Threads of a Rumor: The Treasure of Hallbrook

Submitted into Contest #200 in response to: Write a story about someone trying to track down the source of a rumor.... view prompt

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Funny Adventure Fiction

More so than usual, a small town called Hallbrook was consumed with excitement and curiosity. A juicy rumor had swept through the community like a wildfire, leaving many residents eager to uncover its origins. It was a great place for those who loved some juicy gossip, or whispers of what was going on but this was different. There were rumblings of a secret treasure that was buried somewhere in town, and that had ignited many imaginations. Among the town's inhabitants was Josie Miller; a young lady known for her adventurous spirit, and this was just the kind of rumor she enjoyed investigating. When word of this alleged treasure had begun to spread, Josie was determined to find out more about this fascinating rumor. At first she had yearned to discover who started this outrageous story, and see what they were up to by spreading such details in the first place.


Josie embarked on this mission but first visiting the local coffee shop, where a lot of the townsfolk often gathered to share stories and news of what was going on. As expected, this rumor of hidden treasure somewhere in town was a hot topic, and it wasn't difficult to find people eager to talk about it. Josie approached a small group of animated people in one corner of the shop who appeared passionate about the subject and decided to question them about the story's origin.


“Excuse me,” Josie started, as she cleared her throat, “I couldn’t' help but overhear your conversation about this treasure that's hidden in town. Do you have any idea where this silly rumor originated?”


The group of men had a good laugh at her question but were more than happy to oblige her questioning as talking about things was what they loved doing most. They revealed in the attention the young lady was giving her. It was old Mr. Willis, an elderly man, who spoke first.


“Ah, young Miss Miller,” Mr. Willis started, amused by her curiosity. “I believe this rumor began at the old bookstore on Locke Street. It's been said that a mysterious book was found there, and that a map was found hidden among its pages.”


“Thank you, Mr. Willis!” Josie said, as her heart raced with excitement to get such a rich clue to her mystery. “I appreciate your assistance.”


“Always happy to help out a pretty lady,” Mr. Willis said, slyly winking at her.


Despite being old enough to be her grandfather, Josie let Mr. Willis have his moment, and rewarded his help with a smile and promptly left. With great vigor, Josie rushed to the bookstore on Locke hoping to unravel the mystery further. Upon arriving she was greeted by Mrs. Jenkins, who welcomed her with a warm smile as she passed through the door.


“Good afternoon, Miss Miller,” Mrs. Jenkins called, “I do apologize, but your order hasn't arrived yet. I will call you when it arrives.”


“Thanks for the update,” Josie said, as she had forgotten about the novel she had ordered. “But I came over to inquire about something else.”


“Oh, I see,” Mrs. Jenkins said, sounding rather surprised herself. “How may I assist you today?”


“I've been hearing a rumor about a hidden treasure,” Josie replied, “Mr. Willis said that it was discovered here. Do you know anything about that?”


“Ah, the rumor has made its way to you too, has it?” Mrs. Jenkins said as she softly chuckled, “Well, it all started when a young couple purchased an old book here. Within its pages this couple stumbled upon a map.”


“That's what Mr. Willis said!” Josie said, becoming more excited by the second.


“From what I heard listening to that couple,” Mrs. Jenkins continued, “Is that this map led to a treasure that was hidden within the center of Hallbrook.”


“Where can I find this book?” Josie inquired, eager to know more.


Mrs. Jenkins smiled at the young lady and pointed to a corner of the shop that not many people would browse that often.


“Why, it's right over there,” Mrs. Jenkins answered, “The book you seek on display, but it’s not for sale. It’s not sealed either, so feel free to have a look.”


Following Mrs. Jenkin's instructions, Josie eagerly made her way to the back of the shop where she found the book Jenkins was referring to. It was a very old book, with leather that has clearly faded over the years, but was still in good condition to be used and carefully read by anyone who wanted to come along. Josie carefully opened the book and started to skip and skim through its pages. About halfway through the book, a small, folded piece of paper fell out and landed softly on the floor. At first Josie assumed it was a bookmark from the person who was previously reading it. When Josie picked up the piece of paper and slowly opened it, much to her surprise it was the very map she was looking for! It was an older map of Hallbrook, depicting various landmarks around town that would all lead to an unknown destination. Josie stuffed the map into her pocket and then put the book back where she found it.


“Did you find what you were looking for?” Mr. Jenkins called out.


“I did, thank you!” Josie called out, “I'll check back in a few days regarding my order.”


“I look forward to it,” Mrs. Jenkins said with a smile, “Have a good day!”


Once outside the book shop, Josie wandered off to a local deli to get something to eat while she checked this map out for ideas on where it would lead her first. While munching down on a corn beef on rye with extra coleslaw on the side, Josie scoured the map and realized that the few clues that were on it all pointed to one place: the old maple tree that was located in the center of town. Once she finished wolfing down her lunch, Josie scampered off for the center of town and slowly approached the old maple tree. It was massive, and majestic, a symbol of Hallbrook and all the growth its people have done much like the massive tree.


Josie stood there before the towering Maple Tree, the first landmark on her quest, looking at all its sprawling branches that reached up into the sky. Its thick leaves also offered a large shadow for anyone who wanted to seek shelter from the blazing sun. When her mapped tightly clenched in her hand, Josie carefully looked around the big tree’s trunk searching for any clues that might lead her closer to what she was looking for. While running her fingers along the rough bark, Josie caught a glimmer of something wedged between two small branches. She was more than excited when she pulled out a small piece of parchment from its hiding place. As she unfolded it, Josie discovered a cryptic riddle written in elegant calligraphy: 


“In the heart of nature's embrace,

you seek the whisper of water's grace.

Once you listen closely to its secret,

only then will mother nature admit."


While it would take most people time to figure out what it meant, Josie was smart enough to solve the riddle almost instantly. She knew all the landmarks around town and instantly knew what was being referenced here by riddle: the whispering creek.


Eager to get to where she was going quickly, Josie went home and borrowed her little brother’s bike because the creek was quite a distance from where she was. It took her the better part of twenty minutes to ride over, but she parked over by a small bridge that ran over the creek that was for hikers and bikers that often used the town’s trail. As she walked over the bridge, Josie carefully looked over the calm waters and did as the parchment had instructed and listened very carefully. For a few moments there was nothing, but she sat down and stopped making noise and sat there quietly.


Then she heard it. A small bloop.


Josie paused and waited, and then she heard it again. Bloop!


Eager to see where that sound was coming from, she started to look around and when she checked underneath the bridge, the source of the sound was discovered. There was a bottle tied up underneath the bridge, and the blooping sound came from it bobbing up and down in the creek. Josie carefully got closer to the creek and fished the glass bottle out of it and walked back up to the bridge to inspect it. After removing the cork, she found a rolled-up scroll that was tied up with a delicate ribbon. Once again, there was a message written on the paper with exquisite calligraphy: 


“Through time's grip where memories dwell,

you must discover a chapel’s forgotten spell.

Seek the answer amongst ancient stone,

and the treasure's route shall be known.”


Josie’s heart skipped a beat as she was overcome with excitement for she already knew where her journey would take her next. Taking her bike back into town, she rode quickly peddled towards the next landmark on her hunt: the Forgotten Chapel.


It took Josie less than five minutes to bike from the bridge at the creek to the Chapel that the clue in the bottle referred to. The building was actually no longer used for religious services, which is why everyone referred to as forgotten by the people of Hallbrook. Josie wandered around the building as it was locked up but came across something while peeking about. There was a key lying on the floorboard near the main doors and while Josie was worried about who might be around, she used the key to open the door and sneak inside.


Josie stepped into the hallowed space of the Forgotten Chapel, which people had referred to as a sanctuary of forgotten prayers and whispered tales. There was a dim light filtered through stained glass windows, casting colorful patterns upon the ancient stones that formed the chapel's structure. The young lady’s heart filled with a sense of reverence as Josie carefully explored the chapel's interior.


Cobwebs clung to corners, and dust particles danced in the air, carrying an aura of history and mystery. Josie’s eyes were drawn to a worn wooden pew, where she found a small, weathered book lying atop a velvet cushion. Her curiosity piqued as she approached the pew and picked up the book. Carefully dusting off its cover, the title, embossed in faded gold letters read “The Secrets of Sunset Hill.” Josie’s pulse quickened with enthusiasm as she realized the importance of this discovery.


Josie opened the old book with delicate anticipation, revealing aged pages filled with handwritten notes, sketches, and pressed flowers. Leafing through its contents, she found a passage marked with an elegant quill pen written in the same calligraphy the previous two notes had:


“Within this chapel's solemn walls,

seek the key to the horizon's calls.

Ascend the path where the sun shall rest,

and the treasure's home shall manifest.”


The elegant riddle sent a shiver down Josie’s spine for the cover of the book already held the answer to its clue: Sunset Hill.


Leaving the chapel behind, Josie biked down the winding roads, guided only by the setting sun towards Sunset Hill. As she ascended the hill, Josie's anticipation grew, and her breath quickened. The landscape unfolded before her, revealing a breathtaking panoramic view of Hallbrook in all its glory. Once at the summit of Sunset Hill, Josie found herself standing on a grassy knoll that looked quite majestic. This was the place the clue had led her to, and Josie’s heart swelled with a mixture of awe and wonder. She had a feeling that the treasure, whatever form it might take, would soon be revealed. Once at the summit of Sunset Hill, Josie found herself standing on a grassy knoll that looked quite majestic. This was the place the clue had led her to, and Josie’s heart swelled with a mixture of awe and wonder. She had a feeling that the treasure, whatever form it might take, would soon be revealed.


As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting its final rays of the day, Josie remained on Sunset Hill, her eyes scanning the surroundings, ready to uncover the ultimate truth that lay hidden within the fading light. The treasure was within her grasp, and the culmination of her quest was just moments away. For as the sun was going down, there was a small light that was reflecting from below. A light shining towards the hill that was telling Josie where the treasure’s home was, as indicated by the previous clue.


Josie took note of what part of town that light was coming from and rode down the hill, eager to see where this clue was really leading her. At the final landmark, Josie found herself in a small park that was in the suburbs of town. When she arrived, she recognized two people waiting for her. It was Mr. Willis and Mrs. Jenkins. There were a few other folks from around town with them and they all applauded when they saw her arrive.


“What’s going on?” Josie inquired, just a little confused.


“Josie, dear, we knew you could do it,” Mrs. Jenkins said, her eyes twinkling with mischief.


Puzzled, Josie asked, “You knew?”


Mr. Willis chuckled; his voice filled with amusement. “Indeed, Miss Miller. The treasure was never about gold or jewels. It was the thrill of the chase, the excitement of bringing a community together and learning about its rich history.”


“My father and I have been spreading this rumor for a long time,” Mrs. Jenkins added, revealing her relation to Mr. Willis. “We did this hoping to ignite a sense of adventure and camaraderie among the townsfolk.”


Josie couldn't help but laugh. “You had me hooked, that's for sure! It was quite a journey you two put me on.”


Mr. Willis nodded, pleased with the outcome. “When you get to my age, young lady, you must find your fun wherever you can.”


“It seems like you've discovered something invaluable along the way,” Mrs. Jenkins added, “A sense of connection and shared experience. I know what you’re going through because I was the first person to take this journey. My father originally wrote this quest for me but when it was over, I didn’t want it to end.”


“And that’s where this all started,” Mr. Willis continued, “We decided to share the adventure with others to enjoy as well.”


“Well, thank you for sharing,” Josie said, smiling at the fun she had throughout the day.


And as the sun set over Hallbrook, Josie Miller realized the treasure she sought did not lie in material possessions, but in the bonds of her community. What started with a simple rumor and was forged in pursuit was a common goal to appreciate where one comes from. The town of Hallbrook was the real treasure; a town full of good people who cared and would do anything for their fellow neighbor. A treasure that Josie would continue to appreciate the longer she remained in the dainty little town she called home. 


May 30, 2023 04:04

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S. W. Vaughn
02:30 Jun 08, 2023

Hi P.J.. Yikes! on all the Urgent Love Spell Caster comments here! Is there an admin who can delete stuff like that? Anyway, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story. It has a great cozy mystery vibe (without the murder, haha) and I found it quite heartwarming. Also wanted to point out that in the paragraph that starts with "Leaving the chapel behind," there are several sentences repeated. The second half of that paragraph appears twice in a row. This seems like it would be a great character and town for some kind of YA mystery s...

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P.J. Lowry
03:15 Jun 08, 2023

I did report the other comments, that's all I can do. As for the error, good catch! I guess I got a little carried away with my cutting and pasting lol. But since the story has been approved, I can no longer edit it. Hopefully they'll let me fix it after the contest is over. Thanks for your kind words... they are appreciated!

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