flora swallowed her voice. Instead, she focused on keeping up, her breath coming in measured gasps as her body adjusted to the strange energy thrumming in the air.

Finally, they reached the mouth of a cavern entwined with vines that glowed softly, their light shifting in rhythm with an unseen pulse. The stranger motioned for her to enter, and she hesitated only a moment before stepping inside. The cavern walls were not stone but something else entirely—something that pulsed and breathed like a living thing, streaked with veins of golden light that pulsed in time with her heartbeat. It was the most unfamiliar place she had ever seen.

The stranger lowered their hood, revealing a woman with skin like polished bark and eyes that shimmered like dew-kissed leaves. “You are not the first to seek the edge,” she said, kneeling to light a small lantern. Its glow was not fire but something older, something primordial. “Nor will you be the last.”

Eira knelt beside her. “What is it, really?”

The woman considered her for a moment. “It is where Evermere ends—but not in the way you imagine.”

She reached into her cloak and pulled out a small shard of something dark and glistening. It pulsed, as if alive, its surface shifting like liquid obsidian. “This is what remains of the boundary,” she murmured. “The barrier between our world and another.”

Eira frowned. “Another world?”

“Yes,” the woman whispered. “A world that was never meant to touch ours. The warmth you know—the endless bloom—is not natural. It is the result of something broken, something ancient. The edge is not an escape; it is a prison.”

A shiver ran down Eira’s spine that had nothing to do with the air. “Then why do people seek it?”

“Because they hope,” the woman said simply. “Even in the face of the impossible, they hope.”

Eira stared at the shard in the woman’s hand. The thought of returning to Lorien, to a life of unchanging days and whispered warnings, filled her with dread. But the alternative—the truth of the edge—was just as terrifying.

The woman held out the shard. “If you truly wish to see it, to understand what lies beyond, take this. But know that once you do, there is no turning back.”

Eira reached out, hesitating only a moment before her fingers closed around the shard. A shock ran through her, like the rush of a spring river, and suddenly the cave dissolved around her. She was falling—not through air, but through something else, something vast and endless and humming with a force beyond measure.

And then she saw it.

The edge of the world was not a horizon, not an end to the fields and flowers. It was a rift—a gaping wound in reality itself, pulsing with unnatural darkness. The golden breeze howled around it, drawn into its depths, vanishing into nothingness.

Eira felt herself being pulled forward, toward the rift, her body weightless and trembling. The shard in her hand burned like a tiny sun, its glow pulsing in time with the void before her.

Then she heard the voices.

They were not whispers like the wind, nor the murmurs of the leaves. They were voices of those who had come before, those who had sought the edge and found only oblivion. They called to her, pleaded, warned.

Eira opened her eyes.

She turned away from the void, stepping back from the abyss.

She would not vanish into the unknown. Not yet.

Instead, she would return—to Lorien, to Evermere, to the endless bloom—but not as the same girl who had left. She would return with the truth, even if it changed everything.

And perhaps, one day, she would seek the edge again.

Posted Jan 31, 2025
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