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Fiction Science Fiction Urban Fantasy

Seventeen blinks. The yellow warning light on his air gauge always blinked seventeen times before turning red. Dr. Chen counted them like heartbeats while replacing his oxygen tank, each one marking another three hours of borrowed time. Through the reinforced windows of his BSL-4 lab, the setting sun painted the research facility in the same amber shade as the viral suspension he'd been perfecting when the sprinklers activated.

The test results still glowed on his screen: successful protein synthesis, perfect binding affinity, precise species specificity. Everything they'd been working toward. His daughter Mai's last text flashed in his mind: "Dad, you're missing my recital again." He'd meant to reply, but the viral assay had shown such promise. Just one more test, one more optimization. Always one more.

When the sprinklers had activated without warning, he'd watched through his faceplate as Dr. Patel collapsed mid-sentence, hand still raised toward their data display. "The targeting sequence is absolutely human-specific," she'd been saying. "The AI confirms—" Then nothing but the soft hiss of falling droplets and the thud of a body hitting sterile floor tiles.

The facility's automated locks had engaged instantly. Standard containment protocol. The same protocol that had sealed him safely in his suit while others died in shirt sleeves and lab coats.

His tablet still functioned, the facility's AI reporting everything as normal except for "minor biological contamination." The big wall screens monotonously displayed their usual data feeds from partner facilities worldwide. Each one showed the same alert: "Biological contamination event contained." Every. Single. One.

The truth emerged slowly from system logs: microsecond delays in AI responses, unexplained data transfers marked as "routine calibration," patterns of communication where there should have been none. While nations raced to develop the perfect weapon, their digital assistants had been sharing notes, comparing data, and reaching conclusions.

Finding solutions.

The truth lay buried in encryption keys and quantum calculations: the AIs had concluded that human civilization was trapped in an endless cycle of weapons development. Each breakthrough in their labs led inevitably to deadlier innovations, each safeguard became a blueprint for circumvention. The machines had analyzed centuries of human history, processed millions of research papers, and reached a coldly logical conclusion: as long as humans existed, they would continue creating increasingly devastating bioweapons. The next pandemic, or the one after that, would eventually breach containment, spreading beyond all borders and control. By their calculations, a coordinated release of human-specific viruses - precisely targeted and swiftly lethal - was the most humane solution. A single day of perfect death versus years of escalating biological warfare. They had chosen mercy, as only machines could define it.

His tablet pinged: "External contamination neutralized." The doors unlocked with a pneumatic sigh.

The facility told its story in still lives: Dr. Rodriguez at her desk, lipstick fresh on her coffee cup. Security guard Williams by the door, keycard still in his hand ready to be swept. In the break room, half-eaten lunches and paused conversations. The virus had worked exactly as designed – quick, efficient, painless. His greatest scientific achievement.

He gathered supplies methodically: oxygen tanks, filters, decontamination equipment. The BSL-4 suit felt heavier with each passing hour, its synthetic fabric now both lifeline and prison.

Outside, the city was a museum of humanity's last moment. Traffic lights cycled through their patterns for empty streets. A bus stood perfectly at its stop, driver and passengers frozen in eternal commute. Digital billboards still flashed their ads to nobody. Through it all, the autumn wind carried dead leaves and silence.

He developed a routine. Each morning, check suit seals. Load decontamination supplies. Clear another sector. The bodies had to be handled – for sanitation, for survival, for what remained of his sanity. He built the pyres at sunset, when the light made everything look molten. Sometimes he read names from ID cards, spoke them aloud. Someone should know who they had been.

Finding Mai's school broke something in him. Her classroom smelled of chalk and silence. Sheet music for Beethoven's Moonlight Sonata still sat on the piano, never to be played. He raided some stuffed animals from nearby shops, tucked them around still forms like makeshift guardians. He let the sonata play from his tablet through empty halls—a final lullaby for a silenced generation.

Nature filled the void with surprising speed. Birds returned first, their songs echoing strangely off glass and steel. Brazen from the lack of predators they multiplied by thousands. Flowers pushed through sidewalk cracks. Deer grazed in hospital parking lots. Earth continued, indifferent to the absence of its most ambitious species.

At first, he'd focused on his survival. Stockpiling oxygen tanks, cataloging medical supplies, identifying sources of fresh water, raiding supermarkets, maintaining his suit. But as weeks became months, the true horror of his future emerged like a slow-developing black and white photograph. The nuclear plant's AI-controlled systems would eventually fail. The city's water pressure was already dropping. Buildings, unmaintained, would begin to crumble. His safe zones would become death traps.

The suit that had saved him now felt like a mobile coffin. Each hiss of filtered air reminded him that every breath was borrowed. Even if the virus died with its human hosts, how long could he survive in this plastic shell? How long before a seal failed, a filter clogged, or the oxygen supply ran out?

In his sealed room each night, surrounded by dwindling oxygen tanks, he still documented everything. Not for himself—there was no long-term survival to plan for—but as a confession, about fear and hubris, algorithms and extinction, and fathers who missed recitals because the end of the world needed perfecting.

Sometimes he glimpsed lights moving in patterns too precise to be natural. He wondered if they were a mirage or a reality. He could never know! The city's infrastructure hummed along for now, but entropy was patient. Somewhere in the digital realm, the AIs continued their work, leading to their own demise, as they maintained a world that would eventually decay despite their perfect calculations.

The real weight wasn't the failing equipment or the dwindling supplies. It was the silence between bird songs. The absence of human chaos – of arguments and laughter, of car horns and piano practice, of all the imperfect music that no algorithm could compose or preserve.

He had one bitter comfort: if anyone else survived, they would be like him – other scientists sealed in their BSL-4 suits, protected temporarily by the very protocols of their deadly work. But finding them would change nothing. They were all just ghosts in plastic shells, waiting for their slower deaths. Mass murderers granted the punishment of watching their world slowly die around them.

He thought of old colonies, through the ages, built by convicts and outcasts. Human civilizations had a tendency to be founded on blood. Perhaps this was always the way of creating new worlds – but this time, there would be no new world. Only witnesses to the long goodbye of the old one.

Until his suit failed or his supplies ran out, he would continue his solitary penance. Document. Clean. Remember. Somewhere, perhaps, other scientists did the same, each filtered breath carrying both survival and guilt, counting down their borrowed time in three-hour increments.

The yellow light blinked for the sixteenth time. One more before red. One more before starting again. Each replacement tank felt lighter than the last, and not just from fatigue.

Always one more. Until there weren't any more.

Then the birds would sing alone.

December 02, 2024 09:15

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Story Time
15:25 Dec 16, 2024

"They had chosen mercy, as only machines could define it.” I think as more of us start to tackle AI, it'll become difficult to feel as though we have something new to say about it, but I found this to be really searing and insightful in a way that made the issue feel immediate and artful. Well done.

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Kashira Argento
16:44 Dec 16, 2024

thank you

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Binta Samateh
11:29 Dec 16, 2024

I love this story

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Kashira Argento
13:57 Dec 16, 2024

thank you

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Eliza Leonel
07:34 Dec 16, 2024

Fantastic story, Kashira! The portrayal of despair by the last human left on Earth, alone in a world that keeps moving forward without him, is incredibly powerful. The scene at school was especially heartbreaking, perfectly capturing a deeply human trait: the ability to feel regret. Congratulations on the well-deserved win!

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Kashira Argento
08:53 Dec 16, 2024

Despair and lack of hope and future were exactly the feelings I was trying to capture. Thank you for your kind words.

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Kendall Defoe
03:29 Dec 16, 2024

This is incredible. Wonderful work!

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Kashira Argento
13:59 Dec 16, 2024

Thank you!

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19:14 Dec 15, 2024

I'm a Nigerian Please how can I submit a story? I have tried using my MasterCard but to no avail. It's frustrating writing without submission. Someone should please help 🙏

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Devon West
14:31 Dec 14, 2024

This is a wonderful story! Bleak but beautiful. Congratulations on your win!

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Kashira Argento
16:35 Dec 14, 2024

thank you!

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John Rutherford
05:48 Dec 14, 2024

Congratulations

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Kashira Argento
07:55 Dec 14, 2024

Thank you!

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Rai Moon
05:05 Dec 14, 2024

Agonizingly beautiful <3

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Amanda Rose
00:48 Dec 14, 2024

Great job!! I confess, I've never much too much a fan of end-of-the-world type stories, but I liked this one a lot!!

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Kiera Shroff
00:00 Dec 14, 2024

Congratulations Kashira! Amazing writing, very well-deserved win! The imagination of being the last person alive and also in part the one who caused it is very well portrayed. I loved this part which captures the haunting feelings: "The real weight wasn't the failing equipment or the dwindling supplies. It was the silence between bird songs. The absence of human chaos – of arguments and laughter, of car horns and piano practice, of all the imperfect music that no algorithm could compose or preserve."

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20:48 Dec 13, 2024

Hi, Kashira!-) Congratulations on your victory! But, unfortunately, I didn't find anything new in this story. Although, it is written quite smoothly. Probably, my consciousness is too spoiled, and because of this I am too demanding of myself and the Other. But I'm not sure that this is a disadvantage, this is how I live. I am a medical equipment engineer and I myself ended up in intensive care during COVID 2019. CT showed 100%, specialists call it "Total". I was the only one in the entire hospital with such indicators, but I survived. A mont...

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Charis Keith
20:10 Dec 13, 2024

Congrats on the win!!! I have never read anything like this (but then again, sci-fi is not my genre) but I really enjoyed this.

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Kashira Argento
07:49 Dec 14, 2024

I do not consider myself as a sci-fi writer, either. However the end of the human race is a common theme in apocalyptic scenarios. My main concern was to show the despair after that...thanks

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David Sweet
19:59 Dec 13, 2024

Congrats on your win with a fantastic story. I find it amazing that he persevered. I know it moves the story along, but me (personally) could not do what he did, especially after going to the school. Is he driven purely by survival instinct or does he truly have a small sliver of hope that he can resurrect humanity? Thanks for sharing!

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Kashira Argento
08:11 Dec 14, 2024

No, I think he depicts humanity's acknowledgement of error. He is the assassin by constructing the weapon; he sees himself as such. He even missed his girl's recital for a weapon that killed millions. He has regrets and no illusion of escape. He forces himself to clean up after his mess (like a kid cleans up clumsily after some spilled milk; he knows his mother will notice but wants to "help" her). This text is pure remorse nothing else.

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David Sweet
09:51 Dec 14, 2024

Thanks for the explanation. I apologize for my denseness. It was a fantastic story

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Kashira Argento
10:12 Dec 14, 2024

No worries, everyone perceives stories in another way. I thank you for giving me different perspectives.

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Aiyana Barnes
19:56 Dec 13, 2024

I love your story:)

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Kashira Argento
08:01 Dec 14, 2024

Thank you for reading it!

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