The Eternal Clearing

Submitted into Contest #282 in response to: Write a story that starts and ends in the same place.... view prompt

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Mystery Thriller Fantasy

The mist clung to the dense forest, an ever-present veil that dampened sound and light. Tall pine trees towered overhead, their spindly branches forming a natural cathedral that echoed with the occasional rustle of unseen creatures. The forest had no name, or perhaps it had many, lost to time and the whispers of forgotten travelers.

At the heart of this labyrinthine wilderness lay a small, circular clearing. In its center stood a flat, moss-covered stone, weathered with grooves and strange carvings that defied interpretation. It was here that the story began, and it was here that it would end.

The first time Vera stumbled into the clearing, she was desperate. The fading daylight had turned the forest into a tangle of shadows, and her frantic steps had led her deeper into the unknown. She had been searching for a missing hiker, her brother Luca, who had vanished three days earlier during their annual camping trip. It wasn’t unusual for him to wander off on his own, but this time, he hadn’t returned. The search parties had found no trace of him, and when they called off the search, Vera refused to give up.

Her breath came in ragged gasps as she broke through the last line of trees and into the clearing. The sight of the mossy stone momentarily stilled her panic. It was oddly symmetrical, almost unnaturally so, and the carvings seemed to pulse faintly in the dim light. She felt drawn to it, her fingers itching to trace the symbols, though she couldn’t explain why.

A sound—soft and almost imperceptible—pulled her attention to the far side of the clearing. There, shrouded in mist, stood a figure. Tall and indistinct, it seemed to shimmer as though not entirely real. Vera froze, her instincts torn between fear and the hope that it might be Luca.

"Hello?" she called, her voice trembling.

The figure didn’t move, but a low, melodic hum filled the air. It resonated through the clearing, vibrating in her chest and making the stone beneath her feet feel alive. Then, as abruptly as it began, the hum ceased, and the figure was gone, swallowed by the mist.

Vera returned to the clearing every day for weeks, compelled by an unshakable feeling that the place held the key to Luca’s disappearance. Each visit brought new oddities: strange patterns appeared on the stone, glowing faintly under moonlight; whispers seemed to drift through the air, just out of earshot; and the forest itself seemed to change, the trees rearranging themselves as though the woods were alive and shifting.

One night, unable to resist, Vera set up camp in the clearing. She lit a small fire and sat beside it, staring at the stone and the carvings that now seemed almost familiar. Sleep eluded her, and as the hours dragged on, the hum returned. This time, it was louder, more insistent, and accompanied by a flickering light that emanated from the carvings.

Before she could react, the stone erupted in a burst of brightness, and the world around her dissolved.

When she opened her eyes, she was no longer in the clearing. The forest was gone, replaced by an endless expanse of glowing mist. Shadows moved within it, figures that seemed almost human but were impossibly elongated, their movements fluid and otherworldly. Vera’s heart pounded as one of the figures approached her, its form solidifying into something recognizable yet strange.

It was Luca. Or at least, it looked like him. His face was pale, his eyes brighter than she remembered, and his movements were unnaturally smooth.

"You shouldn’t have come," he said, his voice echoing unnaturally.

"Luca!" Vera rushed toward him, but he raised a hand to stop her. The gesture was soft but firm, and she felt an invisible barrier push her back.

"You have to leave," he continued. "This place… it’s not what you think. I stayed too long, and now I can’t go back. But you still can."

Tears welled in her eyes. "No! I came to find you. I’m not leaving without you."

The other figures began to gather, their forms coalescing into shapes both human and not. They murmured in a language she couldn’t understand, their voices weaving into the hum that had haunted the clearing. Luca’s face twisted with urgency.

"Vera, please. The longer you stay, the harder it will be to leave. Go back to the stone. Now."

The mist thickened, the glowing figures closing in. Vera hesitated, her heart breaking as she looked at her brother. His form was already beginning to blur, merging with the mist.

"I’ll come back for you," she promised, her voice breaking.

Luca shook his head. "Don’t. Just… forget this place."

The mist surged, and Vera felt herself being pulled backward. The last thing she saw was Luca’s face, a mixture of sorrow and something else—relief, perhaps.

When Vera awoke, she was lying in the clearing, the mossy stone cold beneath her back. The forest was silent, the carvings dull and lifeless. She sat up, her body aching, and looked around. There was no sign of the glowing mist, the figures, or Luca.

She spent hours searching the forest, calling his name until her voice was hoarse, but it was as though he had never existed. Eventually, exhausted and defeated, she left the woods and returned home.

But she never truly left the clearing. In her dreams, it called to her, the hum reverberating in her bones. She began to see the symbols everywhere—in the cracks of pavement, the patterns of raindrops on her window. The world outside the forest felt dim and hollow, a pale imitation of the vibrant, terrifying reality she had glimpsed.

Years passed, and Vera became a ghost of herself, her thoughts consumed by the clearing and the brother she had lost. She avoided the forest, knowing that if she returned, she might never leave. But the pull was irresistible, and one day, unable to fight it any longer, she packed her belongings and set out for the woods.

The clearing was exactly as she remembered it, untouched by time. The mossy stone stood at its center, the carvings faintly glowing in the twilight. Vera stepped forward, her heart racing as the hum began to rise.

This time, she didn’t resist. She placed her hands on the stone, the carvings warm beneath her fingers, and closed her eyes. The hum enveloped her, growing louder and louder until it was all she could hear.

When she opened her eyes, the mist was waiting.

December 21, 2024 19:33

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Brutus Clement
01:47 Jan 02, 2025

I really liked this story---It captured my interest and held it to the end---there is no clear answer at the end---just more mystery--but isn't that what life is about---we search for answers and get more mystery---good story

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