Submitted to: Contest #292

The Canvas That Hungered

Written in response to: "Center your story around a mysterious painting."

Fantasy Mystery Thriller

The Canvas That Hungered written by HAWEYA OSMAN


The town of Eldermere had always been a place of quiet oddities—where the cobblestone streets whispered secrets, and the air carried the scent of forgotten dreams. It was a town where stories did not fade; they settled in the cracks of old buildings and the hush of wind through empty streets. It was here that Alice found herself once more, sitting across from Sylva in the dim glow of the café.

Alice had never wanted to return to Eldermere. It held too many memories, too many ghosts. But she had no choice. Not after the letter arrived. Not after she saw Sebastian’s familiar scrawl, shaky yet unmistakable. He was calling her back.

Beside her, Sylva tightened her grip on the crumpled letter, its ink smudged by nervous fingers. Sylva had always been the braver one, the one who chased the unknown rather than shrinking from it. But even she hesitated now, her violet eyes darting between Alice and the worn paper on the table between them.

“Are we really doing this?” Sylva whispered.

Alice exhaled, a shiver trailing down her spine. “We have to.”

The café hummed with the low murmur of conversations, the clink of cups against saucers. But to Alice, it all felt distant, as if the world had begun to tilt toward something unseen. The letter had changed everything.

A deep unease coiled in Alice’s gut, but she reached for the parchment again, smoothing its creases with trembling fingers. The inked words felt heavier this time, like a whispered plea lingering between the lines.

You finally came.

The letters swirled, shifting ever so slightly as if they were still drying. Alice’s breath caught in her throat. Had they just moved?

Sylva saw it too. Her hand clutched Alice’s wrist. “Alice,” she whispered, “I think... I think he’s watching.”

Outside, the streetlights flickered.

A shadow passed by the window, lingering just long enough for Alice to notice—but when she turned, there was nothing there. Nothing but the reflection of the café, warped slightly in the glass. And yet, there—among the silhouettes of the patrons, two figures sat frozen mid-motion, mirroring Alice and Sylva’s own hesitation.

Then, one of the reflections blinked.

Sylva gasped, stumbling back in her chair, nearly knocking over her untouched tea. The café seemed to dim, the air thick with something unseen yet suffocating. Alice’s pulse roared in her ears. She knew, then, why Sebastian had disappeared. Why his final masterpiece had remained unfinished.

Because the canvas did not capture beauty. It devoured it.

A quiet voice broke the tension. “Alice.”

A third person stood near their table, barely noticeable in the dim light. His name was Elias—a childhood friend they had long forgotten, or rather, one who had faded into the town’s strange silence. He was pale, his sharp features framed by unkempt black curls, his presence carrying the scent of turpentine and dust. There was something about the way he looked at them, something knowing.

“You got the letter, too,” he said, though it wasn’t a question.

Alice swallowed. “You know about it?”

“I was there when he painted it,” Elias murmured. “I told him to stop.”

Sylva stiffened. “You knew?”

Elias hesitated. “I didn’t think it would last this long.”

A flicker of movement—Sylva’s reflection, or was it hers?—trapped behind the glass.

The café hummed on, oblivious.

A faint echo of Alice’s voice hung in the air, distorted, as though carried through water. "Sylva... don’t look."

But Sylva did. And as her eyes locked onto the window, she saw something new: a third figure, standing just behind Alice.

Not painted. Not yet.

The café lights flickered.

The reflection sighed.

A cold whisper curled around Sylva’s ear, not from Sebastian, not from Alice, but from the glass itself.

"There is always room for one more."

The air grew thick, the scent of oil paint suffocating. The figures in the window shifted again—Sylva could see them now, their eyes pleading, reaching out as though they could still be pulled free.

A choice. A trap. A sacrifice.

Elias reached forward, voice tight. “It won’t stop. Not unless—”

The words never finished. The café trembled, a low hum vibrating through the walls, as if the very fabric of reality was fraying.

Sylva turned to Alice—only to find her staring, unblinking, at the reflection. Frozen.

“Alice!” Sylva reached for her, but her fingers passed through air. Through mist. Through something that was no longer solid.

Alice’s lips moved soundlessly. Her reflection inside the glass trembled.

Then, before Sylva could scream, the window swallowed the light.

The café stood as it always had.

Only the reflection remained, still shifting, its colors richer than before.

And this time, it held three figures.

Sylva’s breath came in ragged gasps. Her hand was still outstretched, her fingertips tingling with the sensation of reaching for someone who was no longer there. The patrons in the café continued their idle conversations, unaware. The world had not changed, and yet everything had.

She turned back to the glass. Alice’s reflection was still there. So was Elias’s. But Alice and Elias were gone.

Sylva pressed a shaking hand to the window. The reflections mirrored her. They looked the same, but something was wrong. The eyes were too dark, the expressions too serene.

And then—

Alice smiled.

Not a smile of recognition. Not a smile of warmth. But something else. Something knowing.

Sylva staggered back, heart hammering, bile rising in her throat. She could still feel Alice’s presence, but it was not in the chair across from her. It was behind the glass, staring back, waiting.

Waiting for what?

A weight settled in Sylva’s lap. The letter.

The ink had changed again.

One final message, scrawled beneath Sebastian’s familiar script.

Paint with me.

The café doors swung open with a gust of wind, rattling the cups on their saucers. The scent of oil paint flooded Sylva’s senses, thick and suffocating.

The lights flickered once more.

Then, everything went dark.


Posted Mar 04, 2025
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02:30 Mar 06, 2025

thank you i appreciate

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Kevin Keegan
14:36 Mar 04, 2025

So much to like about this story. It drew me in right from the first line and the way you describe scenes is very impressive. I also liked the tension building which is paced evenly throughout. I think it’s an excellent story.

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15:58 Mar 13, 2025

Thank you I love your work too

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Kevin Keegan
17:01 Mar 13, 2025

Thank you very much, I try.

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21:13 Mar 10, 2025

I liked the imagery that you used throughout, and you did a great job with the uncanniness of the reflection, as well as the suspense. This was an engaging read.

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15:57 Mar 13, 2025

Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it

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