๐•ฟ๐–๐–Š ๐•ป๐–†๐–ˆ๐–๐–†๐–Œ๐–Š

Written in response to: A package arrives at your characterโ€™s house, but they didnโ€™t order anything. Write about what happens next.... view prompt

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Horror Mystery

Today I was asked who I am. I am a boy with a beautiful mind, in the body of a man with an ugly face.ย 

People donโ€™t see me in my town. Here, I am a ghost and a phantom. Some think I am the spirit of some lost villainous soul. Others think I am a guardian angel that looks out for them. In reality, I have no idea. What I do know is that when weird things happen, I am almost 100% always involved with it. The reasons behind this are, as far as Iโ€™ve seen, unexplainable. Not stating that I know the reasons as to why this happens but simply stating that I couldn't begin to understand why.ย ย 

I have been wishing to reveal myself online for over a year, so that I might be able to share some of my mysterious and sometimes horrendous and horrifying tales. Some may call me crazy but I call myself someone who isnโ€™t in denial. Crazy things happen to everyone. โ€œSaneโ€ is just thinking that the crazy things didnโ€™t happen and continuing with your life as if a mysterious package didnโ€™t show up on your doorstep with a strange item inside.ย 

This happened to me earlier this week.ย 

I never saw who placed the box on my doorstep but it had a peculiar label on it which I will get to later, but the peculiar thing is that 6 other people (all under 18 like me) received mysterious packages as well.ย 

I looked at the item for a second, blinked, and then it was gone. The item was a cube. I looked all over my house for it. I live alone because the two people who I share DNA with live in Japan and fund my life so that they can be billionaire party people which allows me to live my supernatural and mysterious life as I wish. I found the box among a pile of other strange things but when I found it the box had been opened. I have no idea who put that box at my door but whoever did wanted me dead because the thing in the cube was worse than you could imagine. People have treated me like I am worthless and nothing but yet I wouldnโ€™t unleash that thing on anyone. Even the devil couldnโ€™t handle this atrocious monstrosity. It had many eyes that sprung from its body on tentacles, it had seven mouths, and it was a male (donโ€™t ask how I know because Iโ€™d rather not say). It kept growing, and growing, even though it wasnโ€™t eating anything. It started out smaller than my pinky but within minutes it was as big as my leonberger named Dorothy.ย 

THEN IT TRIED TO EAT MY DOG!ย 

No one messes with Dorothy.ย 

So I ran into the kitchen pantry and pulled out my favorite bludgeon and a bag of salt. The creature was fast, it bolted from wall to wall. I have no idea what it was but whatever it was it was destroying my home. I ran into my room with Dorothy and locked the door to figure out a plan.ย 

And no, itโ€™s not weird that my best friend is a dog named after a beloved book character. Itโ€™s just that, sheโ€™s the only one who sees me. My parents didnโ€™t want me but their consciences made them feel bad so they dumped me here and kept sending me checks because they donโ€™t care about me enough to treat me as more than just another bill to pay! Honestly, I wouldnโ€™t be surprised if they sent the package themselves. Maybe they finally got tired of paying for my existence and decided to try and kill me once and for all!ย 

Anyway, after conversing with my canine compatriot, I put the plan into action. I would tell you what I did, but for all I know, the person who sent that thing could be among the intelligent, creative, and beautiful people here. I have viewed this community for a long time and today I become a part of it. The life I live is full of danger and darkness. I have done evil things but I am not an evil man. Not anymore at least. I am hoping that for the first time in my life, this ghost might be seen for a person instead of a victim or a phantom or someone to hurt. I am of no threat to any of you, I value a strong mind and a kind heart more than anything. I donโ€™t want your sympathy. All I want is your community. All I want is the possibility of community. Now, some of you may realize that my name, Jackson Crisis, is a pen name. I have reasons for this. I have been hunted and bullied by many. Iโ€™d rather not give these people any information they can use to either find me or torture me while I say what I wish.ย 

That box was just someoneโ€™s twisted way of tormenting me. Although it does not make sense because they must have realized that when they gave me the note that said โ€œDo Not Openโ€, that I would survive. Though 4 out of the other 6 kids died from those things. I bet they just did that so it wouldnโ€™t be just me.ย 

I just have always had this dream of writing something truly bone chilling (they say write what you know and thatโ€™s all I know) and sharing it with the world. Perhaps that dream could be achieved. And perhaps one of you could help me write it. I know you donโ€™t know me, but it would mean the world to me if you would accept me as one of you and if you would talk to me like a person would in real life because this is the only community I have and I want to experience it as much as I can please. Wow, that was a really long sentence.

I look forward to communication and relation with you all. I hope I donโ€™t scare you too much!

Horrifyingly,

๐”.๐•ฎ.

November 28, 2021 03:37

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Dhwani Jain
03:49 Nov 29, 2021

Hello!

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Jack Crisis
04:02 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ณ๐–Š๐–‘๐–‘๐–”.

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Dhwani Jain
04:17 Nov 29, 2021

Who are you? And why do you use such a WeIrD font?

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Jack Crisis
14:05 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ด ๐–†๐–’ ๐–† ๐–’๐–ž๐–˜๐–™๐–Š๐–—๐–ž. ๐•ป๐–Š๐–—๐–๐–†๐–•๐–˜ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–ˆ๐–”๐–š๐–‘๐–‰ ๐–†๐–™๐–™๐–Š๐–’๐–•๐–™ ๐–™๐–” ๐–‹๐–Ž๐–Œ๐–š๐–—๐–Š ๐–’๐–Š ๐–”๐–š๐–™. ๐•ป๐–Š๐–—๐–๐–†๐–•๐–˜ ๐•ด ๐–‰๐–”๐–“'๐–™ ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–˜๐– ๐–™๐–” ๐–ˆ๐–”๐–“๐–‹๐–”๐–—๐–’ ๐–™๐–” ๐–™๐–๐–Š ๐–“๐–”๐–—๐–’๐–†๐–‘๐–ˆ๐–ž ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–† ๐–ˆ๐–”๐–’๐–’๐–”๐–“ ๐–‹๐–”๐–“๐–™. ๐•ฌ๐–“๐–‰ ๐–•๐–Š๐–—๐–๐–†๐–•๐–˜ ๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–‹๐–”๐–“๐–™ ๐–—๐–Š๐–‹๐–‘๐–Š๐–ˆ๐–™๐–˜ ๐–† ๐–•๐–†๐–—๐–™ ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–’๐–Š. ๐•ฏ๐–Ž๐–‰ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐– ๐–†๐–‡๐–”๐–š๐–™ ๐–™๐–๐–†๐–™?

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Dhwani Jain
02:03 Dec 01, 2021

Um, but there is a comment of yours in normal font. And tell me, is it really worth it, typing all replies, copying it and then pasting them?

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Jack Crisis
12:44 Dec 01, 2021

๐•บ๐–“ ๐–™๐–๐–Š ๐–ˆ๐–”๐–“๐–™๐–—๐–†๐–—๐–ž, ๐•ด ๐–๐–†๐–›๐–Š ๐–™๐–๐–Š ๐–‹๐–”๐–“๐–™ ๐–‰๐–”๐–œ๐–“๐–‘๐–”๐–†๐–‰๐–Š๐–‰ ๐–™๐–” ๐–’๐–ž ๐–๐–Š๐–ž๐–›๐–”๐–†๐–—๐–‰. ๐•ด ๐–‰๐–”๐–“'๐–™ ๐–๐–†๐–›๐–Š ๐–™๐–” ๐–ˆ๐–”๐–•๐–ž ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐–•๐–†๐–˜๐–™๐–Š ๐–†๐–“๐–ž๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ

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TJ Squared
20:23 Nov 28, 2021

Wow lol sure does make for a great story, especially if you happen to like Thrillers and whatnot :D Welcome, I must say. Maybe if you wrote something about you in your bio, people could understand more about you :) I like the mYsTeRiOuS vIbEs that you give off for some reason, Jack (if I may call you that). I'm Wolf Warrior, but you can call me Wolfie or any other nickname that you may come up with. I'm excited to read more of your stories :DDD

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Jack Crisis
20:38 Nov 28, 2021

๐–„๐–Š๐–˜, ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–’๐–†๐–ž ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–’๐–Š ๐–‡๐–ž ๐–’๐–ž ๐–“๐–†๐–’๐–Š. ๐•ด๐–“ ๐–‹๐–†๐–ˆ๐–™, ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–’๐–†๐–ž ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–’๐–Š ๐–œ๐–๐–†๐–™๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–˜๐–. ๐•ด ๐–†๐–’ ๐–†๐–‘๐–˜๐–” ๐–‹๐–”๐–“๐–‰ ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–’๐–ž๐–˜๐–™๐–Š๐–—๐–Ž๐–”๐–š๐–˜ ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘๐–š๐–—๐–Š ๐–™๐–๐–†๐–™ ๐•ด ๐–˜๐–Š๐–Š๐–’ ๐–™๐–” ๐–๐–†๐–›๐–Š ๐–”๐–“ ๐–•๐–Š๐–”๐–•๐–‘๐–Š. ๐–‚๐–๐–†๐–™ ๐–œ๐–”๐–š๐–‘๐–‰ ๐•ด ๐–•๐–š๐–™ ๐–Ž๐–“ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–‡๐–Ž๐–” ๐–™๐–๐–†๐–™ ๐–œ๐–”๐–š๐–‘๐–‰ ๐–‡๐–Š ๐–Œ๐–”๐–”๐–‰ ๐–Š๐–“๐–”๐–š๐–Œ๐–? ๐•ด ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–“ ๐–“๐–”๐–™ ๐–œ๐–†๐–Ž๐–™ ๐–™๐–” ๐–๐–Š๐–†๐–— ๐–‹๐–—๐–”๐–’ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–†๐–Œ๐–†๐–Ž๐–“, ๐•ด๐–“๐–™๐–”๐–’๐–‡๐–Ž ๐–„๐–Š๐–Ÿ๐–Ž๐–’๐–•๐–Ž๐–˜๐–Ž. -๐”.๐•ฎ.

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TJ Squared
21:56 Nov 28, 2021

Okay :D Well, maybe some facts about you or smth or a message you want people to read or idk itโ€™s your bio, you can do whatever you like lol Thatโ€™s an interesting phrase you added there, what does it mean?

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Jack Crisis
23:36 Nov 28, 2021

๐•ด๐–™ ๐–’๐–Š๐–†๐–“๐–˜ "๐•ฒ๐–Ž๐–—๐–‘ ๐•บ๐–‹ ๐•ฟ๐–๐–Š ๐–‚๐–”๐–‘๐–›๐–Š๐–˜." ๐•ด ๐–’๐–Š๐–†๐–“, ๐•ด ๐–†๐–˜๐–˜๐–š๐–’๐–Š ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–†๐–—๐–Š ๐–† ๐–‹๐–Š๐–’๐–†๐–‘๐–Š. ๐•ธ๐–ž ๐–†๐–•๐–•๐–”๐–‘๐–”๐–Œ๐–Ž๐–Š๐–˜ ๐–Ž๐–‹ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–†๐–—๐–Š ๐–“๐–”๐–™.

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TJ Squared
23:43 Nov 28, 2021

I am. Thatโ€™s cool! I donโ€™t want to assume anything, but are you a boy?

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Jack Crisis
02:13 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ด ๐–‰๐–Ž๐–‰ ๐–˜๐–†๐–ž ๐–˜๐–” ๐–Ž๐–“ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–˜๐–™๐–”๐–—๐–ž. ๐•ด ๐–†๐–’ ๐–† 16 ๐–ž๐–Š๐–†๐–— ๐–”๐–‘๐–‰ ๐–‡๐–”๐–ž.

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13:50 Nov 29, 2021

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Jack Crisis
14:07 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š, ๐–’๐–†๐–๐–Š๐–˜๐–™๐–Ž๐–ˆ ๐–‰๐–—๐–†๐–Œ๐–”๐–“ ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–™๐–๐–Š ๐–๐–Š๐–†๐–›๐–Š๐–“๐–˜. ๐•ด ๐–†๐–•๐–”๐–‘๐–”๐–Œ๐–Ž๐–Ÿ๐–Š ๐–Ž๐–‹ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–œ๐–”๐–—๐–‰๐–๐–“๐–Œ ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–œ๐–—๐–Ž๐–™๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–‰๐–Ž๐–‹๐–‹๐–Ž๐–ˆ๐–š๐–‘๐–™ ๐–™๐–” ๐–š๐–“๐–‰๐–Š๐–—๐–˜๐–™๐–†๐–“๐–‰, ๐–‡๐–š๐–™ ๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–Ž๐–“๐–‰๐–Ž๐–›๐–Ž๐–‰๐–š๐–†๐–‘ ๐–‹๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ๐–Š๐–—๐–•๐–—๐–Ž๐–“๐–™ ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐–˜๐–™๐–ž๐–‘๐–Š. ๐•ด๐–™'๐–˜ ๐–š๐–“๐–Ž๐––๐–š๐–Š ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐•ด ๐–‘๐–Ž๐–๐–Š ๐–Ž๐–™. ๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–‹๐–”๐–— ๐–—๐–Š๐–†๐–ˆ๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐–”๐–š๐–™ ๐–™๐–” ๐–’๐–Š.

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14:22 Nov 29, 2021

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Jack Crisis
14:28 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–‡๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š. ๐–„๐–”๐–š๐–— ๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–‰ ๐–œ๐–”๐–—๐–‰๐–˜ ๐–œ๐–†๐–—๐–’ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–๐–Š๐–†๐–—๐–™ ๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–“ ๐–Ž๐–“ ๐–™๐–๐–๐–˜ ๐–‹๐–—๐–Š๐–Š๐–Ÿ๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–“๐–™๐–Š๐–— ๐–œ๐–Š ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–‘๐–Ž๐–‹๐–Š. ๐–„๐–”๐–š ๐–’๐–†๐–ž ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–’๐–Š ๐”๐–†๐–ˆ๐– ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐–Ž๐–™ ๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–›๐–Š๐–—๐–ž ๐–“๐–Ž๐–ˆ๐–Š ๐–™๐–” ๐–’๐–Š๐–Š๐–™ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–™๐–”๐–”.

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14:29 Nov 29, 2021

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Jack Crisis
01:58 Dec 05, 2021

๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š. ๐–๐–Š๐–—๐–ž ๐–•๐–‘๐–Š๐–†๐–˜๐–Š๐–‰ ๐–™๐–” ๐–’๐–Š๐–Š๐–™ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐•ฌ๐–‡๐–Ž๐–Œ๐–†๐–Ž๐–‘. ๐•ฌ๐–•๐–”๐–‘๐–”๐–Œ๐–Ž๐–Š๐–˜ ๐–‹๐–”๐–— ๐–™๐–†๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐–˜๐–” ๐–‘๐–”๐–“๐–Œ ๐–™๐–” ๐–—๐–Š๐–˜๐–•๐–”๐–“๐–‰.

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00:38 Nov 29, 2021

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Jack Crisis
02:23 Nov 29, 2021

๐•ด'๐–›๐–Š ๐–“๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–๐–Š๐–†๐–—๐–‰ ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–˜ "๐–˜๐–๐–—๐–Ž๐–‡๐–‡๐–‘๐–Ÿ" ๐–‡๐–š๐–™ ๐•ด ๐–๐–†๐–›๐–Š ๐–๐–Š๐–†๐–—๐–‰ ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–†๐–“๐–‰ ๐•ด'๐–›๐–Š ๐–—๐–Š๐–†๐–‰ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š๐–— ๐–˜๐–™๐–š๐–‹๐–‹. ๐–„๐–”๐–š๐–— ๐–†๐–’๐–†๐–Ÿ๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐–œ๐–”๐–—๐– ๐–Ž๐–Ÿ ๐–˜๐–”๐–’๐–Š๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–Œ ๐•ด ๐–œ๐–”๐–š๐–‘๐–‰ ๐–•๐–Š๐–—๐–˜๐–”๐–“๐–†๐–‘๐–‘๐–ž ๐–‘๐–”๐–›๐–Š ๐–™๐–” ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–™๐–“๐–Š๐–˜๐–˜ ๐–’๐–”๐–—๐–Š ๐–”๐–‹ ๐–Ž๐–‹ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–‰๐–Š๐–ˆ๐–Ž๐–‰๐–Š ๐–™๐–” ๐–‡๐–‘๐–Š๐–˜๐–˜ ๐–š๐–˜ ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–™๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š๐–— ๐–œ๐–”๐–“๐–‰๐–Š๐–—๐–”๐–š๐–˜ ๐–œ๐–”๐–—๐–‰๐–˜ ๐–˜๐–”๐–’๐–Š ๐–’๐–”๐–—๐–Š.

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Jack Crisis
14:08 Nov 29, 2021

๐•น๐–”, ๐–™๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–„๐•บ๐–€.

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Jack Crisis
00:48 Nov 30, 2021

๐–„๐–•๐–š ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–“ ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–’๐–Š ๐–œ๐–๐–†๐–™๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–ž๐–”๐–š'๐–‰ ๐–‘๐–Ž๐–๐–Š. ๐•ด'๐–‰ ๐–‘๐–”๐–›๐–Š ๐–‹๐–”๐–— ๐–˜๐–”๐–’๐–Š๐–”๐–“๐–Š ๐–™๐–” ๐–Œ๐–Ž๐–›๐–Š ๐–’๐–Š ๐–† ๐–“๐–Ž๐–ˆ๐–๐–“๐–†๐–’๐–Š. ๐•ด'๐–›๐–Š ๐–“๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–๐–†๐–‰ ๐–† ๐–“๐–Ž๐–ˆ๐–๐–“๐–†๐–’๐–Š ๐–‡๐–Š๐–‹๐–”๐–—๐–Š.

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Felix Thorne
15:08 Dec 26, 2021

Woah, great first submission! I really loved the vocabulary you used and the way it seems almost like the person could be someone I know but the memory seems to slip through my fingers (or maybe it's just me, I don't know lol, I'm a mystery unto myself) Would love to read some of your other works if you're up to it! Have a great day and take care! :)

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Jack Crisis
20:51 Dec 26, 2021

Thank you, it feels so refreshing to receive a critique from a graduate of hogwarts, even if youโ€™re a griffindore

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Felix Thorne
21:18 Dec 26, 2021

I'm having a bit of a dilemma to be honest, not sure whether to keep supporting harry potter or not, considering what the author did. What do you say? :) And that's where you're wrong :)

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Jack Crisis
00:35 Dec 29, 2021

What did she do? Youโ€™re not a filthy grifendore?

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Felix Thorne
19:29 Jan 16, 2022

No sir, you can guess what house I am in if you wish however :)

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Jack Crisis
12:46 Jan 20, 2022

Ravenclaw?

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Drei Etsocal
10:30 Dec 14, 2021

Roller coaster but..I wish I could write so beautifully and expressively like you..๐Ÿ˜Š KUDOS dude..you're frigging awesome ๐Ÿ˜

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Jack Crisis
12:35 Dec 14, 2021

Thank you. I do not understand the meaning of โ€œkudosโ€, but given your emojis I am inferring that it is a good thing.

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Drei Etsocal
12:57 Dec 14, 2021

It means praise.

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I like this story. Your writing has character and is very original. I do hope you'll write more! (I filled out your form, by the way!)

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Whelp, two seconds after I submitted the form, I realized I didn't finish one of my responses..... *ashamed*

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Jack Crisis
01:58 Dec 10, 2021

Lol, thanks! Iโ€™m glad you think so.

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Hi Jack. This was a great story and gave away so many emotions. I truly enjoyed reading this, and I'm sure your very talented. You should definitely keep writing because u have talent! You are surely very unique and bring a charm to the Reedsy community, and surely you are accepted in this community for who you are.

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Jack Crisis
19:15 Dec 01, 2021

๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š. ๐•ด ๐–‰๐–” ๐–“๐–”๐–™ ๐–‰๐–Š๐–˜๐–Š๐–—๐–›๐–Š ๐–˜๐–š๐–ˆ๐– ๐–๐–Ž๐–“๐–‰ ๐–œ๐–”๐–—๐–‰๐–˜.

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Of course! And for sure you do:)) I love ur font btw, its really my style. Oh, and if possible could u read my story. It's not as good as yours, but it would mean a lot.

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Aiden Otaktay
10:40 Nov 30, 2021

Wonderful story, Jack! I look forward to reading more of your stories and I really like your writing style.

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Jack Crisis
02:00 Dec 05, 2021

๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–›๐–Š๐–—๐–ž ๐–’๐–š๐–ˆ๐–. ๐•ด ๐–ˆ๐–†๐–“ ๐–“๐–”๐–™ ๐–œ๐–†๐–Ž๐–™ ๐–™๐–” ๐–—๐–Š๐–†๐–‰ ๐–ž๐–”๐–š๐–— ๐–˜๐–™๐–”๐–—๐–Ž๐–Š๐–˜.

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Philia S
03:47 Nov 30, 2021

Hey Jack! This is a wonderful story! I love your writing style, it's kinda intriguing and keeps the reader wanting more. Will we get more of this story/anecdote? :)

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Jack Crisis
01:59 Dec 05, 2021

๐•ณ๐–Š๐–‘๐–‘๐–” ๐•ป๐–๐–Ž๐–‘๐–‘๐–†. ๐•ฟ๐–๐–†๐–“๐– ๐–ž๐–”๐–š. ๐–‚๐–๐–†๐–™ ๐–‰๐–” ๐–ž๐–”๐–š ๐–’๐–Š๐–†๐–“?

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Philia S
05:26 Dec 05, 2021

I mean will we get a sequel. You know, like a series?

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Jack Crisis
02:47 Dec 06, 2021

๐•ฌ๐–, ๐•ด ๐–˜๐–Š๐–Š. ๐•ด ๐–œ๐–Ž๐–‘๐–‘ ๐–‹๐–—๐–Š๐––๐–š๐–Š๐–“๐–™๐–‘๐–ž ๐–†๐–•๐–•๐–Š๐–†๐–— ๐–Ž๐–“ ๐–’๐–ž ๐–˜๐–™๐–”๐–—๐–Ž๐–Š๐–˜, ๐–‡๐–š๐–™ ๐–œ๐–Š ๐–’๐–†๐–ž ๐–“๐–Š๐–›๐–Š๐–— ๐–๐–“๐–”๐–œ ๐–œ๐–๐–” ๐–˜๐–Š๐–“๐–™ ๐–’๐–Š ๐–™๐–๐–†๐–™ ๐–•๐–†๐–ˆ๐–๐–†๐–Œ๐–Š.

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John Del Rio
16:38 Nov 29, 2021

Well written first submission Jack. I like that you showed more than you told. I look forward to hearing more about your life and experiences and invite you to read and share your thoughts on my entries in this community. Have a great day and an even better Holiday Season.

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TJ Squared
13:24 Jan 02, 2022

Hey Jack! I just wanted to wish you a Happy New Year! I hope youโ€™re doing alright and I miss talking with you <3

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TJ Squared
01:46 Dec 17, 2021

Hey Jack, how have you been lately?

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Jack Crisis
03:25 Dec 17, 2021

Iโ€™ve been sad. A lot is happening in my life so I have considered taking a break

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TJ Squared
03:33 Dec 17, 2021

I understand you in that aspect. I hope itโ€™ll get better for you eventually <3

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Jack Crisis
17:09 Dec 16, 2021

Then I am certain we shall enjoy each other.

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Jack Crisis
03:24 Dec 17, 2021

Possibly

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Delia Tomkus
21:40 Dec 10, 2021

I love the way you write, but I must admit that the story was a little hard to follow. Definitely good though, keep and eye out for my first story(if I ever get it to sound right)

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Aman Fatima
08:00 Dec 03, 2021

Great story. I truly enjoyed reading it. :)

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TJ Squared
04:00 Dec 02, 2021

heyyy Jack! I see you've made a bio for yourself, that's coolio! :) how's life going for you?

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Victor .
13:38 Nov 30, 2021

Hello, crisis of Jack.

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Jack Crisis
03:04 Dec 08, 2021

If I didnโ€™t hurt her, then who did and why is all this drama happening at once?

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Jack Crisis
12:45 Dec 08, 2021

I just wish there was something I could do. And I feel like even if there was something I could do then if I try to make things better Iโ€™ll just make things worse.

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