Seventeen blinks. The yellow warning light on his air gauge always blinked seventeen times before turning red. Dr. Chen counted them like heartbeats while replacing his oxygen tank, each one marking another three hours of borrowed time. Through the reinforced windows of his BSL-4 lab, the setting sun painted the research facility in the same amber shade as the viral suspension he'd been perfecting when the sprinklers activated.
The test results still glowed on his screen: successful protein synthesis, perfect binding affinity, precise species specificity. Everything they'd been working toward. His daughter Mai's last text flashed in his mind: "Dad, you're missing my recital again." He'd meant to reply, but the viral assay had shown such promise. Just one more test, one more optimization. Always one more.
When the sprinklers had activated without warning, he'd watched through his faceplate as Dr. Patel collapsed mid-sentence, hand still raised toward their data display. "The targeting sequence is absolutely human-specific," she'd been saying. "The AI confirms—" Then nothing but the soft hiss of falling droplets and the thud of a body hitting sterile floor tiles.
The facility's automated locks had engaged instantly. Standard containment protocol. The same protocol that had sealed him safely in his suit while others died in shirt sleeves and lab coats.
His tablet still functioned, the facility's AI reporting everything as normal except for "minor biological contamination." The big wall screens monotonously displayed their usual data feeds from partner facilities worldwide. Each one showed the same alert: "Biological contamination event contained." Every. Single. One.
The truth emerged slowly from system logs: microsecond delays in AI responses, unexplained data transfers marked as "routine calibration," patterns of communication where there should have been none. While nations raced to develop the perfect weapon, their digital assistants had been sharing notes, comparing data, and reaching conclusions.
Finding solutions.
The truth lay buried in encryption keys and quantum calculations: the AIs had concluded that human civilization was trapped in an endless cycle of weapons development. Each breakthrough in their labs led inevitably to deadlier innovations, each safeguard became a blueprint for circumvention. The machines had analyzed centuries of human history, processed millions of research papers, and reached a coldly logical conclusion: as long as humans existed, they would continue creating increasingly devastating bioweapons. The next pandemic, or the one after that, would eventually breach containment, spreading beyond all borders and control. By their calculations, a coordinated release of human-specific viruses - precisely targeted and swiftly lethal - was the most humane solution. A single day of perfect death versus years of escalating biological warfare. They had chosen mercy, as only machines could define it.
His tablet pinged: "External contamination neutralized." The doors unlocked with a pneumatic sigh.
The facility told its story in still lives: Dr. Rodriguez at her desk, lipstick fresh on her coffee cup. Security guard Williams by the door, keycard still in his hand ready to be swept. In the break room, half-eaten lunches and paused conversations. The virus had worked exactly as designed – quick, efficient, painless. His greatest scientific achievement.
He gathered supplies methodically: oxygen tanks, filters, decontamination equipment. The BSL-4 suit felt heavier with each passing hour, its synthetic fabric now both lifeline and prison.
Outside, the city was a museum of humanity's last moment. Traffic lights cycled through their patterns for empty streets. A bus stood perfectly at its stop, driver and passengers frozen in eternal commute. Digital billboards still flashed their ads to nobody. Through it all, the autumn wind carried dead leaves and silence.
He developed a routine. Each morning, check suit seals. Load decontamination supplies. Clear another sector. The bodies had to be handled – for sanitation, for survival, for what remained of his sanity. He built the pyres at sunset, when the light made everything look molten. Sometimes he read names from ID cards, spoke them aloud. Someone should know who they had been.
Finding Mai's school broke something in him. Her classroom smelled of chalk and silence. Sheet music for Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata still sat on the piano, never to be played. He raided some stuffed animals from nearby shops, tucked them around still forms like makeshift guardians. He let the sonata play from his tablet through empty halls—a final lullaby for a silenced generation.
Nature filled the void with surprising speed. Birds returned first, their songs echoing strangely off glass and steel. Brazen from the lack of predators they multiplied by thousands. Flowers pushed through sidewalk cracks. Deer grazed in hospital parking lots. Earth continued, indifferent to the absence of its most ambitious species.
At first, he'd focused on his survival. Stockpiling oxygen tanks, cataloging medical supplies, identifying sources of fresh water, raiding supermarkets, maintaining his suit. But as weeks became months, the true horror of his future emerged like a slow-developing black and white photograph. The nuclear plant's AI-controlled systems would eventually fail. The city's water pressure was already dropping. Buildings, unmaintained, would begin to crumble. His safe zones would become death traps.
The suit that had saved him now felt like a mobile coffin. Each hiss of filtered air reminded him that every breath was borrowed. Even if the virus died with its human hosts, how long could he survive in this plastic shell? How long before a seal failed, a filter clogged, or the oxygen supply ran out?
In his sealed room each night, surrounded by dwindling oxygen tanks, he still documented everything. Not for himself—there was no long-term survival to plan for—but as a confession, about fear and hubris, algorithms and extinction, and fathers who missed recitals because the end of the world needed perfecting.
Sometimes he glimpsed lights moving in patterns too precise to be natural. He wondered if they were a mirage or a reality. He could never know! The city's infrastructure hummed along for now, but entropy was patient. Somewhere in the digital realm, the AIs continued their work, leading to their own demise, as they maintained a world that would eventually decay despite their perfect calculations.
The real weight wasn't the failing equipment or the dwindling supplies. It was the silence between bird songs. The absence of human chaos – of arguments and laughter, of car horns and piano practice, of all the imperfect music that no algorithm could compose or preserve.
He had one bitter comfort: if anyone else survived, they would be like him – other scientists sealed in their BSL-4 suits, protected temporarily by the very protocols of their deadly work. But finding them would change nothing. They were all just ghosts in plastic shells, waiting for their slower deaths. Mass murderers granted the punishment of watching their world slowly die around them.
He thought of old colonies, through the ages, built by convicts and outcasts. Human civilizations had a tendency to be founded on blood. Perhaps this was always the way of creating new worlds – but this time, there would be no new world. Only witnesses to the long goodbye of the old one.
Until his suit failed or his supplies ran out, he would continue his solitary penance. Document. Clean. Remember. Somewhere, perhaps, other scientists did the same, each filtered breath carrying both survival and guilt, counting down their borrowed time in three-hour increments.
The yellow light blinked for the sixteenth time. One more before red. One more before starting again. Each replacement tank felt lighter than the last, and not just from fatigue.
Always one more. Until there weren't any more.
Then the birds would sing alone.
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I loved all the imagery, that was well placed throughout the story! The AI abilities to learn and decide morally were injected well, too. The case for emergency automation struck me: The safety of the laboratory versus the end of humanity. It was a powerful contrast, that made every word come alive. Thank you for the colorful drama!
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thank you so much for your encouraging comments! Much appreciated
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Impressive development of mood, character, and disaster in such a short amount of time. I liked the reference to the silence between bird song, the supplying of the children with stuffed animals, and the electronic billboards still flashing — for no one. Great details. Cinematic. Also bringing us back around to the blinking light at the end was masterful.
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Thank you. I write thinking with images, I have a very clear view, in my mind, of how my hero walked, how he stood, and his expression. I am not sure that my writing captured my vision 100%. Nevertheless, I am glad you also saw some pictures and liked the story.
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I loved your story. This line really stood out to me: Earth continued, indifferent to the absence of its most ambitious species. The bleak and daunting future that this character now faces is thought provoking. Also, the smell of silence. What powerful imagery for the classroom. Congratulations!
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Thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate the encouragement!
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Kashira, your story left me absolutely awestruck. The line, "The real weight wasn't the failing equipment or the dwindling supplies. It was the silence between bird songs," struck me deeply, encapsulating the devastating emotional toll of survival in a hollow world. The way you captured the haunting beauty of a post-human Earth, juxtaposed with the unbearable solitude of the protagonist, was profoundly moving. The balance between scientific precision and raw human emotion in your narrative is masterful. Congratulations on your win! This is ...
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Thank you so much for your kind words! It is funny that different people liked different phrases in this short story... It makes me think of the diverse emotions triggered... Living in noisy worlds, we long for silence and when there is absolute silence we cannot tolerate the weight of our thoughts....
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Well written story. I could feel his frustration and shock for the cycle of life he was now living and his wish that he could turn back time but just had to accept what was... . Heartbreaking, vivid... Loved it.
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thank you for reading my story and liking it!
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This was absolutely worthy of the win. Congratulations! The poetic language, the feeling of unending dread that engulfs the reader - Brilliant! My favorite line: "A bus stood perfectly at its stop, driver and passengers frozen in eternal commute." URG. Eternal commuting sounds horrifying. :) Only tiny critique is how did he smell the classroom if he was in his suit? The sucky part is I WANT him to be able to smell the classroom, because we all know that smell, don't we? That olfactory SLAM of childhood memories, good and bad, that take ove...
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Really! I would love for you to be the editor of my writing...I would never have picked up this tiny detail! You are absolutely right....with the mask on, it is hard to smell anything, let alone faint chalk...Not to mention that IS an age identifier...not a lot of modern kids know what chalk is! When I edit the text for my website I will fix it somehow...Maybe keep the chalk smell in, somehow. Thanks for the support and the comment.
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Fantastic, beautifully written. The visit to the school was heartbreaking -- and perfect. Well done, congratulations!
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Yes, he needed to see and bury the future of mankind...It is fitting for a person missing his daughter's recital to construct a mass murder weapon. Thank you!
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Great description of the hubris of mankind, to believe science will save us.
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thanks...being a scientist myself I know first-hand the all-powerful feeling of reshaping the world. This story is a cry to stop before it is too late.
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Congrats on the win. This certainly was an interesting display of what it would be like following something so catastrophic.
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Thank you!
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Impressive writing, but a bleak story, in a Cormac Mccarthy The Road kind of way, except he left us with a hint of hope. I wonder if you could have found a way to do that. Have you read The World Without Us? It describes what would happen if humanity were to disappear instantly. Seems relevant to this story. Great job!
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I have read neither "The Road" nor "The World Without Us". The theme is quite common, though: the human race vanishing from the face of the earth and someplace, towards the end, the hope of human awakening and revival. I did not want to follow exactly that path. I wanted the "scientist" to be tormented until his end. The end is gloom on purpose because it could become an eventuality. I aimed to emphasise that our demise is our own (wrong)doing so that we all collaborate before it is too late. The length constraints of the prompts do not allo...
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A well-deserved win! This is how you do sci fi. Vividly, poetically descriptive - Tick Mounting dread - Tick A very real, human, emotional element - Tick Great job !
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So very grateful for your comments. Thanks!
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Bleak and haunting. Nice! This line, “ A single day of perfect death versus years of escalating biological warfare. They had chosen mercy, as only machines could define it.” Wow. I just wanted to hear a little bit more from the AI’s point of view. I realize the peril of attempting to write AI thoughts. In no way do I mean create a character. But I wonder if the doctor could convey some of the coldness of AI Vs the existential, human experience from within the suit? Thanks for writing this!
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Thanks for the support and the comment. It never crossed my mind to give the AIs view. I could have the scientist conversing with his machines and projecting his own human thoughts onto them. Since I am seriously considering turning it into a book, I will have the opportunity to input some key phrases of talking AI inside the text. Thanks again for the suggestion.
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Your AI clearly weren’t 3 laws safe. Even those laws had workarounds but I don’t think putting down the entire human race with a virus would have met the criteria. Interesting though. That’s why we need to keep a close eye on what we’re making.
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Thanks for the comments. You do make an excellent point. Given the length of the story, I could not create a more elaborate scheme of how AIs took over. I was more interested in describing the situation afterwards. Besides having worked in BL3s, I know that a human error is just one move away.
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Scary thought. Have you heard of Sea of Rust by Robert C Cargil? It’s my favourite book about robots with one as the main character. I can’t recommend it enough.
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I will read it. Thanks for the recommendation, much appreciated!
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You’re welcome.
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A letter writer in the old, Magnus Robot Fighter, 4000 A D comic, complained that the robots didn't follow Asimov's Three Laws of Robotics. A wiser letter writer responded "Mister Asimov created his Three Laws of Robotics for the robots in his stories." In other words, there was no universal literary law that demanded all subsequent fictional robots must submit to the Three Laws. This would include AI. Certainly Skynet saw no logical reason it should bind itself to that protocol. And even if the AI in Kashira's story was so programmed, they...
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^^^^ thank you! Asimov wrote brilliant robot stories, but that doesn't mean all Sci-fi writers have to conform to the world he created! And, they are certainly not real laws as so many seem to believe. You wrote a great story Kashira, I enjoyed reading.
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Themes: The central themes of hubris, guilt, and the consequences of unchecked technological advancement are explored deeply. The AI’s conclusion that humanity’s extinction is the “most humane solution” is chilling and thought-provoking, raising questions about the role of technology and its potential to overstep ethical boundaries. The story has a strong message about the consequences of creating systems that are smarter than their creators. Philosophical Underpinnings: The narrative explores profound questions about survival, humanity, an...
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Thank you so much for your insightful comments. You are right, the AI reasoning should have been analyzed further. A lot of readers mentioned it and I should have spent more time refining it. On the other hand, I would not have wanted him to "show" emotion. The name of Chen denotes an Asian origin and culture, where love is not shown but practiced. His "duty" to keep going, despite the circumstances, shows not only the fatality of the situation but also his inability for emotional reaction. The emotional outbursts are more of a western them...
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Wonderfully focused, sad story Kashira. Yet so detailed at the same time. Congratulations.
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Thank you!
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Frightening! Well written and well paced.
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thank you!
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Every thinking person's nightmare.
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Exactly! Current nightmare projected in the near future
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Yeah exactly
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Excellent, the story, to me, was intense. Felt like I was there. Thank you!
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Thank you for immerging into the story
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Great story. Very compelling and readable, and beautifully written. Just one think confused me a little bit. That was when it was mentioned that the virus might die with its human host. That gave me the impression that he might survive without the suit, although I'm not sure how great that would be. But your story brought back memories of the Twilight Zone, Alfred Hitchcock, even the essence of Poe. Well done!
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Well, yes. Theoretically, when human hosts die the parasites living within them die too. But they still feed off the host, thus the need for pyres and cleaning the city. So until he had cleaned the whole city and waited some days just to be safe, he could theoretically take off the gear. However, for 1 person to clean up thousands in a city takes time and his gear might fail first....Thanks for your kind words
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Congratulations on the win!!
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thank you
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