Submitted to: Contest #294

Sponsa Maritum Manducat

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who’s at a loss for words, or unable to speak."

Horror Suspense Thriller

This story contains themes or mentions of sexual violence.

Ok, as you all know I am a published author. This is one of my characters, Miss Lacy, making a special appearance for this erotic, horror story.

"Fred, that's the couple," said Miss Lacy.

Fred and Miss Lacy were on the prowl for their next Friday night...murder night...victims. Fred pulled up, got out, grabbed the couple by their hair and threw them into the van.

Now, mind you, Fred is Miss Lacy's henchman. This cat is a true cheesedick. He is 6'7'', plus or minus, no one knows for sure but he is definitely a mammoth of a henchman.

Miss Lacy is the evil succubus everyone loves. She's so evil and adorable. She's not that big or powerful, but what she lacks in strength, she makes up for in her torture tactics. After all, she has her cheesedick henchman to do all the heavy lifting.

Let's get this terror of a bedtime story going. Don't let the bed bugs bite!

Jimbo and Tracy awoke in the same motel that Miss Lacy favored for her Friday night murder parties.

Jimbo looked around and saw a table with a radio and axe. He quickly walked to the door and tried to turn the knob.

"Fuck! You need keys to open these locks!" Jimbo yelled.

"Jim, what are we going to do?" Tracy asked fearfully.

"Check that window," said Jimbo.

"It looks like it's screwed shut," Tracy said while trying to pry open the window.

"Shhhh," Jimbo whispered, "What's that sound?"

If you don't like graphic, erotic horror, stop reading here cause this woman is rotten! I kid you not, proceed at your own risk! Just remember that I warned you!

"Sounds like someone fucking in the bathroom," Jimbo said quietly.

"Grab that axe," Tracy told Jim, pointing to the table. Jimbo walked over and picked up the axe.

The room was dimly lit, the only light coming from the neon "Motel" sign outside the window and the light coming from under the bathroom door. There was one bed, with dirty gray sheets, two wooden chairs and weirdly enough a blender, which looked very out of place, just sitting by itself on a long table against one of the walls.

Jimbo and Tracy stared at the light radiating out from under the bathroom door. They heard distinctive moans growing louder, then a scream of pleasure, followed by laughter. Then, everything went silent.

The door swung open, and the light nearly blinded Jim and Tracy. Fred stomped out of the bathroom, towards the frightened couple. Jimbo swung the axe, but that behemoth of a henchman just grabbed it mid-swing and pulled it out of Jimbo's grip. Fred grabbed Jimbo by the neck, lifting him in the air and carried him to one of the chairs. Jimbo was kicking and fighting but to no avail.

Then...

"Little rabbit, have a seat," Miss Lacy said in her sweet voice as she stood in the bathroom doorway.

Jimbo stopped fighting and just slumped in the chair, defeated. He pulled a couple of ropes from his pocket and tied Jimbo to the chair, then grabbed Tracy and tied her to the other chair.

Miss Lacy stepped into the room and she was wearing a red teddy, bright red lipstick and red high heels. She was quite a sight to see.

She leaned down towards the couple and said while smiling, "Are you two terrified?"

"What do you want?" Tracy asked, her voice shaking, "We have money, you can take it all."

"Oh silly rabbit," Miss Lacy laughed, "I don't want your money."

"Then, what do you want?" Jimbo asked loudly.

"Oh, you'll see," Miss Lacy sang.

"Please don't hurt us," Tracy begged.

Miss Lacy motioned Fred and he turned toward Jimbo, grabbed him by his face, forcing his mouth open and cut out his tongue with a knife he pulled from his waistband.

"Noooooo!" Tracy screamed as Fred walked towards her. He grabbed her face and swiftly cut out her tongue also.

"Now that's better," Miss Lacy said smiling.

The couple was in shock. Fred went and grabbed a torch from a bag he had sitting in the corner. He lit it, flames dancing to life and walked over to Tracy, forcing her mouth open and sealed the wound with the torch. All Tracy could do was pass out from the pain. He turned to Jimbo and repeated the action. He also passed out.

Are we having fun yet? This is only the beginning and anyone who has read my books, knows this only goes in one direction...straight to hell!

Jimbo and Tracy eventually came to and saw their abductors watching them, looking amused.

"Oh good, you're awake," Miss Lacy said as she danced over to the radio and turned on a Torri Amos song. Fred just hovered stupidly, as he typically did. Miss Lacy twirled over to Tracy, in tune with the song and stopped in front of her. She showed Tracy the scalpel in her right hand and a huge dildo in her left hand.

She sat on Tracy's lap and whispered in her ear, "I want to play little rabbit."

Tracy started to cry in pain as Miss Lacy dragged the razor sharp scalpel down her cheek.

"Don't cry little Rabbit," Miss Lacy said and leaned forward, licking the tears from her cheek.

Miss Lacy continued to move to the music while sitting on Tracy's lap. She was wiggling erotically, giving Tracy an unwanted lap dance.

Fred started to cut the clothes from Jimbo's body. Jim tried to stand, but Fred just forced him back down by his shoulders. He walked over to Tracy and cut the clothes from her body as well.

Miss Lacy smiled at Jimbo's arousal and said to Tracy, "It seems your husband is enjoying himself. Let's give him a show, little rabbit."

Miss Lacy straddled Tracy, resting her toy in between her breasts and began to kiss her tongueless mouth. Tracy tried to pull away.

Miss Lacy looked over at Fred and he pulled a large machete from his bag and held it to Jimbo's neck. Tracy immediately stopped resisting.

Miss Lacy continued giving Tracy a lap dance and said, "little rabbit, I want you to listen to me, can you do that?" Tracy nodded, still weeping.

"Look over at your husband," Miss Lacy ordered.

Tracy looked over and saw that Jimbo was hard as a rock and Miss Lacy once again motioned to Fred, who stood Jimbo up and walked him over to Tracy.

Miss Lacy wanted to make sure Tracy watched as she took his manhood into her mouth and started to pleasure him. He tried to resist but she had him.

Tracy had an angry look on her face, so Miss Lacy stopped, got off of her lap, stood her up and had her stand with her back to her husband. Miss Lacy gently pushed her head down until she was bent over the chair.

Miss Lacy looked up at Jimbo, "Jimbo my dear, pleasure your wife."

Jimbo didn't hesitate, he immediately walked forward and devoured her from the inside until he got so overwhelmed and couldn't help but explode in extasy.

Miss Lacy walked forward and with her right hand, slit Tracy's throat.

"Jimmy baby, did we have fun? I told you I wanted to play," said Miss Lacy happily.

Miss Lacy motioned to Fred and he sat Jimbo in the chair once again.

"However, the game is not over quite yet. What do you think is the next move?" Miss Lacy continued, "I know you're angry...good. I have a surprise for you!" Miss Lacy looked over at Fred and he immediately picked up Tracy's lifeless, naked body and walked into the bathroom.

Well folks, this is the last act in this special guest appearance of my girl, Miss Lacy! Who can guess what is coming. She never does anything without a reason.

Miss Lacy walked over to the radio and changed the selection to Korn.

She turned to Jimbo and said, "I know you are sitting there, judging me but tell me, who is the one fucking Amber?'

She began to dance and twirl again as Jimbo sat thinking, who was this woman and how could she possibly know about Amber?

Miss Lacy sang, "Little piggy, little piggy," she paused and said, "I'm going to huff," she paused again, "I'm going to puff," she paused and crept closer to Jimbo. She twirled onto his lap and dragged the scalpel down his cheek. She leaned towards his ear and quietly said, "I am going to blow your house down."

She got down to her knees and took him into her mouth once again. He quickly found himself erect again. Miss Lacy giggled, clapping her hands and Fred walked back into the room holding a new contestant. Amber!

Miss Lacy stood up, wiped her mouth as Fred retied Jim to the chair.

"Get on him kitten, he's ready for you," Miss Lacy said, pointing to Jimbo's lap.

Amber hesitantly straddled Jim. This was very familiar to her as she has been in this position with Jimbo many times.

"Now take him for a ride," Miss Lacy ordered.

Amber had tears running down her face but began to ride Jimbo. After a couple minutes, moans replaced the tears and Miss Lacy began to twirl again, moaning herself. As Amber came to a climax, Miss Lacy slit her throat.

Jimbo sat stunned as Amber fell forward into his arms and he saw the life leave her body.

"Now little piggy," Miss Lacy giggled, "I think the big, bad wolf deserves to have a little fun too!"

She motioned to Fred, who immediately grabbed Amber and carried her into the bathroom. Miss Lacy climbed on Jimbo and started riding him until she felt herself climaxing. She slit his throat as she was finishing and watched his soul leave his body.

Well, that's it folks! Did you enjoy our guest appearance? Whether you did or not, I don't think she really cares. Are you at a loss for words? Maybe so, maybe not.

Posted Mar 19, 2025
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38 likes 21 comments

12:43 May 16, 2025

Another great story. Have you ever published content on Literotica.com?

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Donald Haddix
21:06 May 16, 2025

No don’t know that one

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Jelena Jelly
18:15 Apr 04, 2025

Through your writing I could imagine Miss Lacy. Great read!

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Donald Haddix
15:34 Apr 10, 2025

Thanks. Shes my first love in character building!

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Dennis C
19:19 Mar 28, 2025

Miss Lacy’s twisted charm leaps off the page; as a writer, one loves how you blend those italicized asides straight to us with the narrative flow—might have to borrow that trick someday!

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Donald Haddix
15:58 Mar 30, 2025

Thanks Dennis. She’s my 1st character !
I thought I would see how Reedsy liked her. All positive feedback!

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Paul Spreadbury
18:33 Mar 27, 2025

Great story! But I'd have like to see a razorback run through a scene somewhere. LOL.

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Donald Haddix
18:27 Mar 28, 2025

Haha

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Chrissy Cook
06:56 Mar 27, 2025

This really gives B-movie, pulpy energy, which I think is the intention. I definitely hear the narrator's voice in a sort midatlantic, old-timey accent!

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Donald Haddix
10:00 Mar 27, 2025

Awww I think you just compared me to Quentin Tarantino. Best compliment ever! I’m Arkansas guy. So it leaks into my writing.

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Chrissy Cook
23:50 Mar 27, 2025

Yes. You're absolutely right! I'm not a big movie person, but Tarantino is exactly where my brain went. 😊

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Donald Haddix
18:31 Mar 28, 2025

He is a influencer of my writing!

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Rebecca Detti
20:39 Mar 23, 2025

ding dong! this livened up my holy sunday! a great read

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Donald Haddix
22:49 Mar 23, 2025

Haha she’s so adorable. Thanks

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KC Foster
18:10 Mar 23, 2025

Wow, I'm blushing here. Very nice and I enjoyed the appearance. I may have to look up your published work. I've only been familiar with your simple horror stories so it was fascinating to see a different side of your writing.

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Donald Haddix
18:39 Mar 23, 2025

Oh please do. Johnny the 2nd of 5 short stories releases April 19. Then the final novel. Miss Lacy’s Armageddon. Thanks. She’s an evil character you wanna hate but somewhere inside of you, you find her appealing. Thanks KC

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15:48 Mar 19, 2025

X rated Miss Lacy! This just pepped up a quiet Wednesday afternoon! 😅

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Donald Haddix
15:51 Mar 19, 2025

She has that effect. Thanks for checking out “My Gurl!”

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Darvico Ulmeli
09:55 Mar 19, 2025

Nice work.
Miss Lacy made a quite the impact.

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Donald Haddix
12:42 Mar 19, 2025

My man! How’s it goin? In Michigan. You like th new version? Cleaned up huh? Well for Miss Lacy this is PG.

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Darvico Ulmeli
14:46 Mar 19, 2025

Yes, it is. Still is a badass.

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