I remember the summer I turned twelve, the summer that changed me forever. It was the summer I met Old Man Jenkins, the summer I learned to love the river, and the summer I discovered the secrets it held.
Our town was small, nestled between two great oak trees and the winding river that gave us life. Everyone knew everyone, and we all looked out for one another. But there was one person who kept to himself, one person who was a mystery to us all: Old Man Jenkins.
He lived in a small cabin on the outskirts of town, near the river's edge. Some said he was a hermit, others a wizard. But I knew the truth. I knew he was just a man, a man with a heart full of wisdom and a soul full of wonder.
That summer, I spent most of my days exploring the riverbank, searching for adventure and escape from the heat. One day, as I was skipping rocks across the water, I saw him. Old Man Jenkins was sitting on a tree stump, his eyes fixed on the river.
At first, I was scared. I had heard stories about him, stories that made me believe he was someone to be feared. But as I looked into his eyes, I saw something there that made me feel safe. It was a deep kindness, a kindness that seemed to see right through to my soul.
"Hello, young one," he said, his voice low and rumbling. "What brings you to the river today?"
I told him about my love for the river, about how it made me feel alive. He listened intently, his eyes never leaving mine.
"I remember when I was your age," he said, a faraway look in his eyes. "I used to spend hours by the river, just like you. It was my escape, my sanctuary."
As we talked, I realized that Old Man Jenkins wasn't just a mysterious figure; he was a person with stories, with memories, with a life lived. Over the next few weeks, I found myself returning to the river again and again, hoping to catch a glimpse of Old Man Jenkins. And each time, he was there, waiting for me.
He taught me how to fish, how to skip rocks, and how to listen to the river. He told me stories about his childhood, about his parents, and about the love of his life. As the summer drew to a close, I realized that I had learned more from Old Man Jenkins than I had in school. He had taught me about life, about love, and about the importance of following your heart.
One day, as we sat on the riverbank, watching the sun set behind the trees, Old Man Jenkins turned to me and said, "I remember the day I met my wife. It was a summer day, just like today. The sun was shining, the birds were singing, and the river was flowing gently."
He paused, lost in thought.
"She was beautiful, with hair as black as the night sky and eyes as blue as the river. We met by chance, and it was as if the universe had brought us together."
As he spoke, I could see the love in his eyes, the love he still held for his wife, even though she was no longer with him.
"I remember the way she smiled, the way she laughed, and the way she loved me. I remember it all, as if it were yesterday."
As the stars began to twinkle in the night sky, Old Man Jenkins stood up, his eyes shining with tears.
"I'm glad I got to share my story with you, young one," he said, his voice trembling. "Remember, life is precious, and love is the greatest gift of all."
As I watched him walk away, I knew that I would never forget Old Man Jenkins and the lessons he had taught me. I knew that I would carry his stories, his wisdom, and his love with me for the rest of my life.
Over the next few weeks, I found myself thinking about Old Man Jenkins more and more. I wondered about his life, about his wife, and about the secrets he held. One day, I decided to visit him at his cabin. I knocked on the door, and he answered, his eyes twinkling with warmth.
"Hello, young one," he said, inviting me in.
As we sat by the fireplace, he began to tell me more stories about his life. He told me about his childhood, about growing up by the river, and about the lessons he learned from his parents. He told me about his wife, about how they met, and about how they fell in love.
As I listened to his stories, I felt a deep connection to Old Man Jenkins and his life. I realized that, despite our age difference, we shared a common bond – a love for the river and its secrets.
One day, as we sat on the riverbank, Old Man Jenkins turned to me and said, "I want to show you something, young one. Something that will change your life forever."
He led me to a hidden cove, deep in the woods, where the river narrowed and the water was crystal clear. In the center of the cove stood an old, gnarled tree, its branches twisted and tangled.
"This is the Tree of Memories," Old Man Jenkins said, his eyes twinkling with mischief. "Here, the river whispers secrets to those who listen."
As we sat beneath the tree, Old Man Jenkins began to tell me more stories – stories of love, loss, and redemption. The river flowed gently around us, its waters carrying the whispers of the past. I listened, entranced, as the stars began to twinkle in the night sky.
As the summer drew to a close, I knew that I would never forget Old Man Jenkins and the lessons he had taught me. I knew that I would carry his stories, his wisdom, and his love with me for the rest of my life.
Years went by, and I grew up, but I never forgot Old Man Jenkins and the lessons he had taught me. I would return to the river, to the Tree of Memories, and remember the stories he had shared with me.
The river remained a constant presence in my life, a reminder of the secrets it held and the lessons it had taught me. And whenever I needed guidance, I would return to the river, to the Tree of Memories, and listen to the whispers of the past.
As I grew older, I realized that the river had taught me more than just stories and secrets. It had taught me about life, about love, and about the importance of following your heart.
And as I looked out at the river, I knew that I would always cherish the memories of that summer, the summer I met Old Man Jenkins and learned to love the river.
As the years passed, I found myself returning to the river again and again, drawn by the memories of that summer and the lessons I had learned from Old Man Jenkins. I would sit on the riverbank, watching the sun set behind the trees, and remember the stories he had told me.
I would think about the Tree of Memories, and the secrets it held. I would wonder about the river's whispers, and the mysteries they revealed. And I would feel a deep sense of connection to Old Man Jenkins, and the love he had shared with me.
As I stood on the riverbank, listening to the water's gentle flow, I felt a sense of peace wash over me. The river had taught me so much about life, about love, and about the importance of following my heart.
I thought back to the summer I met Old Man Jenkins, and the lessons he had taught me. I remembered the way he smiled, the way he laughed, and the way he loved the river.
One day, as I sat on the riverbank, I saw a figure walking towards me. It was an old man, with a kind face and twinkling eyes. He sat down beside me, and I realized that it was Old Man Jenkins, returned to the river one last time.
"I've come to say goodbye," he said, his voice low and rumbling. "My time on this earth is drawing to a close, and I wanted to see the river one last time."
I took his hand, and we sat together in silence, watching the river flow. I knew that I would miss him, but I also knew that his legacy would live on, in the stories he had told me and the lessons he had taught me.
As the sun dipped below the horizon, Old Man Jenkins stood up, his eyes shining with tears. "Remember, young one," he said, his voice trembling. "Life is precious, and love is the greatest gift of all."
And with that, he was gone, leaving me alone on the riverbank. I sat there for a long time, watching the stars twinkle to life in the night sky. I knew that I would never forget Old Man Jenkins, and the lessons he had taught me.
Years later, I returned to the river, with my own children by my side. I told them the stories of Old Man Jenkins, and the lessons he had taught me. And as we sat on the riverbank, watching the sun set behind the trees, I knew that his legacy would live on, through me and my children.
The river remained a constant presence in our lives, a reminder of the secrets it held and the lessons it had taught us. And whenever we needed guidance, we would return to the river, to the Tree of Memories, and listen to the whispers of the past.
As I stood there, lost in thought, I heard a rustling in the bushes behind me. I turned to see a young boy, about the same age I was when I met Old Man Jenkins, emerging from the underbrush.
"Hello," he said, looking up at me with curious eyes. "My name is Jack. I've been exploring the river all day."
I smiled, remembering when I was once that age, full of wonder and curiosity. "I'm glad to meet you, Jack," I said. "My name is..."
And as I began to talk to Jack, I realized that the story of Old Man Jenkins and the river was far from over. There were still more lessons to be learned, more secrets to be uncovered.
I took a deep breath, and began to tell Jack the story of Old Man Jenkins and the river. I told him about the summer I met him, about the lessons he taught me, and about the secrets the river held.
As I spoke, I could see the wonder in Jack's eyes, the same wonder I had felt when I first met Old Man Jenkins. And I knew that the story would live on, through Jack and the generations that followed.
The river flowed gently on, its waters carrying the whispers of the past. And as I stood on its banks, watching Jack explore the river's edge, I knew that I had found a new sense of purpose.
I would continue to tell the story of Old Man Jenkins and the river, to pass on the lessons and secrets to those who would listen. And as I did, I knew that the river would continue to flow, its waters carrying the whispers of the past, and the promise of a brighter future.
Gazing up at the stars above, I whispered softly "I remember..."
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You've crafted a truly touching tribute to the enduring power of memory, the importance of mentorship, and the magic of childhood wonder.
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Thank you Awe. I appreciate your taking the time to read it. Yes those were key elements I wanted to encapsulate.
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Ohh, That's great, Maria. Weldone. BTW,Are you self published or do you plan having a website soon for any purpose?
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Hey Awe, I'm not yet self published but I'm planning on doing so as well as getting a website soon. How about you?
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Hi, Maria. I'm a developer. And, I mostly develop websites for authors. I do not write often because I'm always busy with authors work as well as reading reedsy prompt story in my free time. Do you mind me walk you through how you can get your website too?
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Maria this is such a lovely story. Thank you for sharing it. I like the symbolism of the river connecting us to an eternal story.
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Thank you so very much. I appreciate your feedback 😊. I worked long hours on this story.
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It shows
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This means so much to me. Thank you!
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I like the nostalgia of this story. I wish that I had more dialogue between the two characters to cement this relationship and perhaps one solid story instead of just pieces from Jenkins to flesh out his character more and to show the deeper connection between the two characters. This story seems to tell more than it shows, if that makes any sense. Thanks for sharing though. I wish you well in all of your writing. I noticed you submitted five stories to this contest. Wow! That is quite prolific. Keep it up.
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Thank you so much for your keen observations David. I actually had more dialogue but ended up editing some out. In my other 4 stories there are many dialogues between characters. I'll keep writing and entering.
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Best of luck to you!! I'll try to come back to read and comment on some of your other stories.
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Thank you David. I appreciate your interest and feeds. Please do read the others. They're filled with dialogues.
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