At dawn, Joshua followed the edges of the meadow, keeping close to the line of trees where he could vanish if danger stirred; dew jeweled the grass; spider silk caught the first light like fine wire. He carried no weapon; the oaks and maples stood thick, easy to climb, and Theron, the red‑shouldered hawk, kept watch above; the hawk’s shadow ran before him like a dark seam stitched into the green.
The morning smelled of crushed goldenrod and damp bark; somewhere a creek worked over stones; the air tasted faintly of iron. Joshua flexed his fingers; the ridges of old calluses rasped against one another; his breath stayed low and steady.
Halfway along the meadow’s rim, Theron wheeled hard, and an image struck Joshua’s mind; not words; a vision sharpened by fear. A ripple moving where no wind blew; dry grass pressed flat by unseen bodies; dun forms sliding low; a hiss rising like a cracked pipe. Ghouls.
Joshua climbed without thinking; bark roughened his palms; wood thrummed under his weight. From a forked branch he saw the truth of the warning; the meadow swayed although the leaves held still; the line of light grayish-brown pressed forward; the hiss lifted and fell like steam.
A softer sound reached him; steady; unafraid. A mourning dove cooed from down the wide branch; the dull rose of his breast caught a thread of light; his mate sat on a nest tucked against a fork in the branch. “Coo‑ah coo‑coo‑coo.” The calls were low and even, tender as breath.
The ghouls faltered. Their pale heads tilted; mouths worked without sound; one stumbled, then another. The hiss wavered; the line broke; a beat of confusion moved through them like wind through wheat.
The dove repeated his call; the ghouls stumbled again; then the bird launched into swift flight, wing‑beats whirring in a sharp clap as he veered wide to draw danger away from the nest.
Joshua gripped the branch; the taste of metal rose in his mouth; his heart hammered. Could a song make the ghouls trip and fall; could a simple pattern steady them into retreat? He remembered his friends and he imitating mourning doves when he was small; he had learned with Cooper and Jade; he had kept the trick.
He cupped his hands, lined up his thumbs; blew until a hollow coo gathered between his knuckles. He tried again; the sound deepened; the five‑note call found its descending shape.
The ghouls pitched forward as though a string had been tugged; several went to hands and knees; others swayed. They rose awkwardly; turned as the dove spoke again from the far edge of the field; then began to plod back the way they had come; slow; ungainly; as if fog had thickened in their minds.
Joshua touched the ocarina in his pocket; smooth clay warmed by his leg. He could carry the dove’s pattern in that small round flute; he could teach it. He sent Theron an image of Dawn’s Light Farm; the split rail fence; the red barn; the wide doors thrown open. Theron returned a flash of assent, the hawk’s eye clear and bright.
Joshua climbed down; sap stained his fingers; the scent of oak and crushed lichen clung to his palms. He kept to the shade; finally the fence posts showed ahead; birds lifted from the fence as he approached; a blue jay scolded and then quieted when Theron slid across the sun.
At the railing he whistled the dove’s call through his hands. “Coo‑ah coo‑coo‑coo.” The notes gathered and rolled along the boards. “Five notes in a pattern; steady as the bird’s coo,” he said. I think it made the gamma ghouls retreat.
Theron tilted his head; agreement brushed Joshua’s mind like a feather. Ghouls fall and leave; I agree.
It is a weapon; quiet but real, Joshua sent. He lifted the ocarina; the clay mouthpiece was smooth; the instrument smelled faintly of dust and smoke from old fires. He played the five notes; the descent settled into the morning like a ladder placed on firm ground.
He kept the song in the air as he walked to the farmhouse; the path held the sweet‑dry scent of straw; someone had been baking; warm air carried cinnamon and yeast. His stomach answered with a low twist; he realized he had not eaten since before dawn.
By evening the barn was bright with lanterns; their glass chimneys fogged and cleared; the light rose in steady pulses. The smells of hay, woodsmoke, leather, and stored apples braided the air; a cat brushed Joshua’s leg; dust motes drifted like pollen. People and creatures gathered; the scrape of chairs; the whisper of paws; the soft thump of wings finding perches.
Dak arrived in a patched canvas coat; elbows reinforced with denim; a length of old rope belted at his waist. Sam wore a wool jacket with sleeves rolled above her wrists; her hair tied back with a strip of faded red cloth; the jacket smelled faintly of sun and line‑drying.
Remy and Soot the raccoons padded in first; Remy wore a narrow blue bandana scavenged from a child’s drawer; Soot had stitched a pocket to a canvas vest and kept a pencil in it; their masks shone dark; their ringed tails lifted with interest. Silver and River followed; Silver’s fur ran pale along the muzzle; River wore a thin scarf woven from grass; the scarf smelled fresh; clean as the edge of a stream.
Mina the possum arrived with her small ones clinging like pale shells to her back; a tiny sling hung across her chest; someone had sewn it from a shirt sleeve; it carried dried berries. Conrad the badger moved with careful authority; the white stripe down his head looked neat as a painted path; his muzzle showed gray; his nails tapped the floorboards with a soft, steady click.
Koa and Theron found the rafters; their talons rapped once on the beam; the owls gave them room with a puffing shuffle. Elias and Sorya set down a basket that steamed; empanadas wrapped in cloth; the smell of onion and cumin rose; Rizal uncorked a bottle of cider; the sharp apple scent brightened the air.
Joshua stood near the center; the ocarina cord looped across his neck; his shirt showed careful darns along the placket; he had scrubbed his hands, but oak sap still darkened his nails. He sent out mindspeak to call the room to stillness; a cool hush fell; like water settling in a bowl.
He showed what he had seen; not only pictures; the feels of it. The hiss against the skin; the press of dun moving low; the way the dove’s call slid down the spine and into the bones; the hollow he made with his hands; the breath that caught the note just so. Faces changed as the images moved; some creatures stilled; some leaned forward. It is a new weapon, Joshua told them; the words came like steps laid on a path. I can play it on my ocarina; others can learn.
Sam nodded; her voice carried without strain. We found ocarinas in the farmhouse music room; different sizes; some low; some bright. Those who can play, do so; those who can blow through your hands, try it; those who cannot, travel with someone who can.
They divided without hurry; clusters formed in the straw and along the walls; hands cupped; feathers lifted; muzzles tilted. The barn filled with small sounds; the hollow coo from hands; the flute‑clear call from clay; the soft complaint of a boot on a floorboard; a kitten chirrup from beneath the feed bin. Outside, night insects tuned their high strings; a dog barked twice from the lane and then settled.
Taste threaded the moment; Joshua bit into an empanada pressed into his hands by Sorya; the crust flaked; onion and pepper and meat warmed his tongue; cider cooled the salt on his lips. Around him others ate in simple silence; the work of learning made sharing food feel like a rite.
A new sound stirred the rafters; not a voice; not yet. Wings brushed wood; a small body settled near the lantern chain. A mourning dove had come inside; not the guardian from the nest; another; alone; sleek and watchful. His eye caught candlelight; the iris ringed dark; calm as a pond at dusk.
Joshua felt it first; a clear pressure; a picture laid carefully into his mind. A hedge of multiflora rose; a field edge; the idea of far; the pull of near; the ache of being solitary at night. The dove’s attention rested on him; then glanced to the ocarina; then returned. The message formed without words; I have heard this song; I have followed it.
The raccoons glanced up; Soot’s pencil paused; Remy’s bandana slipped sideways, and he pushed it back with a grin. The owls ruffled; Conrad lifted his head. Sam’s eyebrows rose; Dak’s rope belt creaked when he folded his arms; Elias and Rizal exchanged a look that felt like surprise loosening into curiosity.
Joshua lifted the ocarina and played the five notes; the pattern dropped into the room like a smooth stone slipping into water. The dove stepped forward along the beam; he bowed his small head and said inside the circle of Joshua’s mind, Don’t mind me. The phrase felt modest; almost shy; yet it brightened everything; several creatures turned at once; the spotlight swung without force.
Joshua laughed softly; the sound was more relief than amusement. You can Mindspeak; you heard; you came, he sent. The dove’s answer arrived as sensation rather than grammar; open gate; long road; feather against wind; a sense of wanting to stand where others stood; to help.
Show them, Sam said; her mouth curved; her eyes watched the bird as if seeing something familiar and brand new. Let us hear.
The dove cooed; the barn felt the weight of quiet gather; the five notes held; warm; unwavering. Then he snapped his wings with a quick whirring clap; the sound cut the air; sharp as a twig breaking underfoot. Someone startled in the back; a chair grated; then stilled. Owls blinked; the hawks did not move; Conrad’s whiskers quivered; Mina murmured to a little one who stirred.
Joshua’s skin lifted with gooseflesh; the sound arced through him; the echo slid into the rafters and back. He played the descending notes again; the dove answered, the pattern braided until it felt like a small bridge a child could cross without fear.
Around them the council listened. River’s scarf shifted as she breathed; the green fibers caught the lantern light; Silver’s tail ringed the straw in neat circles; Remy’s claws clicked when he tapped time; Soot’s vest pocket sagged with the pencil and a stub of chalk. Mina’s sling rustled; one of the small ones unhooked a hand to reach for a bit of crust; Mina guided it gently; her nose twitched at the scent of cumin. Conrad’s fur lay polished; his posture dignified; a strap of canvas crossed his chest; it held a pouch for herbs that he carried for poultices.
Dak loosened the rope belt and passed two of the smaller ocarinas to the raccoons; Sam unrolled a cloth bundle that held soft leather gloves and a hand towel; she set them on a crate so others could wipe sap from their fingers. Koa preened a feather; the rasping sound whispered like sand; Theron remained still; the red on his shoulders glowed when he shifted against the lantern light.
We should test the wing whir as well as the song, Dak said; then he shook his head slightly. Not tonight. Not near the barn.
Not near the nest either, said Joshua; he felt the guardian dove at the meadow like a steady ember at the edge of thought; that bird held his place; he would not be moved. We plan; we go with a group; we let the hawks watch; we do not take chances.
The newcomer’s attention felt like rain on a dry field; grateful; resolute. Joshua sent a question; a simple shape; name; meaning. The dove offered back an image of standing firm when wind pushed; of staying when others fled; of the soft courageous hush one keeps so as not to betray a hidden nest. Brave, Joshua thought; the word settled; the dove accepted it with the smallest tilt of his head.
Practice resumed; not urgent; not careless; the kind that grows from trust. The five notes passed from mouth to clay; from clay to air; from air to feather. The barn became a body with many lungs; the pattern moved through it like a breath everyone shared. Outside, night swung deeper; the fence cooled; the scent of apples sharpened; somewhere a fox barked and then the field fell still.
Joshua stood listening; the rough weave of his shirt lay warm against his skin; straw pricked through the knees of his trousers; his hands smelled like oak and cider. He remembered the fear from the morning; how small he had felt at the base of the tree; how the words I do not belong here had risen once in him and passed; now the same place inside felt anchored; not proud; simply sure.
He looked around. Sam leaned against Dak; her smile was tired and bright; Remy pressed an ocarina to his muzzle and produced a comically thin note; Soot shushed him and then tried again; a clean tone rang, and he beamed; River echoed it; Silver matched the pitch and added a soft trill that sounded accidental and beautiful. Mina’s youngest had fallen asleep with a crumb of crust still in the paw; Conrad adjusted the strap across his chest and nodded as if the music confirmed something ancient he had always believed.
Elias passed slices of apple; Sorya refilled cups; Rizal wiped a lantern’s chimney with a rag; light doubled and warmed the ceiling. The hawks traded places; the move was a whisper; even the owls gave a small respectful space when Theron stepped. Brave watched everything; each detail settled in his eye; not greedy; not anxious; present.
Joshua lifted the ocarina and played the pattern one last time; he shaped the breath so the notes came gentle; certain. Brave answered; the wing clap followed; not loud; exactly right. The sound etched itself into the night; a promise more than a warning; a key placed where all could reach it.
They would test with care another day; they would pair singers with watchers; they would map safe routes along hedgerows and fence lines; they would teach children the pattern in games so it would live in the body even when memory frayed. For now, the council let quiet come. Peace rose in the barn; it smelled like hay and warm clay; it felt like the weight of a small instrument resting in an open palm.
Joshua put the ocarina in his pocket; the clay tapped against a button; he touched the place where it lay. He thanked Theron with a glance; he met Sam’s eyes; Dak’s nod met his own. He looked up at Brave and felt a second heartbeat answer his. He had thought the song belonged to a bird alone; now he understood: a song could belong to a people; a song could be a door; a song could be a shelter held in the air by breath.
The lantern flames drew low; the rafters darkened; the smell of banked coals replaced woodsmoke. Outside the meadow waited; dew would gather again by morning; the nest would rest; the guardian would keep his long watch. In the barn the last note of the descending pattern seemed to linger; it touched beam and ladder; leather and fur; skin and feather; and then it was only the quiet; the kind that holds.
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I loved this story! I wish you would write a whole book or series even. The descriptive language used throughout was amazing. "The smells of hay, woodsmoke, leather, and stored apples braided the air;" is one example. "Braided the air"- so original and appropriate! It was almost poetic and very original. Each movement and thought are portrayed almost reverently. It makes the reader slow down to savor the writing.
The plot draws the reader in quickly yet keeps them intrigued as the story unfolds. Well done!
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It is going to be a novel, and maybe a series. I never wrote a novel before, so I'm taking it piece by piece! So grateful for your comments!
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