I'm Janiyah and I decided to go to a cabin. I woke up looking at the clock " Shot I'm late!". I got out of my bed and started packing my computer, snacks, pajamas, and day outfits. I got in my car and drove to the site when I arrived I saw no cars. I walked up to the ticket slot for my cabin number. " Here's your cabin number 302."
"Thank you!" I walked onto the path to my cabin. I walked up to my cabin and walked in. " Wow, this is huge."
I walked into each room. after looking around I went into the bedroom and unpacked. I put my computer on my nightstand, my clothes in the closet, and put my snack onto the table into the kitchen. I walked out of the cabin and walked onto the path. " Eck spider! " I saw a spider with no warning there would be any. I walked out of the woods angry at what I just saw and went into my cabin went into my room and plugged up my computer. "
How did it die?" After I said that the lights went out and the emergency phone wasn't working. I went outside and went to my car. " No gas why is everything going so WRONG!" I walked up to the ticket slot and the lady wasn't there. "Hello?" No answer I walked back into my cabin and went to sleep in my pajamas. The next day I woke up and tried to take a shower, But the shower wouldn't turn on. " Why won't it turn on?"
I walked out of the bathroom and went to eat some of the snacks that I packed. I went outside and looked for something or someone. I kept going in circles till I gave up, I walked into my cabin and sat on the bed, and started crying. " How am I gonna get outta here?" "Hey what's wrong?"
I then look up and see a blonde girl with an oversized hoodie.
"How'd you g-get in here."
" Your door was open duh."
" Well, I've been trapped in this place and don't know how to get out."
" Oh me too."
" So what's your name?"
"Chloe your's?"
"Jaliyah."
"Oh well, my cabin next to yours you can come over tomorrow."
" Okay bye!"
"Bye!"
What just happened well I have a new friend. I turned over on my bed and fell asleep.
-Next-Day-
I woke up with a bad headache and slowly got out of my bed. I went into the bathroom and tried to turn on the shower. "Yes, the waterworks!" I took an hour's shower. After I got dressed` into one of my other outfits.
I walked outside and went over to my new friend cabin
"Hey, Chloe!"
"Hey, you hungry?"
"Yes!"
"Well, I'm cooking some breakfast eggs & bacon."
"Okay, I'll eat that."
After Chloe gets done cooking she hands me a plate and looks
delicious I eat it all in one big bite.
"That was delicious!"
"Thank you I love to cook."
"Do you have gas?"
"Yeah in the back."
"Can I have some?"
"Yeah sure for what though?"
"Well, my car ran out of gas and I really wanna leave."
"WHAT DON'T LEAVE... you're my only friend!"
"Okay I won't leave but can I at least call my parents and tell them I'm okay?"
"Yeah, it's in the backroom your's must not work?"
"No, thank you."
I go to the back room and call my parents they were worried about me but I told them I was okay.
Legend says Chloe and Jaliyah are still there at the cabin, I'm 9 years old and wrote this story and I can't receive
the money so I don't wanna win the money I just wanna win the competition don't want the money.
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