The grand ballroom shimmered with golden light, every corner aglow from chandeliers dripping with crystal. The party was in full swing, the hum of laughter and clinking glasses filling the air. It was the social event of the season, hosted by the enigmatic Lady Rosamund in her sprawling estate atop Blackwood Hill. Everyone who was anyone had received an invitation, each gilded card inscribed with the promise of a night of revelry, mystery, and grandeur.
But no one had expected the stranger.
The figure appeared at the entrance just as the clock struck ten. They wore a mask, not unlike the other guests—it was, after all, a masquerade.
But while the others adorned themselves with whimsical creations of lace and feathers, the stranger’s mask was simple: a featureless, smooth porcelain that gleamed in the candlelight.
Their attire was equally curious. A fitted, jet-black suit with no adornments, no embellishments, as if they had stepped out of another world entirely. Even their shoes made no sound on the polished marble floor as they strode into the room.
At first, no one paid them much mind. The champagne was flowing, the orchestra played a lively waltz, and the gossip of who was courting whom consumed the chatter of the crowd. But slowly, the mood began to shift.
“I don’t recognize them,” murmured Lady Harrington to her friend, fanning herself nervously as her gaze followed the masked figure across the room.
“Neither do I,” replied her companion. “But surely Rosamund knows them?”
Yet even Lady Rosamund, radiant in her silver gown, seemed perplexed.
She was the consummate hostess, her circle of acquaintances vast and meticulously curated. For someone to attend her party uninvited was unheard of.
The stranger moved with unsettling grace, weaving through the crowd without hesitation. Wherever they went, conversations faltered. Guests turned to glance over their shoulders, their laughter dimming as unease crept in. And yet, no one approached them.
It wasn’t until the orchestra began a haunting, lilting melody that something truly strange occurred.
The masked stranger extended a hand to a young woman, Clara Sinclair, whose beauty was the subject of much admiration that evening. She hesitated, her hand trembling slightly as she placed it in theirs. They stepped onto the dance floor, and as they moved, the room fell silent.
The waltz was mesmerizing. Clara and the stranger moved as though in perfect harmony, their steps flawless, almost otherworldly. The air grew thick, the golden glow of the ballroom dimming as shadows seemed to lengthen across the walls. The guests watched, transfixed, as though caught in a spell.
When the music ended, Clara stumbled back, her face pale, her breathing uneven. She opened her mouth as if to speak, but no words came. The stranger bowed deeply, then turned and walked toward the exit.
“Wait!” Lady Rosamund called, her voice slicing through the silence. “Who are you?”
The stranger paused at the threshold, their back to the crowd. Slowly, they turned their head, the porcelain mask catching the light.
In a voice that seemed to echo unnaturally, they spoke:
"A guest."
And then, they were gone.
The doors swung shut behind them, and for a moment, no one moved.
Then, as if a spell had broken, the room erupted in frantic whispers. Clara collapsed into a nearby chair, trembling, her face pale as death.
“What did they say to you?” Lady Rosamund demanded, kneeling beside her.
Clara looked up, her eyes wide and filled with tears. Her voice was barely a whisper.
“They didn’t say anything,” she murmured. “But I know them. I know them from my dreams.”
And that night, as she lay in bed, her heart pounding, she swore she could hear the faint strains of a waltz growing louder, as if the melody was coming from just outside her bedroom window. She hesitated, clutching the covers tightly around her. Surely, it was just her imagination—or perhaps the remnants of a dream.
But the music didn’t fade. Instead, it seemed to beckon her. Against her better judgment, she slipped out of bed, her bare feet silent on the wooden floor. She moved to the window, her hands trembling as she drew back the curtain.
The figure in the porcelain mask stood in the garden below.
Clara’s breath caught in her throat. They were motionless, their face turned up toward her window, their smooth, featureless mask glinting in the moonlight.
A cold shiver ran down her spine, but before she could scream, she noticed something even more terrifying: the mask was cracked. Hairline fractures ran across the porcelain surface, and through them, she could see eyes—her own eyes—staring back at her.
“No,” she whispered, stumbling backward.
Her room was suddenly filled with the sound of the waltz, growing louder and louder until it drowned out her own thoughts. The air became heavy, oppressive, and she felt an invisible force pulling her toward the mirror on the far wall.
As she approached, her reflection seemed off. The version of her in the glass moved independently, tilting its head, smiling faintly, even as Clara’s face remained frozen in terror.
“Who are you?” she managed to whisper.
The reflection didn’t answer. Instead, it reached up and placed its hands on the glass from the inside, as though trying to push through. Clara stumbled back, but it was too late—the mirror shattered, shards exploding outward.
In the silence that followed, Clara found herself standing in the ballroom once more. The party was in full swing, the golden chandeliers sparkling, the crowd laughing and drinking as if nothing had happened.
But no one noticed her.
She called out, but her voice didn’t carry. She tried to touch a guest’s shoulder, but her hand passed through them as though she were a ghost.
And then, she saw herself.
Across the room, Clara stood by Lady Rosamund, radiant in her gown, chatting with the other guests. Her movements were fluid, her laughter bright—yet it wasn’t her. It was something else wearing her face.
And standing beside her was the masked stranger.
Their mask was flawless once again, no longer cracked. They turned their head toward Clara, the empty, smooth surface seeming to stare directly at her. Slowly, they raised a finger to their lips, as if to shush her.
Clara tried to scream, but the sound was swallowed by the waltz, which swelled and echoed endlessly in her ears.
She was trapped. And she realized, with growing dread, that she wasn’t a guest at the party anymore. She was part of it. Forever.
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Starting with the first paragraph you paint a vivid picture. Your descriptions are great and you create an ominous atmosphere. I thought the flow and writing were crisp. I was a little confused by your use of pronouns initially but that just may be me. Overall, good story and excellent writing.
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Thank you 🥰
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Beautifully written!! Love it!
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Thank you!
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