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Thriller Kids Fiction

As soon as Charli stepped in, she felt weird. She felt anxious. She ignored the feeling and walked to her mom's room in the hospital with her 10 years old brother, Charles. Charles is a bright student who gets A+ in all subjects except Math. While Charli is a student that can get easily traumatized since she has depression. She has a special connection with her phone and diaries. She likes to be alone and her only friend is her brother.


Her mother was diagnosed having Alzheimer 6 years ago, when Charles was born. Her mother slipped down the stairs earlier in the morning and was sent to the hospital. Thankfully, there was only minor injuries. Not to mention that this happened on the morning of Charli's 16th birthday.


She hugged her mother, seeing that her mother was not bruised. Her mother wanted to drink milk tea so Charli and Charles decided to go to the hospital's cafe and bought some milk tea.


As she arrived, she saw an Artive (Artives are artificial intelligence

robots and some of the robots have a purpose of becoming a nurse in a hospital) The Artive said "Hi guys, I'm your artificial intelligence nurse, Model 1560, If you need any help, you can ask me-" the Artive stuttered. "Why do Artives stutter?", Charles asked. The Artive's eyes suddenly turned red and its skin changes to a normal metal colour, and then the Artive headed out from the room. "What's happening?", Charli asked. "I don't know kids-", Mom stuttered, seeing the light flicker.


Suddenly, the power went off. Charli turned her flashlight on. Suddenly, they heard the door creak. Charli turned off her flashlight and tried her best to stay silent. The door then closed, making Charli relieved. "If anything happen, run!" her mom whispered. They heard a door creak and Charli said "Run!". Charli and Charles ran through the door and ran to the cafe. Charli turned on her flashlight while she's running and both of them ran straight to the cafe then hid under a table.


Charles: What are we gonna do now, sis?. *eyes starts to water*

Charli: I don't know! *starts tearing up*

Charles: *Hears metallic noises*

Charli: Isn't that a sound of an Artive walking-


They both ran away holding hands with flashlights off. They then hid in the surgery room. The surgery room was very cold but they could get some weapons there. Suddenly, they heard a sound of Artive walking.


Charli: *Stares back*

Artive: *Takes scalpel*

Artive: *Stabs Charles's hands*

Charles: Ouch, you dumb metal! *Stabs the Artive's head*

Artive: *Head bleeds blue blood*

Charli: Run!

Artive: *Collapses*

Charles: Run!

Artive: *Makes a sound that's weird*

Charli: What is it doing?

Charles: You know what, just run!


They ran out of the surgery room. Little do they know, the Artive signalled other Artives in the hospital and now all of the Artives have weapons. Meanwhile, the two siblings are trying to make a plan.


Charli: We have to formulate a plan.

Charles: Any ideas?

Charli: I don't know.

Charles: What if we go up to the roof and ask for help?

Charli: Great idea!


The two starts walking to the roof with their flashlights on. On the long stairs, they heard metallic sounds, a loud one. They knew it was them, but they thought that the Artives can't do anything.

The Artives came to them but Charles saw the scalpel on their hands. They both ran up to the roofs, scared. The Artives were running faster than ever. All of the Artives are repeating the same words: "Kill humans! Kill humans!". As they got to the roof, a helicopter landed, noticing them. Charli heard metallic noises and it's getting nearer. Charli laid against the door, trying to keep it closed.


Charles: Charli! What are you doing! *crying*

Charli: Go! *tears starts dripping*

Charles: I won't leave you here!


The door starts to shake. The Artives tries to push the door more and more. Charli is starting to feel weak.


Charles: I promised Mom to not leave you!

Charli: Go Charles! I can't hold on any longer! *tears dripping*

The rescuers in the helicopter: *Pulls Charles into the helicopter*

Charles: Don't leave my sister here! *Cries*

Rescuer 1: We're tryna save ya-

Charles: *Jumps out of helicopter*


The door broke, freeing the Artives. Charli got stabbed in the back a few times and collapsed. Charles ran to Charli and got stabbed then collapsed too. The helicopter flew away, leaving them who is now injured.


Charli: I-I love you... *coughs blood*'

Charles: I love y-you too...

Charli: *Holds hand*

Charles: *Hold hand*

Charli: *Smiles*

Charles: *Dies*

Charli: *Looks at Charles*

Charli: I'm sorry bro.

Charli: *Cries*

Charli: *Coughs blood more*

Charli: *Stands up*

Charli: I'll try to live for Mom and Charles.

Charli: Rescuers! I'm alive!

Helicopter: *Still flies away although they heard her*

Charli: I'm sorry bro- *collapses*

Charli: I'm sorry... *cries*

Charli: *Breathes in and out*

Charli: *Dies*


News: Artives in a hospital in Chicago went crazy. The hospital received reports of the Artive nurses acting weird in the hospital but they ignored the report. This incident leaves no survivor behind. There's two kids who the rescuers could see but they got killed by the Artives shortly after. It is reported that the rescuers chose to leave after seeing the kids dead. The president apologized and will make sure that the Artive Company will make them more safe. These cases are now every where in USA and we must be aware. This is the report for ABC by Amelia Carter. May you have a good night.


President: Any survivors there?

Rescuers: Nope sir.

President. Even if there is, I don't care if they die.

President: If they die we could overcome overpopulation in our country.

President: Explode the hospital!

Hospital: *Explodes*

Charlis's body: *Burning*

Charles' body: *Burning*

President: Ask the company to make more Artives that can easily have an error. We need to kill some humans.

His PA: Okay sir, I'll call them now.

President: Just how I wanted... *Laughs loudly*



February 20, 2021 03:45

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