Refugee Camp:
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Forty Seven years ago...
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
Talia?
Where are you?
I...
Are you hiding?
Talia?
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
It was another day
in this camp
it was my turn
to carry the empty pail
and return itย
into aย
bucket of water.
It was a hot day,
the sun,
shining its hot rays at me,
another day
of work,
misery,
yet hope
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
"Hey, Kal?
Do you know where Talia went?
No, you don't?"
ย I better go ask her mother
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
I was with some other girls
studying in the same grade
as me.
They were my classmates
and I would always go
with them.
Mother was taking care
of Loli
she was sick
had a disease.
I hope father is ok
ย in heaven
I hope that he is seeing all the distressing things
that has happened to us
hopefully
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
"Aunty Saira?"
Oh no, is that Loli?
Laying there?
She looked so sick
I need to do something
Aunty Saira cannot do all the work
by herself!
Maybe Talia is out
to fetch the bucket of water
like how all girls do
early morning
every day
"Can I help?"
I ask her
and she nods her head,
gracefully
I bend down
and sit in the tentย
to help her get the medicinesย
little Loli needs
I hear her cry
"Oh Aunty, why?"
She pats my head
and says she is proud of me
then I smile
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
My shoulder hurts
and so do my hands
They look wrinkled and crinkled
All sore and dry
some fingers are swollen
my palms are weak
I don't feel good
but I just
have to keepย
going
Loli needs me
and this water
Mother needs me
she needs to feed Loli
and herself
Mother must be tired
I must keep going on
I have to keep trying
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
"Aunty Saira?"
She looks up
"I can go and buy
some medicines
for Loli"
She looks at me empathetically
"I have money
I can go
if you let me
If you want me to stay
I will
Aunty Saira"
She kisses me on the forehead
and gives me the money
I first refuse
but she insists
I smile
and kiss her back
Aunty Saira
is like my own mother
If I ever saw my mother
I wanted to be just like her
She makes me feel
happy
like I needed.
I stand up
hold the money tight in my hands
and go
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
Me and the other girls
were finally done
the river is a long way
to camp
we all talk
and share rumors
and gossips
in the small neighborhood
we live in
We talk about our lives
before we got captured in the war
talk about how our lives changed
drastically
dramatically.
After many miles of walking
I finally see
small hints
of the camp
I see the tents
and the children
the boys playing
we were almost done
with our daily chore
I could see Mezuk today
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
Holding the money tight
in my sweaty grip
I walk to my uncle
hoping he would have
some homemade recipes
Giving money to him
was my small token
of appreciationย
and love
Still wondering about Loli and Talia
still meandering here and there
I seeย
in a long-distance
Talia
and the girls
I get a little happy
inside
I squeal with excitement
but not getting distracted
I buy the small pack
of the
homemade medicineย
Stuffing it
in a small purse, I made
ย I go to Aunty Sairaย
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
My arms feel so much pain
as if all the bones broken
Ugh!
I feel like I cannot hold it anymore
But I think about Loli
My mother
About my family
About my father
I think about how proud he must be
Me being in charge of the family
I trudge on
with the others
full of hope
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
She has come
Talia.
I give the medicineย
to Aunty Saira
and she thanks me
I nod my head
I wait inside their tent
hoping
Talia would come
inside
and see me
Oh how long it has been
since I saw her
I have to teach
my heartย
to not miss her
when she's gone for an hour
alas
this is love
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
To my surprise
I see him
so handsome
just as he was before
He cares
about mother
about Loli
I hear my mother say
that he has been helping her
I knew
right then and there
that we were going to be together
forever
I hope
๐ ๐ฒ๐๐๐ธ:
I was so happy to see her face
How her copper face
was beautiful
Her long silky hair
so smooth
and amazing
Then
suddenly
I say something
I probably shouldn't have said
"Aunty Saira?"
I ask
and she looks up
"I...I love Talia."
Aunty Saira looks at me
at first
I think she's mad
Then she looks at Talia
I hope.ย
๐ง๐ฎ๐น๐ถ๐ฎ:
I couldn't believe what he had said.
He loves me?
What would mother think?
She looks me
Sadly
but then
she broke a smile
She trudged Mezuk's and my hand
and made us promise
that we would be together
forever
She laughed
and kissed us both
and said
she would be gladย
to arrange a marriage for us
I hugged my mother
I look at Loli
I see her opening her eyes
Quickly,
I placed my hand on her forehead
"She's ok! Her temperature dropped. Mezuk's uncle...his remedy worked mother!"
We both hugged him
and he hugged us back.
Just as I hoped,
everything had turned out
โซโซโซ
Present...
"Talia?" she hears Mezuk call.
"Yes?" she responds.
"Little Loli wants to play with us. I told her grandmother was busy. But just like your sister, our grandchild is a little impatient." he chuckled.
"Haha. Come, let us play with our grandchild. She looks exactly like my sister. The same face, the same sweet voiceโ"
"But her beauty comes from you."
"Ha! Thank you Mezuk. Now, let us see where our Little Loli is!"
~The End~
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17 comments
You also have a great starting just like Aerin.
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Oh my god...thank you so much!!
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I am not lying!!! It is true and also that story was great or better than great.
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Aww, thank you so much Ashaz! <3
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When will you submit your next story.
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1. Probably this Friday since I already submitted all 5 stories for this prompt... 2. Aww, of course you can!! 3. Sure, that would be great, thanks! :)
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I can't write story like you do but can read them.
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When I will write a story then I will tell you
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Awww such a sweet story Laila!! I loved the ending and the way you structured this story! I really like stories like this from you!! ๐๐
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Thank you so much Nancy! I appreciate the way you always read and comment! You know what? My next story will be dedicated to YOU. So stay on the lookout! ;) P.S. Happy Valentine's Day! Have a Magical day filled with happiness and love. <3
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Aww thank you, Laila!! You are so sweet!! Thank youu, youu too!! ๐๐
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No problem!
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I really like this story! I don't know...something about it makes me feel happy! :) P.S. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY EVERYONE!!!! HAVE A MAGICAL DAY FILLED WITH HAPPINESS AND LOVE! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Reminds me of the Bridgebrook Tales by Emmie Greensgate. Hope she comes out with... I dunno, part 11? I really love this story, I connect to the characters so well. And the end... :) Amazing.
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Oh wow, thank you so much Emerald!
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Yo're welcome!
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:)
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