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Drama

12th part of Home. Kinda has to do with prompt. Enjoy!



“Oh.” Is all Daniel can think to say. He knows his dad is looking for him, but he didn’t think he’d find him that fast.

Catherine sighs. “He’s technically your legal guardian, but he did kick you out. I didn’t tell him that you’re here, but I’m not sure if it’s illegal or not.”

“I…” He doesn’t know what to say. “Do I have to leave?”

“No. Well, if he gets authorities involved, you might, but he probably won’t. I don’t think he’d risk it. But that might mean he’ll try to take matters into his own hands.”

This is bad. He thinks. I don’t want Catherine to get in trouble for me being here. 

“I’m sorry, I probably ruined your night.” Catherine says, sighing again. 

He shakes his head. “No, it’s fine. I just-I don’t know.”

“Just tell me what you want me to do, okay?” 

He nods, and they go back to the table. Angel looks at him curiously, but he just shakes his head, and mouths, “Tell you later.”

He’s quiet through the rest of dinner. Catherine looks concerned, but doesn’t say anything. 

When he goes back upstairs, he debates whether or not he should call TJ again. He decides against it, and gives Angel her phone back. I’ll tell him tomorrow. It’s not a big deal.


Daniel can’t fall asleep.

He’s worried, of course. He doesn’t want to leave, and he doesn’t want Catherine to get in trouble, either. 

“Daniel?” A quiet voice says.

It’s dark, but he can see Catherine’s silhouette at the door. “Yeah?”

“Can’t sleep?” She asks, coming in, and sitting on the edge of the bed.

He sits up, and shakes his head. “No.”

“Everything okay?”

He lifts a shoulder. “Just worried, I guess.”

“Your dad?” 

“Yeah.”

She sighs sadly. “I’m sorry. I didn’t-”

“No, it’s not your fault.” He says quickly. “It’s mine.”

“Don’t say that.” She tells him.

He picks at a piece of the blanket, not really wanting to argue. “Can you...tell me about what you were like as a kid?”

“Sure.” She smiles. 

He's grateful he got such an amazing mother.



February 05, 2021 21:55

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15:48 Feb 08, 2021

A little short, but a good addition to the series. Honestly, when you get to a series this long, I think it's okay sometimes to have shorter submissions though, as long as they advance the story. It started out a little shaky to me, but I think you nailed the ending, as usual. That closer is such a good line to wrap everything all up!

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Ari Berri
15:53 Feb 08, 2021

Thank you!

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Meera Lakshmi
14:08 Feb 08, 2021

I should have done this a while ago but I skimmed over it :) 🏳️‍🌈

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Ari Berri
15:30 Feb 08, 2021

:)

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Meera Lakshmi
16:00 Feb 08, 2021

You are a really great writer! I love all of your stories that I have read!

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Ari Berri
16:10 Feb 08, 2021

Thank you! Which is your favorite?

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Meera Lakshmi
16:53 Feb 08, 2021

Unfortunately, I have only read a few, (I plan to read many more) but I really like Timebomb. It was short and sweet, well written and it just roped me in! :) Please keep writing, I know many people love your work!

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Ari Berri
17:47 Feb 08, 2021

I'm glad you liked it. I love writing, so I'll definitely keep writing. Thank you!

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Amel Parvez
12:17 Feb 06, 2021

wasn't it a bit too short? anyways i really like his mother. and when are u gonna post the next part?

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Ari Berri
16:12 Feb 06, 2021

I know, I didn't have a lot of ideas. I like her, too. Probably monday.

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Amel Parvez
16:16 Feb 06, 2021

Oks :) Waiting for Monday to come!

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Coco Longstaff
22:34 Feb 05, 2021

🏳️‍🌈!!!Remember me? We’re both limelights! Anyway,,, how did you write such an amazing story? Like, the dialogue in this is so good. It’s amazing!!

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Ari Berri
22:34 Feb 05, 2021

XD Thank you! And 😎

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Coco Longstaff
22:35 Feb 05, 2021

❤️

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Ari Berri
22:39 Feb 05, 2021

:)

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Hey Ari! Nice job in this story!

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Ari Berri
22:12 Feb 05, 2021

Thanks!

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Ari Berri
22:03 Feb 08, 2021

New part!

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Meera Lakshmi
01:50 Mar 25, 2021

Aww, that part at the end was heartwarming.💕 PS I updated my bio, take a look!

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Ari Berri
02:23 Mar 25, 2021

=) I will!

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Meera Lakshmi
13:55 Feb 10, 2021

Hi Ari! Sorry, I keep commenting. It's fun to have a convo with you about books :)

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Ari Berri
15:07 Feb 10, 2021

That's no problem, I like talking to people.

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Meera Lakshmi
15:12 Feb 10, 2021

:)

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Ari Berri
15:13 Feb 10, 2021

Here's a book question: Who do you think would win in a fight, Harry Potter, or Percy Jackson?

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Meera Lakshmi
15:15 Feb 10, 2021

Hmmmmm. Harry Potter? Probably because spells are quicker than riptide. What do you think?

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Ari Berri
16:25 Feb 10, 2021

Maybe, but Percy can fight, so if he gets rid of the wand, Harry can't do anything.

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Oof, I got downvoted. Please spread this message- (And if your going to do it.) ᴄᴏᴘʏ & ᴘᴀsᴛᴇ: ᴘᴜᴛ ғ♡ʙᴜᴀʀʏ 𝟷𝟺 ɪɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʙɪᴏ ᴛᴏ ᴜᴘᴠᴏᴛᴇ ᴀs ᴍᴀɴʏ ᴘᴇᴏᴘʟᴇ ᴀs ᴘᴏssɪʙʟᴇ ᴏɴ ᴠᴀʟᴇɴᴛɪɴᴇ's ᴅᴀʏ. ʏᴏᴜ ᴅᴏɴ'ᴛ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ᴛᴏ ʙᴜᴛ ɪ'ᴍ ɢᴏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ! ᴘᴜᴛ ᴛʜɪs ɪɴ ᴏᴛʜᴇʀ sᴛᴏʀɪᴇs ᴄᴏᴍᴍᴇɴᴛs, ᴡʜɪʟᴇ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴀᴛ ɪᴛ ᴜᴘᴠᴏᴛᴇ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴘᴇʀsᴏɴ ᴀ ʙɪᴛ! ♡

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23:13 Feb 05, 2021

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Ari Berri
23:15 Feb 05, 2021

Thank you! Also, did you delete a story?

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23:17 Feb 05, 2021

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Ari Berri
23:24 Feb 05, 2021

You had 11 stories, but now you only have 10.

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23:29 Feb 05, 2021

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Ari Berri
22:03 Feb 08, 2021

New part.

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Why so shorttt! True, you did say there wasn't a cliffhanger, thank the god's it wasn't. (I'm atheist.) There wasn't a cliffhanger but the story was insanely shorttt! When will part 13 come out? Also, when will the next part of Dead End come out? Two series working at once!

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Ari Berri
00:06 Feb 06, 2021

I didn't have lots of ideas for this part. Monday, maybe. I'm working on Dead End.

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Ari Berri
22:03 Feb 08, 2021

New part!

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