Submitted to: Contest #302

Fortune In The Anime Cloud

Written in response to: "Write a story where someone gets into trouble and a stranger helps them out."

Fantasy Friendship Funny

Donald Quigley stepped out of Akihabara Station as though crossing a threshold into legend. The city was bright enough to bleach memory, loud enough to drown logic. Tokyo pulsed around him—LEDs fluttered like mechanical fireflies, and vending machines blinked with endless neon thirst.

He wore a long, gray duster he’d ordered off an anime cosplay website, and made him look more like a battle-weary ronin. Still, he believed in the garment. In his mind, it was the Cloak of Storms—a symbol of his rebirth.

He carried no guidebook. Instead, in the front pocket of his tactical belt was a dog-eared copy of Shingami Requiem Chronicles: Season One Companion Guide. The page corners were folded like sacred prayers. His checked luggage was still circling at Narita, but Don had no time for luggage or hotels. He had a quest.

He was here to attend the NeoKami Anime Festival. That was enough for Don. He trusted in his destiny with Raijin Yagami—the anime warrior who, in his darkest nights of divorce and insomnia, had offered him a new code to live by.

“The wind does not ask why it blows,” Raijin had once said, eyes burning like animated coals. “It simply serves the thunder.”

Don repeated the line under his breath now, mistaking a gust from a subway grate as a celestial affirmation.

He turned onto a side street buzzing with cafes, arcades, and people who looked born of ink and pixels—young men in trench coats, girls with lilac wigs. Yes. His people.

As he raised his phone to take a photo of what he believed might be a shrine to the ancient anime goddess Tsukiko (in reality, it was a maid café sandwich board featuring a QR code and a cartoon cat), he stepped off the sidewalk.

He didn’t see the oncoming scooter.

But he did feel the small, firm hand that grabbed his wrist and yanked him backward with the efficiency of a stage magician pulling a rabbit from doom.

“Crazy American!” a voice chided.

He stumbled, blinked—and found himself nose-to-nose with a girl dressed like a porcelain doll who had lost a bet in a candy store.

She wore a frilled bonnet, a pink gingham apron, and thigh-high stockings with tiny bows. Her bangs curled like punctuation marks.

“Too much dreaming, not enough looking!” she huffed, jabbing a finger at his chest.

“I—uh…” Don adjusted his glasses. “Are you real?”

She squinted. “You come from the cloud?”

“Yes,” he said, with sudden conviction. “Yes. I do.”

She nodded solemnly, apparently accepting this. “Come,” she said, taking his hand like a child escorting a malfunctioning toy. “You must eat something. You are dizzy.”

“Wait, what?”

Before he could protest, she dragged him across the street until they arrived at a lace-curtained storefront with a hand-painted sign that read:

カフェ・セレスティアル・ティアーズ

Café Celestial Tears

Inside, everything was pastel, perfumed, and alive with giggles and synthetic harp music. Don was guided to a table shaped like a giant macaron.

The Lolita Maid placed a laminated menu in his hand and crouched to his eye level.

“My name Yui,” she said. “You lucky. I save your life. Now, you order parfait or you cursed forever.”

He nodded slowly. “Yes, ma’am. Parfait, please. With honor.”

Just then, another figure appeared—a bored-looking young man with dyed blond hair and a phone in one hand. He wore the same uniform as Yui, only the male version.

“Yui, who is this?” he asked in Japanese.

“Cloud man,” she replied. “From the anime cloud.”

“His name?”

She frowned at the ticket Don had dropped, misreading it. “Donki.”

“Donki?” the boy laughed.

Don straightened. “Actually, it’s Don Quigley. Donald Quigley.”

Kenji tried again. “Don … Quick-ree?”

“Close enough,” Don said, relieved. “But Donki works. That’s what my spirit form might be called.”

Yui clapped with delight. “Donki-san!” she exclaimed. “Kawaii name!”

Kenji smirked. “Okay, Donki-san. Where are you going?”

Don sat up straighter and pulled out the crumpled flyer from his coat pocket. “The NeoKami Anime Festival,” he said. “It’s my destiny.”

Kenji raised an eyebrow. Yui leaned closer. Both stared at the form like they needed glasses.

Kenji sighed. It’s not here. That event was from last year.”

Don froze. His mouth moved, but no words emerged.

Yui gave a sympathetic pout, then perked up. “We find for you. Me and Kenji. Today, we go adventure!”

Don blinked. “You’ll help me?”

“Of course,” she said. “You are Donki, hero from anime cloud!”

Kenji rolled his eyes, but didn’t protest. “Fine,” he muttered.

Don bowed solemnly. “Then let our quest begin.”

By noon, Donki was lost again—only this time, he had his entourage.

Yui walked five paces ahead, her bonnet bobbing like a candy-colored metronome. She spun in slow circles, consulting her phone as if it were a compass blessed by moon spirits. Kenji trailed behind, earbuds in, one hand glued to his phone screen, livestreaming the saga under the hashtag #DonkiSaga. Over 100,000 viewers were already watching.

“Donki,” Yui called cheerfully, “are you hungry again? Kenji says hungry man make bad hero choices.”

Donki paused near a vending machine and squinted skyward. Across the sky rose a glass monolith glowing with moving light.

He pointed. “There.”

Kenji looked up. “That’s Hikarie Tower.”

“No. That,” Donki said solemnly, “is the Fortress of NeoKami.”

“Seriously?”

“The Tower of Screens,” Donki whispered. “Where the anime gods live.”

Yui gasped theatrically. “Ooh!

Kenji sighed but followed anyway. He had long since stopped arguing with delusions—especially delusions that drove viewer engagement.

As they neared the tower in Shibuya, Donki’s energy transformed. He moved with exaggerated purpose, as if a dramatic score played beneath his steps. The building’s LED panels scrolled with ads and animated logos, each one seeming, in Donki’s mind, to acknowledge his approach.

They entered through the ground-level tech boutique. Everything gleamed. The 1960s Japanese hit song “Sukiyaki” blared from ceiling speakers, its wistful melody oddly fitting the moment.

Donki froze. There, in the center of the room, stood a six-foot inflatable Pikachu beside a stack of VR headsets.

He stepped forward reverently. Then, with a joyful cry—“Spirit Guardian!”—he lunged and hugged the Pikachu around the middle.

Shoppers gasped. A headset display clattered to the floor.

Kenji hissed, “Donki! No!”

But it was too late. A pair of sleek-suited security guards appeared from opposite corners. One spoke sharply in Japanese; the other reached for his radio.

Yui stepped behind Kenji. “Now he meet real boss.”

Kenji stepped forward, phone still in hand. “Performance art!” he declared in English.

The guards hesitated. One peered at Kenji’s phone, which showed thousands of thumbs-ups and scrolling heart emojis. A comment flashed: “Best Tokyo stream today. Protect Donki at all costs.”

Kenji showed the screen to the guards. “Very famous,” he said solemnly. “He is … American prophet of animation.”

The taller guard blinked. The other one laughed. After a tense pause, they both relaxed. One asked for a selfie. The other posed beside Donki, who stood proudly, still clutching the Pikachu as if it had blessed him.

“Donki-san,” Yui said sweetly, “no more hug yellow spirits, okay?”

They left the boutique with a warning and a bag of complimentary pocky sticks.

Outside, Donki turned to them both, eyes shining.

“I was tested,” he said, “by the gods of neon. And I did not falter.”

Kenji snorted. “You hugged a balloon.”

“No,” Donki replied, “I embraced my destiny.”

Yui handed him a green tea pocky, “Destiny needs sugar.”

As they wandered toward Shinjuku, the city blurred again—crowds, color, screens, laughter.

As they left the metro station near the gymnasium, a small Shiba Inu with soft ginger fur and bright eyes trotted up beside them. It wore no tag—only an eager expression and a wagging tail.

“Lost dog?” Kenji asked, crouching.

“No,” Yui said with wonder. “Lucky dog.”

Don knelt, scratching behind the pup’s ears. “A fellow traveler. Just like us.”

The Shiba barked once, happily, and fell into step beside them.

“We’ll call him Mochi,” Don announced. “Round, sweet, and full of spirit.”

Mochi wagged his tail, clearly satisfied with the name.

Together, they walked—the stray dog, the pink maid, the livestreaming squire, and the American knight of delusion—toward whatever the day held next.

By the time they reached the gymnasium, Donki’s trench coat was flapping like a battle flag and his wig—purchased from a gacha machine that morning—tilted precariously to one side. The NeoKami Anime Festival was real after all, just postponed and relocated, held now in a converted junior high on the outer edge of Tokyo.

Yui squeezed his arm as they approached. “You okay, Donki-san?”

“I was born for this,” he replied.

Inside, the scene was far humbler than he imagined: folding tables, booths of handmade figurines, faded posters taped to walls. But to Donki, it was sacred ground.

He stood before it all, arms wide.

“Raijin,” he whispered to no one, “I’ve come home.”

Kenji signed them up for the cosplay contest without asking. “You have fans now,” he shrugged. “Might as well give them closure.”

The contest was held in the gym’s multipurpose room beneath a string of blinking fairy lights. Contestants ranged from elaborate professionals to chaotic amateurs in duct-taped cardboard. Donki took the stage near the end.

He bowed. Then stood tall.

“I am Donki of the Anime Cloud,” he declared, “sword-bearer of soft justice, loyal servant of Raijin Yagami, and humble guest of your luminous land.”

There was a beat of silence.

Then a roar of applause.

He didn’t win first place. A twelve-year-old dressed as a cursed rice cooker did. But Donki placed third—enough for a plastic trophy and a gift card to a 24-hour soba stand.

Afterward, as the crowd dispersed and the fluorescent lights buzzed to half-power, the trio wandered back through the darkening city, the sky glowing with light pollution and promise.

Yui linked her arm through Donki’s again.

“Today very good,” she said. “Like episode with big heart.”

Kenji shrugged, then smiled. “You made Tokyo more fun. Like … real-life anime.”

Mochi nudged Don’s leg in a show of affection.

Donki looked down at his scuffed boots, the hem of his fraying cloak, and the Pikachu sticker someone had slapped on his shoulder during the contest. A man alone in the world who had come looking for cartoons and found a mission.

“No one back home would believe any of this,” he said.

“That’s okay,” Yui whispered. “We believe.”

He stopped. The sidewalk gleamed from a light drizzle. In the window of a closed electronics store, their reflections stood side by side—gaudy, mismatched, faintly ridiculous.

And yet … whole.

Posted May 10, 2025
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