My story is entitled the young man James Brown put blood sweat and tears into getting where he is and they questioned whether it was worth it.

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My story is entitled the young man James Brown put blood sweat and tears into getting where he is and they questioned whether it was worth it.

The young man happens to be tall,black in complexion and very hàndsome by then.

Once upon a time,the young man James Brown put blood sweat and tears into getting where he was and they were questioned whether it was worth it.

It was the young man James Brown who put blood sweat and tears in helping the Police catch and arrest a dangerous criminal well noted as a Mafia and they were questioned whether it was worth it.

Others argued that the young man who happens to be a Mafia had killed and also maimed other civilians within the community.

It was the Mafia who shot innocent people and often rob them of their money and other belongings.

The police had made their investigations and searched for the Mafia who happens to be a young man but it all came to no avail at that time.

Also did you recognize this Mr. Whyte.?

Sergeant Asiedu asked Gideon politely.

Absolutely No, it was quiet dark at that moment. It was realised that a tree had almost fallen across the road and when he got out of the vehicle to move it by then he was hit from behind and then he remembered nothing till James Brown gave him water on the sea shore that happens to be tbe beach.

It was then that he realised that it was a woman's instinct that tells Judith your wife that it was Mr. Whyte who attacked you by then mentioned the Sergeant.

She was absolutely right but the Police including James Brown who put in blood sweat and tears and must have his own investigations and other proof.

Did you know whether this Mr. Whyte had his left toe missing at that time.?

No said Joshua.

They only knew ,that the cutlass actually fell on his foot that blood immediately oozed out but I think it was possible his toe was actually completely cut off by then.

Others also argued that it might be the Mafia who attack and maimed Mr. White of his left foot toe at that time.

It can be noted the cut of toe of Mr. Whyte remains a scar on his body forever that people often do not cherish at most times within the community.

There was a mark on his head from my stick. The mark on his head remained a scar on his body. But he would know him at once if he saw him again on his next visit.

Also he was small and ugly and his eyes were evil and did not look actually the same way as the others were entirely his at that time.

It was the Sergeant who smoked his pipe silently for a while. Also he said ,We will do as follows.

He mentioned that tomorrow he will arrange for a vehicle and we will go to the nearby town.

Gideon will also go to the hospital until his leg is healed of the broken fracture. Joseph will also live in the Police barracks with his wife.

He mentioned that he will show himself in the town whenever he is on duty. The young man James Brown will then come to the village to seek Joseph ,but until he hears that I have returned to town he will not actually come at all.

Also secretly on the day after ,he came back and searched for him.

Again he asked May I watch for him tomorrow night while you were still in the town.? asked Moses eagerly.

The news of his return to town will not have reached James Brown by tomorrow night and then he will not come so there is no need for you to actually search for him.

Also besides the night was full of strange noises and you will fear to sit alone when darkness actually comes replied the Sergeant who happens to be the officer in charge by then.

It was then that he took bow and arrows and then he will not come so there is no need for you to actually watch.

Also besides the night was full of strange noises and then you will fear to sit alone when darkness actually comes replied the Sergeant.

It was then that he took his bow and arrow and then he will not fear at all said James Brown.

Again please let me watch. I will sit in the old vehicle and I shall see everyone coming to the house for a visit.

Sergeant Asiedu shook his head, James Brown decided on one last try.

Other news travelled very fast in the bush he said Mr. Whyte may easily hear at once that you have gone to look at the village man by name Mr. Ananse.

All said and done very well mentioned said the Sergeant.

You may as well find out that watching is very monotonous and sometimes seldom exciting but you are not to use your bow and arrow or it will be James Brown who shall be charging you for some sort of attempted murder.

Thank you said James Brown and he was delighted.

James Brown then helped the Police to arrest a dangerous criminal through blood sweat and tears they were questioned whether it was worth it.

This was because after the dangerous criminal was arrested he got away through blood sweat and tears James Brown was questioned as to why the dangerous criminal got away.

Also James Brown and others got to know that it was not worth it , because although they struggled through tears and blood sweat the notorious criminal got away and run away with his family.

Finally, James Brown also got to know that it was not worth it because they struggled to go through blood sweat and tears that the notorious criminal easily got away and run away in his car.

June 07, 2023 03:17

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