โMrs. Hill, come out and play,โ Danny called out.
โDan, you mustnโt disturb poor Mrs. Hill with all your silly tantrums,โ I scolded my little brother.
โAm not,โ He countered.
โAre too.โ I sighed, being with Dan was just making me throw a fit like a child.
โOh, hello there Dannyโฆ and what a surprise to see you here too Taylor!โ Mrs. Hills welcomed us in to her rental home, making sure my pesky brother was comfortable as she would ramble about the olden daysโฆ no cellphones, no computers, no technologyโฆ I was feeling stultify with her small talks.
My parents worked late on Monday, so Dan and I would have to come over to Mrs. Hills house after school until they picked us up. Usually I would have art class after school so only Danny would be forced to spend his day at Mrs. Hills but ever since the art department didnโt have much money they closed for good so I didnโt have a chance to escape from straight hours of complete boredom. My head felt like it was going to explode any second now.
โNow Taylor, how is school going?โ I felt like Mrs. Hills just didnโt want me to lose my mind, trying to distract me from going insane.
โOk, I guess.โ
โOhโฆ nice,โ Nice? Thatโs it? I moved closer to the fireplace, Mrs. Hills didnโt bother closing the windows that led the cool air inside, I felt like I was in an iglooโฆ only I had to deal with annoying people who wouldnโt let me focus on my homework.
Mrs. Hills coughed, extracting me from my attention. Dan stared back at me from his comicsโฆ he seemed worried. I gave him a reassuring look and focused back on my studies.
A second later Mrs. Hills coughed again, louder this time. She seemed out of breath. Dan and I hustled over to her instantly and helped her sit down on the couch while Dan fetched her some warm honey tea which she drank soundlessly.
โAre you ok?โ Danโs eyes were bulging as he placed his hand on Mrs. Hills shoulder, keeping his other clenched tightly in a ball that his knuckles turned white.
โYes,โ Her voice sounded different from the last time Iโd seen her. Now I noticed the changes, Iโd been so overwhelmed that I didnโt realize Mrs. Hills lookedโฆ weak. Her bone was showing as her skin shagged, her eyes were droopy as her hands shook with every movement she undertook.
โTaylor?โ Dan looked at me as if I were supposed to know everything about anything.
I shrugged, taking the emptied mug of tea, washing it in the sink, trying to be a responsible sister and neighbor.
โDanny, Iโm fine,โ I heard Mrs. Hills weakly admit.ย
I didnโt hear Danโs response as I decided to be helpful, Mrs. Hills deserved some rest better than anyone else. She might be a talkative woman but she meant well. I knew her since I was about Danโs age. Actually, all the neighborhood kids were aware of Mrs. Hill.ย
She was likeโฆ a nanny to everyone.
Dan treated her no less than he treats our grandma whoโd died of cancer three years ago. Dan was too little to remember grandma but I had felt the pain when gran had closed her eyes for good.ย
I gotta admit, Mrs. Hill had helped me during those tough times, I would cry and scream every day like a baby. I would demand that God better give my granny back or elseโฆ well I didnโt know. Mrs. Hill would cheer me up, telling me stories as she would feed me her homemade oatmeal cookies Iโd adored loving for years.
Now Mrs. Hillโs needs meโฆ I had to step up my responsibilities, keep her cheery as she had when I was younger. Favor for favor. Nothing else.
I felt the adrenaline rush in my head as I walked into the living room again. Dan zoned off as he tried to wake her up. I dropped the laundry basket I was holding and stayed by my brothers side, we exchanged a glance. Dan was in the verge of tears as I pounded about possibilities of what happened.
โKids,โ Her feeble voice rang in my head, we looked at her at once.
โI need to tell you something.โ
We listened carefully, hearing every word she uttered.
โYou have cancer?โ Dan quietly murmured, only I was able to hear the strain in his voice.
โYes dear,โ Mrs. Hill blankly replied, taking off the hat she wore, exposing her baldness.
โWill you get better?โ Dan asked, his eyes wide with fear.
โI donโt know, fingers crossed,โ She joked, I was astonishedโฆ why was she making jokes at a time like this. Neither me or Dan chuckled along with Mrs. Hill, keeping our cool I guess.
โHave you gotten the treatments?โ My voice broke, for the first time Iโd spoken after hearing the truth. My grandma had died of the same reason, this was serious matter.
โSort of?โ
โWhat is โsort ofโ?โ I demanded.
โTaylor, I donโt have enough money to pay for my medical bills,โ She finally told me, after a moment of thought.
โSoโฆ youโll never get better?โ Dan faintly murmured. His eyes showed how much he cared for Mrs. Hill. She was after all a second grandma for himโฆ and maybe me too.
Iโd taken her for granted all these years, maybe now I could show her how much Iโm grateful for her to be apart of my lifeโฆ everyones life.
I checked my watch, 6:12โฆ momโll come soon.ย
โWe should get going,โ I said, trying to distract Danโฆ and myself from this emotional topic.
โOh yes, please visit again.โ
I nodded, taking my brotherโs hand forcefully, taking our belongings and closing the door behind us. I didnโt look at her eyes as she waved. I didnโt want her to see me cry.ย
โWhatโs that about?โย
โWhat?โ We were home, Dan had his hands on his hips as he questioned me.
โWhy didnโt you say anything?โ
โThereโs nothing to say,โ I ignored his cross face, heading for my room and closed the door behind me, avoiding any more questions.
Iโll have to face him soon anyway.
โHey, honeyโฆ how was your day?โ My mom asked, she was a mess. Her bronze hair was tied in a messy braid, she was answering calls from work and eating left over pasta with another. I sighed, momโll never change.
โOk.โ
โDanny, how was yours?โ Mom asked, she barely noticed the tension in his eyes as he forced down his dinner through his throat.
โInteresting,โ He finally found the word he was looking for, never meeting me eye-to-eye. He was mad, Iโm sure of it.
Mom nodded, taking another call, leaving us to wrap up dinner aloneโฆ as usual.
โAre you mad?โ
โNo.โ
I shrugged, doing my usual chores and left for the night. I could hear dad and Danny downstairs watching the sports channel, mom was yet in another call as I dozed off.ย
โWish I could do so something to help Mrs. Hillโ I wondered. Maybe I will. If I get the right opportunity.
Dan was still giving me the cold shoulder the next morning. I didnโt pay attention to him, leaning in on my own line of thinking.
I grabbed my backpack and headed off to school, not bothering to try knocking some sense into the boy.
โHey, whatโs that?โ I whispered to myself, a paper had been paper to the mailbox, I quickly read the headlines with glee.
โCOOKIE CONTEST FOR THE BIGGEST COOKIE!!!- Cash prizes includedโ
Cashโฆ I got a brain wave. If I win this contest then I might get enough money to help poor Mrs. Hill with her treatments.
I read the information three times as I grinned, Dan will be pleased to assist me. I waited for Dan to walk towards me from the house, he took his time as I handed him the paper without a question. He scowled but read what had been written.
โReally?โ Heโd asked, his laughing eyes were bent over the paper as I smiled.
โYup, weโre going to enter.โ
โWe need 5 people,โ He spoke, his eyes went down with sadness.
I didnโt know weโd need a team.ย
โHey, how about Gio and Dulce?โ Gio and Dulce were my closest friends from school, I knew theyโd love to join us.
โSure, we need one last person.โ
โLiam?โ His eye brows went up as he grinned. I blushed in embarrassment, Liam was my crush; shouldnโt have told my annoying brother about him. Heโll keep rubbing it in my face.
โYes?โ I heard his melodic voice behind me, I jumpedโฆ literally as I felt butterflies in my stomach. Oh, Dan hadnโt been asking if Liam could join, he was wondering what Liam was doing in our street, in front of our house.
Dan must have read my expression as he did exactly what I didnโt want.
โWant to join a contest, Taylorโs rooting for you to,โ I was SO mad at him, Liamโs ears turned light pink as he stared at his shoes. I kept my glace down, unable to be embarrassed again.
โSo?โ
โSure, why not,โ He shrugged, trying to hid a smileโฆ of success?
โYay, we have our team,โ Danny cheered, as he quickly shoved the paper at Liamโs face.ย
โWow, biggest cookieโฆ Iโve heard yourโฆ sisters a good baker,โ He said the last part with a whisper but I heard it anyway and pretended I didnโt have a clue of their discussion.
Dan nodded.
I rolled my eyes but smiled sheepishly, my face instantly flushed.
โSure.โ The twins; Gio and Dulce agreed.
We high fived each other, we got our team at last.
โWelcome constants, we have all your supplies ready for you, including your humongous oven,โ Our host instructed us.
โYou may began.โ
Danny, Gio and Dulce got started on making the dough, kneading it to perfection, Dulce had already made ten batches of dough, she was on a roll. Her brother not quite behind but Dan was the slowest, gotta admit my broโs great but heโs a terrible baker.
Liam and I were in charge of the frosting to go on top. I hurriedly grabbed a handful of pink food coloring, adding them to my twelfth batch of frosting, this was going to take foreverโฆ based on my calculations we needed more than thirty batches of frosting.
โHey, are you ok?โ Liam worriedly jumped to my side, I blushed as he took hold of my hand, but letting it go as soon as he held it.
โIโm fine.โย
He nodded, leaving my side, trying to finish his part fast.
โGuys, I have an idea.โ
โWhat Danny?โ We all inquired.
โWhy donโt we write our cause in frosting,โ He suggested. We agreed on it. Our cause was to help Mrs. Hill but with a cash prize so big we could help others suffering as well.
โIn behalf of the Cancer Society and Mrs. Hillโ Weโd written.
โAll right, times up.โ
I exhaled a relief, finally the tough part was overโฆ now we wait to hear the results.
I looked over at the other constants work, a girl about my age had a prestigious as she showed her cookie. It was hugeโฆ bigger that ours for sure. I gulped, did we even have a chance?
Liam must have seen my hesitation, he held me handโฆ this time not letting go. I nodded, keeping my eyes locked with his as we crossed our fingers.
Gio and Dulce gave me a thumbs up and Dan smiled.
I grinned, it didnโt matter if we won, weโd worked together for something we all loved. I looked up at the open sky hoping grandma would be proud of my deeds.
โThe winner isโฆ Jenna Genny and her team.โ
Jenna the girl with the biggest cookie was overjoyed as she quickly collected her prize. My face fell but I congratulated the winners.
โOh,โ The host looked surprised as he spoke with the judges.
โWe have another winner it appearsโฆ In behalf of us Taylor Laurent and her team will be received 10,000 in their name and given to the Cancer Society.
I almost cried, hugging my brother tightly as we cheered.ย
โI told you weโd win,โ Liam told me, winking.
โIโm sure weโd all won something,โ I replied, his cheeks turned red.
Days later...
โThank you so much, we are honored by your donation,โ The manager of the Cancer Society had messaged us.ย
โTaylor?โ I heard Mrs. Hills voice.
โMrs. Hill...!โ
She didnโt wait for my response, hugging me tightly as tears rolled down her cheeks.
โThank you,โ She mouthed.
โNo need, your like my grandma too!โ I wiped a tear from my own eyes.
โLooks like someone wants to talk with you,โ She whispered, smiling.
I looked behind me, Liam stood at the open doorwayโฆ he had his hands behind him, hiding something.
โHey,โ He said.
โHi.โ
โUm, you have a minute?โ
โSure?โ
We walked towards the porch, his ears still red, my cheeks were heating up.
โWhats up?โ
โI have a question.โ
โTell me.โ
โ...Will you go to the danceโฆโย
I didnโt let him finish, falling into his open hands.
He placed his hands around me, I stared back into his midnight blue eyes.
โIโm assuming this is a โyesโ?โ
โOh, you silly boy,โ I playfully chided.
We held hands, Mrs. Hill smiled as I motioned her to join us.ย
โThank you for everything,โ I told Mrs. Hill.
โNo needโฆ your like my granddaughter.โ
She stroked my head affectionately, I criedโฆ happily, leaning on her. Dan came out as I kissed his forehead. Dulce and Gio waved from the background. I felt like grandma was looking at me, smiling.
โIโm gratefulโฆ for everyone in my lifeโ I thought to myself, I could feel granโs presence.
โIโm grateful for such a thoughtful and compassionate granddaughterโ Her voice spoke, then disappeared into the wind.
I beamed.
I was happyโฆ finally. This contest had been a blessingโฆ not only for me but for so many others.
I was glad to have saved lives, itโs not everyday you get such an opportunity...
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Hi Varsha!! This story was a pretty interesting and a very creative take on the prompt. I really enjoyed reading it in general. Loved it so much. Great job! :)
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Thank you Haripriya!!! Thanks for supporting me soo much:)
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My pleasure to support a friend! =)
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:)
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=)
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Oh my gosh this was so sweet and heartwarming!! I really liked it!!
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Thank you so much!!!
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YOU'RE AT 800!!!
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Thank you Kate!!! Didn't even notice. Thanks to people like you I'm at 800!
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:DD
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:)
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Hi Varsha, I've posted my next story. Would you give it a read when you are free and give me your valuable feedback? :)
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Of course! Will do as soon as possible:)
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Hi Varsha! I just posted new stories could you check them out? :D (Also, are you posting this week?)
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Hi Kate! Of course as soon as I can:) I plan to next week, this week I was a bit busy!
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Thanks! And ok, looking forward to your new posts!!
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:) sure!
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:D
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Hey, Varsha do you know why Vayd left reedsy? He was such a good writer.
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No, I'm not sure. Hope he comes back:)
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yeah, I miss him.
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Yeah. Have a wonderful day tho!
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Hello Varsha! The ending was so sweet! Loved your story!
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Thank you!!! I'm glad u enjoyed:)
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:)
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Hi Varsha! It was a very touching story. It was a great idea to make them enter the competition for a greater cause! I really enjoyed reading it :) Keep it up!
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Thank you Akshaya!!!
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Of course!
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:)
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Wow Varsha! This story was so beautifully written!! And the title matches it so perfectly!!!!!! Great job! :D
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Thank you Kate!!!
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Welcome!
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:) Are u planning on writing this week?
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Yep I am! Though I feel like this one isn't really good because the prompt doesn't exactly fit my normal style. But I'll still post it!
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Sure! do post! I'll def check it out:)
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Hii Varsha! The ending was really sweet! I loved your story! ๐
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Aww, thank you Akshara!
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No problem! :)
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:DD
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