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Coming of Age Contemporary Fiction

1st poet- Hello friend,

Hello again 

Nice to see

You as a friend 

Want to play again, 

Nice to play with you again,

Oh man, oh man, Of course

I hope we could

Do this all again

Oh yes oh yes,yes

e we can

Oh man, oh man, thanks again

Nice to be by the ocean with

My best friend again,

Thank you for being my friend again

2nd poet- Hello, Hello my name is doug 

I have a nice little walk with My dog, 

we talk, we jog 

All the way to the fog,

Are you my friend dog?

Because I don't want you in near that Fog, 

lets just jog and sing a song,     

It’s my first walk on the dock 

I can't really be shocked

I’m coming in hot with my dog

Be careful because I got the fog.

3rd poet- When I think on how far I’ve gone I’ve really only just begun! 

I knew I’d have to wait for some sun, but waiting would be no fun, I wish sun would be my friend tonight but no sun just stars, what if I bring the sun to me will sun still be my friend!

 I feel if I bring sun, sun will not be my friend!

 Later on with no fun or sun I saw a bright circle in the sky I knew it was just my ambitious mind, but I was wrong, SUN SUN! Sun was finally here and when there's sun there's always fun!

4th poet- Life let's sing, oh lets ring

I've got a little feeling that I will sting! Boy oh me I can't sing. Please life help me SING! I don’t want to ring oh please. Thank you life for letting me sing please come down and i’ll give you a ring!     

5th poet- TArty JOE, sorry, MS.fonny

 I was a at a party.

 Oh then in that case your not tarty!

6th- Come on pal

Let’s go for

A walk

Up the streets

Around the block

I see friends 

You see squirrels

You jump and bark

While I give 

A twirl

Back home pal

We went for 

A walk.

7th poet- Hello world

Nice to 

Finally meet

Somebody as

Great as you

I wish I could stay

But

I must go.

8th poet- I’m a cakey like a backey

                           Where did my cakey key go! 

                         Oh cakey I’m just not awakey!

                         Maybe I should go find my cakey key!

9th- Lo life times I cant even rhyme even though they give me a dime, I just shake it off and say; Oh i'm fine. Same thing again- 1st poet- Hello friend,

Hello again 

Nice to see

You as a friend 

Want to play again, 

Nice to play with you again,

Oh man, oh man, Of course

I hope we could

Do this all again

Oh yes oh yes,yes

e we can

Oh man, oh man, thanks again

Nice to be by the ocean with

My best friend again,

Thank you for being my friend again

2nd poet- Hello, Hello my name is doug 

I have a nice little walk with My dog, 

we talk, we jog 

All the way to the fog,

Are you my friend dog?

Because I don't want you in near that Fog, 

lets just jog and sing a song,     

It’s my first walk on the dock 

I can't really be shocked

I’m coming in hot with my dog

Be careful because I got the fog.

3rd poet- When I think on how far I’ve gone I’ve really only just begun! 

I knew I’d have to wait for some sun, but waiting would be no fun, I wish sun would be my friend tonight but no sun just stars, what if I bring the sun to me will sun still be my friend!

 I feel if I bring sun, sun will not be my friend!

 Later on with no fun or sun I saw a bright circle in the sky I knew it was just my ambitious mind, but I was wrong, SUN SUN! Sun was finally here and when there's sun there's always fun!

4th poet- Life let's sing, oh lets ring

I've got a little feeling that I will sting! Boy oh me I can't sing. Please life help me SING! I don’t want to ring oh please. Thank you life for letting me sing please come down and i’ll give you a ring!     

5th poet- TArty JOE, sorry, MS.fonny

 I was a at a party.

 Oh then in that case your not tarty!

6th- Come on pal

Let’s go for

A walk

Up the streets

Around the block

I see friends 

You see squirrels

You jump and bark

While I give 

A twirl

Back home pal

We went for 

A walk.

7th poet- Hello world

Nice to 

Finally meet

Somebody as

Great as you

I wish I could stay

But

I must go.

8th poet- I’m a cakey like a backey

                           Where did my cakey key go! 

                         Oh cakey I’m just not a wakey!

                         Maybe I should go find my cakey key!

9th- Lo life times I cant even rhyme even though they give me a dime, I just shake it off and say; Oh i'm fine.

Thank you so much for reading this poetry it was inspired buy a fare well guy names William Okafor, still living up to this day, Slanged categoried too! Thanks again so much for reading this very inspired poetry.

I could not come up with too many poets because this is live and dont have much time to do it. This have some verified slang and some mispeld imaginary words.

My favorite poem was the 3rd poet- When I think on how far I’ve gone I’ve really only just begun! 

I knew I’d have to wait for some sun, but waiting would be no fun, I wish sun would be my friend tonight but no sun just stars, what if I bring the sun to me will sun still be my friend!

 I feel if I bring sun, sun will not be my friend!

 Later on with no fun or sun I saw a bright circle in the sky I knew it was just my ambitious mind, but I was wrong, SUN SUN! Sun was finally here and when there's sun there's always fun!

April 08, 2021 23:11

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Ryan LmColli
16:49 Apr 26, 2021

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11:15 Apr 11, 2021

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Ryan LmColli
21:40 Apr 15, 2021

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12:33 Apr 09, 2021

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