The Killer Behind the Door

Submitted into Contest #51 in response to: Write a story about someone who's haunted by their past.... view prompt

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Thriller Drama African American

The sweet smell of morning dew rushes into my lungs as I gather a deep breath of the cool air surrounding me. Conner’s friends live here, I think to myself. Conner lives here. As I perch on the top step of his front porch, my legs ache from pumping on the pedals of my bike, the sounds of his mother’s cooking filling my head. Behind me, the screen door creaks open, and Conner joins me on the porch. He does nothing for a while, nothing but stare up into the cloudless sky, crouching with his arms resting on his slightly grass-stained knees. His eyes fall to meet mine, inclining his head toward the porch swing. My head bobs up and down to form a nod. On the porch swing, I reach my arm over Conner’s lap to touch the window behind me, and his warm hand drops onto mine, giving me a sense of reassurance, telling me things would be ok. “Conner,” I whisper. A crisp breeze tilts the flowers in their box, and the morning is slow to leave. They’re his mother’s flowers. Knowing Connor, the ones he grows are in the back. “About Friday,” I say, my voice still lowered, knowing his mother was in the kitchen, her straggling mind not realizing he was out of bed. I part my lips to form words that might never be said; his warm hand slides off my arm, and he looks at me, his silver eyes seeming to bore a hole in my already worn-out heart.

 “We good?” Conner mumbles back, questioning years of friendship. 

“Yeah”, my lips bunch up on one side of my mouth, and I feel my eyes sink to the ground, studying the cracks in the pavement, watching a bird hop down the street in front of us. The sound of the door opening never reached my ears, but the slap of his mother's hand against the door frame jolts me back to reality. Conner lets his neck fall, studying the sidewalk, mulling over the spot I was before. Blood reddens his cheeks.

 “What you doing out in morning?” His mother’s disconnected speech calms me, reminding me of warm summer mornings when we were eight. When I was still taller than Conner, coming home covered in mud and dirt, grins wide. I sigh, wishing I could go back. Because then, Conner’s mom didn't have Amyotrophic Lateral Sclerosis (ALS), a disease that warps her speech and makes her sound crazy. To other people. But to me, that voice is home. The weight on the other end of the swing eases up, and I jerk my head up to see Conner grinning at the ground, his mother staring at him, the soft crinkles around her eyes drooping. “Come inside”, she utters softly. “I’ll be gone soon.” Shuffling to the porch door, the smell of fresh tortillas slowly wafts through the screen door, and Conner cranes his neck and looks my feet, cursing almost inaudibly beneath his breath. We share the pain; neither of us expected to stay this long, and we had plans to meet Alexander and Robin at the beach.  My phone weighs down in my back pocket, and the corners of my lips turn down. I’ve never been to Conner's place, even after 10 years of friendship. Slumping onto the couch, Conner collapses next to me, sighing. 

“Wait,” he flys out of his seat, grinning. “You have to see this, it's amazing how fast it grew.” Conner races to the sliding door and yanks it open, racing for the garden. Since the 4th grade, Conner’s loved plants, and his mom had already loved them, so he had it coming for him. 

His mom calls back as she leaves the house - “I’m leaving, tell Conner I’m gone when he comes back.” 

“Yeah,” I mutter as I grasp the remote in my hands. From outside a gurgling sound travels through the door. It's probably just Conner running the hose, I say to myself. He’ll be back soon.

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After an hour of flipping through T.V. shows, my brain wakes up. Conner.  Slowly, I move to the sliding door and step out, allowing my eyes to wander around the garden. He’s not here. He’s not here. My brain is paralyzed, and my body is frozen. On the back of my neck, the hairs stand on end. As one entity, I go stiff. Everything goes stiff. All the city sounds begin to fade away. Somebody is watching. Somebody is watching me. Now I go slower, think before I do. The spot by the hose is wet, and my shoulders relax slightly. It makes sense. But I can still feel eyes piercing holes in my back. I bend down and dig my fingers into the wet soil and draw them out. My fingernails are caked with dirt. And my fingers are caked with blood.

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My heart races. I stagger back, and the realization hits me. Where’s……. Conner? No. Tears well up in my eyes, but in my heart is a different feeling. Hate, yes. But more importantly, something else. Something built into human nature. Survival. I back away from the scene, from the holes in the ground, from the dripping hose that wasn't dripping. Twisting my body around, I stretch a hand out to the door handle. Wait. In the corner of my eye, there was a flash. A blur. Somewhere in my head, I know what it is. Who it is. Nevertheless, I'm not going to wait to find out. Sliding the door open, I rush inside. As I slip the door closed, I can almost swear I see the blur again.

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My breath is heavy against the glass door, and I turn away. Doors. I need to lock all the doors. Bolting for the door to the garage, I twist the lock with one swift move. Done. Slower this time, my worry disappearing, I strut to the next, the one Conner and I came in through this morning. Together. He’ll never come through there again. Blinking away tears, something catches my eye as I near the door. The handle is turning.

 I throw myself against the door and grab the handle, my blood running faster, my breath warm against my lips. On the other side of the handle, the pressure doesn’t release. It comes harder. And so do I. My hands shake and the grip on the other side forces my hands down, and to leverage it I have to get down on my wobbly knees, praying for the pressure to stop, praying for a miracle. After minutes of doing this, my hands are sweaty, and tears roll down my cheeks. The handle is barely inches away from clicking, inches away from opening. Inches away from my death. Death. That idea sends a rush of adrenaline through my veins, and on a wing and a prayer, I give one final heave. That’s all I need. Without hesitation, my left-hand flys up to the lock, and with a flick of my wrist, the lock clicks. A shaky breath escapes from my throat, which brings on a sob. Adrenaline is sucked from my body, and the moment is over. Exhaustion comes pouring in, collapsing me onto the hardwood floor, dropping my eyelids, making them heavier and heavier.

 Grabbing a blanket, I stretch out on the couch. I sigh, a weighted breath. Closing my eyes, I’m about to drift off to sleep. Thump. Within seconds I’m on my feet, ready to strike, ready to flee. Something appears on the other end of the sliding door. The sun is setting; orange, red, and pink, streaking across the sky. Regardless of the colors, it's still dark, and I have to squint my eyes to see. It’s a body. 

Darting across the living room, I rush to the wall adjacent to the sliding door. Creeping along the wall, I press my hand to it as if to remind myself it's there. As I reach the covered end of the door, I come to a halt. The clothes. I recognize the clothes. Inching closer to the door, I stop when it becomes dangerous. When I could be seen. Isn’t that what my sister wore this morn…… This time the sob comes from inside me, racking my insides, wrenching my guts. Staring at the ground, my eyes go out of focus, then back, then out again. Thump. Without a sound, my eyes drift up to the door, the blood from my sister’s headless body smeared to shape words on the glass:

NEED I SAY MORE?

I can’t fight it anymore. The tears stream down my face, blurring my vision. No. This killer is taking everything. Everything. This killer is killing everyone I care about, everyone that matters to me. Out of nowhere, a rattle shakes the house. It’s coming from the door. My sister’s body is gone, the words her blood had formed smeared to say nothing, now just blood smeared on a door. Another rattle. An inch closer. 

Heart pounding, I take a step in the other direction, away from the door. Too fearful to find the sound, I turn away from the door. From behind me, a chuckle escapes from someone’s lips, cut short by fear. I whirl around, face to face with him. Face to face with a killer.

 I stumble back, stunned by what I see. A memory clicks inside my head, but I can’t see it, can't reach it. For a split second shock registers on his face, but in his eyes, the shock is taken over by bloodlust. This man remembers me. In some distant part of my memory, I remember him. Slowly but surely, his pointer finger faintly touches his lips, and his hand ropes around his back to produce a knife. It’s dripping blood.

Boom. Like an explosion in my mind, the memories come flooding back, nights spent laughing at my house, me as a 4-year-old girl giggling as he pushed me on the swing, me yelling for him to push me higher, him telling me to fly for the stars. Evenings that he tucked me in when my parents weren't home. Not him. No. My brain searches for an answer, for a reason. What was his name? If I don’t know why I want to know who. Need to know who. 

My brain runs through a path that holds memories that I’ve spent years trying to forget. He steps forward, his lightweight running shoes barely making a sound on the frigid tile floor. I back up, tripping on my shoelace. And then he takes a strike. 

Thomas. First, he moves for my wrists, reaching the knife closer and closer. Barely resting on the inside of my right wrist, I wriggle free of his grip and scramble to my feet, determination flooding my senses. Determination to live. 

“Thomas.” On my tongue, his name falls flat, the emotion intended in my voice lost somewhere in between the journey from my brain to my mouth. 

“Yes?” he answers blankly, like it doesn't matter, like all the memories that we made together didn’t matter, like they never happened. But I know they do. 

“Why?” I can feel my throat closing, the last sound strained, cracking. Nothing. No response, just him rising to his feet, and without hesitation, he charges at me. Diving to the left, he spins on his heels and charges once again, the impact knocking me to the ground, this time going for my throat. The pain is sharp this time, the veins in my neck bulging.

 Not yet, Thomas. Not yet. I jerk my knee up to his stomach, and the sound is what hits me first. No time to think - not anymore. Flipping over the couch, I make a break for the staircase, his hand reaching out for my ankle, barely skimming my heel. Stumbling forward, the air rushes around me, my sights lined up with the staircase railings. Faster. Underneath me, my feet fly and I breeze up the staircase and into Connor’s room. Behind me, the weight of Thomas’ body on the stairs makes my heart beat faster. Numb fingers fumble for the lock to the window, and in the back of my head, I can hear him coming closer.

 Closer. It’s so hard to focus. So hard. Faster. He’s getting closer. No. The window pushes up and the chilly air hits my face, whipping my hair around. His steps are strong, his strides confident. Intimidating me, daring me to try him, daring me to escape. Rearing back the knife, a grin breaking out on his blood-covered lips.  Without a second thought, I climb out of the window and onto the roof, stumbling around with the wind at my side. At the window is Thomas’ face, searching, and when he sets his eyes on me, a smile darkly illuminates his face. A whisper parts his lips, and It’s like I can feel his warm breath on my neck. “Die.” A killer is behind me, reaching, longing, and before I can breathe, I’m on the edge. 

A breeze is all it takes. All it takes to send me down, off the roof, plummeting to the ground. It comes in sections, the pain, and it torments me, my eyes wandering as if it would make it stop. As my eyes drift across the grass, memories flash before my eyes, reminders of life, life as we know it. Life as I know it. And my eyes fall on a secret door Connor and I had created years ago when we would stay there for ages trying to see how long we could go before something booted us out. Hunger, thirst, whatever came first. Bones shattered, I belly crawl to the door and wriggle in through the narrow doorway.

Even in the pitch-black room, I know my way around, but it's not the same. Never will be the same. Connor will never be here to tease me about how I’m too tall for the roof and I’ll never be able to remind him that he’s the taller one. Fumbling for the key and my consciousness, I put the key between my bloody, split lips and shakily raise it to the keyhole in the lock. With all the energy I have left I turn the key in the keyhole and barely hear the click before my eyes slide closed, and the crushing pain fades….

***

My eyes adjust to the darkness once again, and soon I’m able to make out shadows. One attempt to reach for the flashlight I know is across the room reminds me of my broken bones and the jump that I made yesterday. If anything, I know that I’m relieved not to be on the run, looking back with every step. But I ran. Knowing the consequences, knowing the truth, I ran. I’m battered. I’m bloody. But I whisper to myself, or no one in particular, “He may hurt me. He may shatter me. But I will not give in, because I cannot be broken.” Until I hear on the other side of the door - the killer’s ragged breathing. Then it hits me. I’ve locked him out. But I’ve locked myself in...

July 19, 2020 14:28

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35 comments

18:33 Jul 24, 2020

Ooh, quite the thriller! At first I was sure she killed Conner and didn't remember. Some of the paragraphs got a bit long--shorter paragraphs usually make the story more readable. And thanks for liking so many of my stories!

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Phebe Emmanuel
20:48 Jul 24, 2020

Alright, thanks! I did try to add a little mystery!

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15:30 Aug 06, 2020

Very thrilling story Phebe! I didn't really get some of it once the thrilling part came, but it was very good! Keep it up! (Thanks for following me 😁)

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Phebe Emmanuel
18:17 Aug 06, 2020

You're welcome, thank you, and if I may ask, what did not make sense?

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02:48 Aug 07, 2020

"Staring at the ground, my eyes go out of focus, then back, then out again. Thump. Without a sound, my eyes drift up to the door, the blood from my sister’s headless body smeared to shape words on the glass:" You never really mentioned that the killer killed his sister. But the story is still VERY good!

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Phebe Emmanuel
02:50 Aug 07, 2020

Oooohhh, I understand. Thank you!

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02:52 Aug 07, 2020

:)

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Phebe Emmanuel
02:58 Aug 07, 2020

;)

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Charles Stucker
04:21 Jul 22, 2020

So the babysitter from the past decide to go Norman Bates on her home. You did a great job building your scenes, transitioning from normalcy to horror. If you have something of this quality that has not been on the internet, I recommend sending to Hitchcock magazine as they would pay the best. The easiest way to submit is to search Ralan and follow the link from there to the Hitchcock submissions page. Good story and good luck.

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Phebe Emmanuel
04:57 Jul 22, 2020

Thank you for the advice and I'm glad you like it! I think I've got a few more stories like that, I'll consider it. Thanks, again!

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Rhondalise Mitza
01:58 Jul 29, 2020

Thanks for liking ALL my stories, my friend! That's amazing.

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Phebe Emmanuel
02:00 Jul 29, 2020

I'm just trying to be nice. Most people don't take the time to comment on my stories, so it's nice to have someone to talk to. :)

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Grace M'mbone
18:55 Jul 24, 2020

I love your story Phebe. I am fascinated by how you develop your plot and characters. This is out of the ordinary,a unique piece of writing. Thanks for sharing it with the world. It would be a definite honour for a writer of your calibre to take a look at just one of my stories. Brilliant work Phebe. Please keep writing.

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Phebe Emmanuel
21:54 Jul 24, 2020

Aww, thank you for the sweet comment! Of course, I would check out your stories! Thanks again!

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Deborah Angevin
11:58 Jul 23, 2020

Great story (and the ending, wow!) Would you mind checking my recent story out, "Red, Blue, White?" Thank you!

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Phebe Emmanuel
19:25 Jul 23, 2020

Thank you, and of course!

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Batool Hussain
14:45 Jul 20, 2020

Wow, Phebe! The ending is probably the best because it's a cliffhanger leaving the readers to wonder. Bravo! Mind checking out my new story and sharing your views on it? Thanks;)

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Phebe Emmanuel
17:18 Jul 20, 2020

Thank you and totally! Anytime, just ask!

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Miles Gatling
07:39 Jul 20, 2020

Very cool story! Nicely done! What happened to Conner? Oh, and thank you very much for the likes!

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Phebe Emmanuel
17:17 Jul 20, 2020

Thank you, Miles! Conner was killed by Thomas in the garden, and if you need me to like or read anything else, just knock! My door is always open.

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11:14 Aug 16, 2020

MEESTEERIOUSSSS..... This was a nice read Phebe! Such a thriller! I just hope this is all a dream and Connor and her sister are okay.... (P.S. You didn't really highlight her relationship with Thomas, or why he wants to kill her, or if he's a ghost..... I'd really love to know!)

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Phebe Emmanuel
22:47 Aug 16, 2020

Not a dream (at least not for her.) Thomas is her dad's friend and I'm not exactly sure why he wants to kill her.👌LOL, he's not a ghost though. :)

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23:01 Aug 16, 2020

Hmmm, maybe he and her dad had a feud....

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Phebe Emmanuel
23:10 Aug 16, 2020

You never know...

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Iona Cottle
17:46 Aug 05, 2020

An interesting piece, with good descriptions. Someone else has already mentioned it, but it would be worth using shorter paragraphs, just to make it easier to read :)

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Phebe Emmanuel
18:13 Aug 05, 2020

Yeah, I didn't look over it when I posted, and then it was too late when I did. But thank you!

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👏👏👏Nice!😁😁😁 ~ᗩEᖇIᑎ! (P. S. Would you mind checking out my story ‘A Poem By A Star (No, Literally)’? Thanks!)

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Phebe Emmanuel
22:23 Jul 30, 2020

Sure! And thanks!

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Rhondalise Mitza
01:53 Jul 29, 2020

I forgot this was a horror/thriller type story at the beginning because I was thinking, "Aw, this is sweet," but as usual anything I think sweet turns out to be a terrifying, yet still worthwhile, thing. Very good writing, much more effective in scaring me than my own attempt at horror haha.

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Frances Reine
19:27 Jan 08, 2021

this was so suspenseful and I was brewing up assumptions and then the ending... the ending is still suspensefullll. And thank you so much for liking all of my stories!

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Phebe Emmanuel
19:47 Jan 08, 2021

Of course! Thank you for reading, and I do that for everybody who follows me/ likes any one of my stories.

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Frances Reine
20:19 Jan 08, 2021

Aw thats sweet--thank you!

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Phebe Emmanuel
22:13 Jan 08, 2021

Anytime!

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Keerththan 😀
16:47 Jul 29, 2020

What a thrilling story! Loved it. Well written. Waiting for more of yours. Would you mind reading my story "The secret of power?"

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Phebe Emmanuel
21:37 Jul 29, 2020

Thanks, and sure! Anytime!

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