There was a world where light didnโt exist; where everything was dark, so the only way you could see anything was by the highlights on the objects. Many people wondered about the existence of the highlights because how could there be highlights if thereโs no light at all?
One of our characterโs names was Cara: a modest name for a modest girl.
School was decent for Cara: it wasnโt super fun, as the dictators made sure of that, but her favourite subject was History because she got to learn about things that seemed unreal. She was a quiet, coy little girl who didnโt have any friends or siblings, so she looked lonely often, but she was actually fine.
She learned about how life was before they took over, before life was dark. There used to be something called colours, something that adorned everything beautifully. Colours fascinated Cara the most because life in darkness was quite boring and uneventful, so she thought colours wouldโve been so much fun to experience.
โAll students report to your classrooms immediately!โ shouted the principal over the intercom. Cara ran through the door 2D and jumped in her desk just as the teacher called her for attendance.
โCara?โ her teacher asked.
โHere,โ she responded, unpacking her things.ย
Next to her sat a boy named Atticus, who regarded school as a trash picker regards trash; he didnโt hate it, but he didnโt love it either. Atticus was quite popular, because of his looks and personality, but it was mostly fake.
Atticus was rarely by himself in school, always swarmed by people, but he felt lonely because no one was there for him when he needed them to be. They were just another set of mannequins.
Cara was getting out her books on her desk, slabs of black substance, when she brought out something different. It was still a book, but not like the other ones. This one wasnโt black, or even white. It had something else, something that Atticus and Cara had only heard about in history books.
This book had colour.
Cara had no idea how she got this book, but she and Atticus shared a look right before she stuffed it back into her bag, hoping nobody else saw. Anything with colour was forbidden completely, and since they had never seen it before, everyone had thought it was a joke, but at that moment they knew that they were completely wrong.
Cara went through the day of school without glancing again at the unusual book, but right as the bell ended the day, Atticus ran up to her and said, โFollow me.โ
Cara was much too stunned about the book, it's colour and Atticus, so she just obeyed. They walked outside to the courtyard where plants were growing, threads of dusk climbing up the sky. They walked to the back, where no one could see them, and then Atticus turned around and looked Cara so straight in the eye that she fell down.
โSorry,โ he said shyly, helping her up. Cara looked at him like he was a coloured book, but they had already both seen that, so the metaphor has worn off.
โWhere did you get that book?โ he asked curiously. Cara just glared at him.
โIโm not gonna tell anyone.โ Caraโs glare relaxed a bit.
โPlease?โย
Caraโs glare slid off her face and said, โFine, but if you tell someone-โ
Atticus nodded quickly while she got out the book. It was, well, colourful. In our eyes, it would be a smooth brown leather with a silver buckle tying it together, and in thereโs it was just the same, but they couldnโt describe it. It looked...mythical.
๐๐๐ ๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐: ๐ณ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐ข; ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐. ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐พ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐.
โI donโt know how it got there,โ Cara said, feeling the smooth cover, โit was just there when I opened my backpack.โ
Atticus gently took the book and flipped it over and over, searching for anything unusual, when something fell out. Cara scrambled to find the little note on the ground, and after checking no one else was there, they leaned on the fence and read it.
๐ธ๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐, ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.ย
๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐; ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐, ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ . ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐, ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐.
๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐; ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐, ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐, ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐ถ๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐๐, ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ท๐๐๐'๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐. ๐พ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐.
Atticus and Cara looked at each other.
โWhat does it mean โthe challengeโ?โ Atticus asked, confused.
A smile slowly grew on Caraโs face. โIt means this is the key to freeing ourselves! From this horrible dark world! To a place with colour!โ
Atticus looked even more confused. โWhat?โ
โDid you read the note? It says-โ
โYes, I did, but this canโt be true! Colour canโt be real.โ
โDid you see the book? Itโs colourful! Colour is real, and if you donโt think so, you can drop this. If you believe me, meet me tomorrow at the park. The one with the waterfall,โ Cara shouted and strutted off to her house with the book under her arm. It was Atticusโs turn to look stunned; by Cara or colour or the book, he didnโt know but stunned he was nonetheless.
.>.<.>.<.
โSo you believe me after all,โ said Cara running towards Atticus, who was sitting on a bench in front of the waterfall.
โI did the whole time,โ said Atticus.
โSure. Anyway, how pure does this spring water have to be?โ Cara asked, looking at the waterfall. It was pitch-black, like everything else, but she hoped it was already pure so they didnโt have to waste time finding it. The fish scales would take a while to get, since it was in the Headโs garden. The Head was the ruler of the kingdom; Cara and Atticus didnโt even know he had a garden until they read the note. Thatโs how much information about the Head is known. It would be a struggle to find even where the Head lives, never mind the garden, because it could be on the other side of the city for all they knew.
โHow am I supposed to know?โ said Atticus. Cara ignored him and looked at the waterfall. No chunks were falling in it, because the bright highlights were smooth, but water could be very tainted and have no chunks, so that information wasnโt helpful.
While Cara examined the waterfall by sight, Atticus looked at it with his hands. He felt the smooth bottom until he was blocked. Picking up a rock, underneath there was a plastic film with words on it, so he called Cara over to read it.ย
๐ฒ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. ๐ณ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข; ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐ ๐๐๐. ๐ณ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ก๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ข๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข, ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐, ๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ข. ๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐; ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ข ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ก๐.
โYou have any containers we could use?โ Cara asked.
Atticus shook his head, so Cara looked in her bag and brought out her water bottle. She dumped the remaining water into the pool and asked, โWhereโs the top of the waterfall?โ
Atticus pointed to the sky, and the lower, and then dropped his hand. โI donโt know.โ
โDonโt you have eagle eyes or something?โ
โOh right,โ said Atticus. Everyone had their own โpowerโ or sense enhancement. It didnโt matter about your ancestral ties, because it was completely random. Cara had superhuman hearing, Atticus had great eyesight, etc.
Atticus squinted skyward and his pupils dilated. After staring up for a few seconds, his eyes turned back to normal and he reported to Cara, โItโs way up there, about 10 minutes of walking.โ
โLead the way.โ They climbed up the dark waterfall, a hard feat, for everything was black so you couldnโt see the handles. After a while, they reached the top where a river spilled into the waterfall, and Cara uncapped her bottle. While holding the cap right above the lip of the bottle, she scooped up some water from the river and immediately covered it, screwing it on as hard as possible.
โSo thatโs done,โ Cara said, climbing down the waterfall. โWhat do we do now?โ
โWell, the note said we should make the grey matter next,โ said Atticus beside her.
โHow are we supposed to โcaptureโ light and darkness, and merge them together?โ
โMaybe thereโs another note that tells us how?โ
โWhere would that be?โ
โI donโt know!โ
Cara glared at Atticus for a second before jumping down to the floor. โWhere would you put the note?โ
โSomewhere shiny? So you could store the highlights and the darkness together?โ
Cara looked Atticus in the eye this time. โThatโs brilliant!โ
Atticus blushed while Cara asked, โWhat would a shiny thing be?โ
โ...a mirror?โ
Caraโs eyes widened with understanding and without a warning went running off to her house with Atticus trailing behind. The waterfall was in the townโs square and Caraโs house was further from town, so they had to run for quite a while before they arrived, panting and puffing like a broken train. Cara didnโt wait long for Atticus; she sprinted straight back into her house and up the void-looking stairs to her bathroom, which was not exactly in its cleanest state.
Atticus trudged up the stairs slowly behind her, still breathing hard when he entered the bathroom just as Cara was exiting. They collided hard, knocking Atticus to the ground so Cara helped him up this time.
โSorry!โ they both said at the same time, and then blushed in unison, and then blushed more at the same time. After a formal cough, Cara ushered Atticus into the bathroom with the book, water, and a little pot and spoon set on the counter.
โYou really are brilliant Atticus,โ Cara said while setting up the pot. Atticus blushed again in the darkness, but since they lived in a black world, Cara didnโt notice. Lucky for them, they didnโt even know they had a blushing contest; but we do.
โNow, how do you think we should โcaptureโ these?โ
โMaybe we just...I donโt know how to explain it, could you give the pot to me? I can show you.โ
Cara handed the pot to Atticus and they switched places, so he was right in front of the mirror. Atticus crouched down so his head was in line with the mirror, and he set his arm up so it was perpendicular to the mirrorโs edge. He settled down, turning very still, and then suddenly jerked his arm up, scooping up the darkness along with the highlights into the pot, and covered the pot with his hand. Cara sat down next to him, slightly pushing his arm so a bit of the marbled grey matter spilt on the floor, sloshing around in little ovals, like water does on plastic. Atticus and Cara were silent; they had never seen grey matter before, so it was quite fascinating.ย
โHow did you know how to do that?โ asked Cara quietly.
โI donโt know, I just thought of it so I tried it.โ
โWhat do you know the answer to?โ They both laughed at that, then lidded the pot and decided that that day was already full of lots of adventures, so they would continue tomorrow and meet at Caraโs house.
.>.<.>.<.
Atticus knocked on the door of Caraโs house next afternoon, and was met not by Cara but by her mother, who was quite curious about the boy at the footstep of their home.
โHello, what might your name be?โ asked Caraโs mother politely.
โAtticus.โ
โWhat might you be here for?โ
โRight...I and Cara have a project to do,โ Atticus said.
โWhatโs the project about?โ
Atticus shifted his weight uncomfortably. โUh, itโs about-โ
โItโs about insects Mom! Itโs about insects! We have to research about them; yes, itโs about insects,โ said Cara, catapulting out from the door to save Atticus from this ordeal.
โCool! When youโre finished we can have muffins!โ
Cara just nodded and led Atticus down the steps while her mother called out, โDonโt forget to bring your water bottle!โ
โI already have it!โ Caraโs mother nodded in approval, and Cara and Atticus ran to the town square, far away from Caraโs bit more than nosy mother.
ย โFirst we need to find the Headโs garden. How in the world are we supposed to do that?โ Cara asked.
โWe could use some surveillance or something to find out where he lives first,โ suggested Atticus.ย
Cara nodded and said, โLetโs set up cameras in our neighbours' houses; the Head could be anyone.โ
Atticus agreed, deciding they would buy cameras and place them in their neighbours' houses at the front door; it couldnโt be considered spying if it was for a good cause, right?
They both set them up quickly on 4 houses: two next to Caraโs and two next to Atticusโs. They hooked them up to a computer and watched closely; for a couple hours nothing happened, but suddenly they heard a shuffle from Atticusโs 2nd camera. It was an old man whose name was Jeremiah, but they watched him take off his sunglasses and coat to reveal the Headโs face, with much fewer wrinkles, because the Head had been wearing a mask. Cara observed that his coat was left next to the steps, so she directed Atticus to snag a camera in a pocket. He did it quickly, while the Head was inside, and then he came out and put on the coat, which they now had surveillance of. They watched him walk past Atticusโs house, the town square, the waterfall, and then he stopped at an insalubrious shed. Walking inside, Cara and Atticus saw a magnificent view; one of Roald Dahl and J.K Rowling, one of fantasy and adventure, one of only dreams and magic could create.
It was the garden.
Rushing out of Caraโs house, they ran as fast as they could past the house, the square, the waterfall and arrived at the shed. Atticus almost darted into the shed, but Cara stopped him because she had heard the Head coming. Once he had passed by, they ran in and marvelled at the view.
It was huge, and everything was so colourful; green, yellow, pink, orange, Cara and Atticus were astonished. Species of flowers, plants, trees, bushes, everywhere were so colourful, it was like squirts of paint in their faces.
โWhere are the fish?โ Atticus asked.
Cara just pointed to the little pond in the center, with glistening water and floating lily pads. Little rainbow fish swam around the pond; the life fish.
โShould we just catch them?โ Cara asked. Atticus nodded. Cara thrust her hands into the water and brought out a wiggling fish and tried to stop it from moving, but it squeaked, โNo!โ and dove back into the water.
โYou canโt get their scales by force yโknow,โ a little voice said from behind. Cara pivoted to meet a pixie with transparent wings and pointy ears. โMy nameโs Alette, whatโs yours?โ
โIโm Cara and thatโs Atticus,โ said Cara, pointing to Atticus. โWe really need these scales.โ
โThen you just have to make the fish laugh, because the scales will slide right off,โ said Alette.
Atticus raised his eyebrows but caught another fish and said, โWhy did the bike fall over?โ
The fish looked Atticus in the eye. โWhy?โ
โBecause it was two tired.โ
The fish closed his eyes for a second, but then a hearty laugh escaped from him and his scales just slid off like carrot slices, until new ones grew on his back and he leaped into the water.
Hurriedly, Cara got out the pot and mixed around the grey matter fully and poured in the spring water, turning it into a thin grey material. She crushed up the scales with the spoon, which were surprisingly soft, and mixed it in, creating an iridescent rainbow mixture. Atticus and Alette watched over her shoulder, fascinated. Suddenly the mixture made a clank! sound and instead of a liquid, there was a rainbow key lying in the pot.
โWhere do we get the other key-โ
A note dropped out of the pot which said:
ย ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐ข๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐. ๐๐๐ข "๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ข๐, ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐, ๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐."
๐ถ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐; ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.
Alette shouted, โIโve seen those! Lemme show you where they are.โย
Atticus and Cara followed Alette to the back of the garden where there were two iridescent black and white keys in front of a blank space. After placing the rainbow key next to the others, Cara opened her mouth to ask where the door was just when vines pulled back to reveal a white door.
Wasting no time, Cara and Atticus chanted, โThree keys, one end, please transport us to the other world.โ
The door creaked open, revealing a maze of paths stretching every way imaginable in swirling rainbow colours. Sharing a look with no particular stop in mind, Cara and Atticus ran into the door, to freedom, to a life full of colour, and to another world.
You must sign up or log in to submit a comment.
245 comments
Question: is color just a myth? How do they know what it is, or even begin to understand it? Otherwise, you rock!
Reply
:O gOoD qUeStIoN! Idk Thank youuuuu
Reply
Thanks
Reply
:D np!
Reply
Wow! Great story! A little dystopian I think. Also, I like your poem on your bio! And I love that Christopher Columbus quote I have a painting that says that. :)
Reply
Thank you! :D thank you! ooh cool!
Reply
Also, do you mind reading my story memories and cobwebs?
Reply
Yes! I'll read them asap :)
Reply
Thank you so much :)
Reply
Np! :)
Reply
Part.......7 XD
Reply
:D
Reply
:P
Reply
):)
Reply
?
Reply
it's a :) face and a ): face lol
Reply
Pt. 6!
Reply
ill read it asap
Reply
:)
Reply
Come on, Ame.
Reply
on...? tHe tRaIn??
Reply
XDD ugh. Bad day for both you and me , huh? What went wrong for you? What's up sis?
Reply
well, everything and nothing went wrong at the same time sO oswngasjdfsa
Reply
Okay...... elaborateee?
Reply
herm...frens
Reply
HI!
Reply
heyo
Reply
Please donโt fall into the dark abyss. Ames <3333333
Reply
im already in it...
Reply
Omg..pls donโt do anything bad, talk to your friens<33
Reply
yeah...it'll go away but it always comes back T-T thanks <33
Reply
Ofc Ames <33333
Reply
aiwhbfahsjdfsjf you're one of the only ones who listen~
Reply
Join this: https://www.guilded.gg/i/0k80xDmk Oh no... ouch. I definitely teared up by the end. I really canโt say enough good things about this story. Iโm a Chinese-American young woman - who has a fondness for Mandarin scattered throughout English - so it especially hit hard for me. You captured so many bits of the culture incredibly well: ๅฅๅฅ, ๅฆๅฆ, offering food as a comfort tactic. All of it feels so loyal and true to real life. I absolutely love the tie-ins to other Chinese characters too. Itโs a funny language. (I created my pen name with...
Reply
Thank you, but there's no connection to Chinese in this story, so I think you commented on the wrong story :)
Reply
ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very cool. it's very hard to imagine everything black because well we are so used to color lol very neat job!
Reply
:> thank you! yeah, sometimes I had to go back and be like 'blue doesn't exist why is the sky blue' XD :DD thanks!
Reply
XD yeah np :)
Reply
:DD
Reply
๐จAME SAD ALERT CHEER UP AME๐จ
Reply
okay, sure
Reply
๐
Reply
NOICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I LIKE DIS ALREADYYYYYYYYYYYYYY HEHEHHEEEEEE
Reply
thankssssssss <3
Reply
ofc <3333333
Reply
:D <3
Reply