Submitted to: Contest #317

AGING GRACEFULLY…OR NOT!

Written in response to: "Write a story with the line “Don’t you remember me?” or “You haven’t changed…”"

Creative Nonfiction Funny Happy

<Remembers the Banters? Yes, they’re still alive and back to lighten your day with some dialogue-only humor. Comments welcomed and appreciated. Enjoy!>

Matthew, I’m really pissed off!

Christophe? Who’s Christophe, Martha. I’ve never heard of him.

Oh Lord, give me strength! Matthew, turn up your hearing aid for heavens sake. I’m two feet away from you and you can’t hear me? Or is it you don’t want to hear me? Which one?

Martha give me a minute, love, to adjust my hearing aid and catch up with you. I’m sitting here quietly, reading my paper and all of a sudden you come in like a train roaring into a subway station and talking about someone named Christophe. I need time to transition from my newspaper to whatever it is you have to say to me this time. Is it different from the story you told me five minutes ago? And who’s Christophe?

Matthew, I didn’t say Christophe. I said I’m pissed off!

Oh, I’m sorry. I can hear you a bit better now. So what are you pissed off about this time? Is this another Martha moment or is it a full-blown Martha meltdown?

Well, I suppose if you’re going to be pedantic again, and split hairs as you usually do, I would have to call it closer to a Martha meltdown. But stop distracting me, Matthew, or I’m going to forget what I was going to say.

Yes, that’s happening a lot with you these days isn’t it, my love. You’re catching up with me at last. Now I’m not the only one with memory problems. Good to have company on this leg of our journey together. Dare I say it but I can’t wait till your hearing goes too. You know, misery loves company.

Matthew…stop it! You’re doing it again. You’re making fun of me, completely distracting me and making me forget what I want to say.

Oh, ok love. I just enjoy getting a rise out of you. So tell me what’s got your knickers in a knot this time, and why you say we’re in for another Martha meltdown?

Well, it’s only a mini meltdown by now, Matthew, but it’s about our recent decision to try and socialize with our old friends from way back when. I’ve decided I’m not sure I want to try it after all.

Oh, why? What’s brought this on? For months now you’ve been yapping at me about how bored you are here at home, and that we never go anywhere, and we never do anything interesting, and we never see anyone we used to know, yadda, yadda, yadda. And now you’re changing your mind about getting out and about more often? What’s going on?

Well, it has to do with the last few times we ran into people we know, whether it’s just casual acquaintances or good friends whom we haven’t seen for a while. Matthew? Are you listening to me?

Yes I’m listening, Martha.

Matthew, how can you be listening to me when I can see that you’re still scanning that newspaper article you were reading?

Martha, it might surprise you to know that I actually can multitask.

Well fine. But would you kindly refrain from multitasking right now when I’m trying to tell you something that’s important to me.

Of course, love. I’ll even take off my glasses so I can hear you better.

Um…since when do your glasses make you hear better?

Oh, you know what I mean Martha. Now who’s splitting hairs? It will allow me to concentrate 100% on what you were saying. Now what is it dear?

OK, well how should I put this? The last few times we ran into somebody we hadn’t seen for years, I came away feeling so bad. Remember when we bumped into the Nicholsons when we went for a walk down on the foreshores a few months ago?

Nicholsons…Nicholsons? Oh yes, I remember. We had such a lovely chat with them… not that I remember much of it now. But why did you come away feeling bad? Was it because they couldn’t remember our names? I couldn’t remember theirs either. Surely you didn’t feel bad about that did you?

No, it wasn’t about that at all. It was about what they said when they first ran into us.

And that was?

Well, the first thing out of Joan’s mouth was ‘Matthew… you haven’t changed one bit! Just as handsome as ever, you devil, you!’

Oh yes, I do kind of remember that. Made this old 83-year-old feel a little bit younger. Been a very long time since a woman called me a handsome devil. Must admit Joan looked great for her age too.

Thanks for nothing, Matthew!

Wha…? What did I say wrong this time?

It’s not what you said Matthew. It’s what you didn’t say!

What I didn’t say? I’m sorry, Martha, but you’re being confusing. You know that I’ve never been very good at reading between the lines. Spell it out for me. I truly don’t know what you mean…

What I mean is exactly the reason that I don’t want to go and socialize with friends like the Nicholsons and others anymore. You see, while Joan was busy gushing over you and what a handsome rogue you are, Ralph and Joan said nothing to me about my looks. The same thing happened when Adam and Barbara met us at Costco a few days back. Adam said ‘Hey old man! You look great for your age, doesn’t he Barbara?’ And then he turned to me and said ‘Martha…I hardly recognized you!’ Do you realize how that made me feel, Matthew?

Well, I can’t help it if I’ve got good anti-aging genes, Martha.

Thanks for nothing again, Matthew.

Oh cripe, Martha. Could you just get to the point so I can get back to my paper?

My point, dumbo, is that both times I must have looked terrible! And those aren’t the only times this has happened in the last ten years when we’ve run into old friends. Everybody always says how great YOU look. No-one ever says I look good!

Well, would you prefer that they tell you the truth?

Thanks for nothing again, Matthew. I’m done here. Go back to your darned paper!

Martha? Where are you going? Come back here, sweetheart. I didn’t mean that the way it sounded. Come on. Come back here. Oh boy…are you mad at me now? Geez, I can’t win. Damned if I do and damned if I don’t. Martha, listen to me. All I tried to say is that you’ve always been one of the first to tell me and others that if you can’t say anything nice, then don’t say anything at all. And you are absolutely right about that. I couldn’t agree more. I guess the Nicholsons and the others decided to keep their mouths shut. They were just trying not to be rude…

Martha, where did you go?

Posted Aug 27, 2025
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Athena Reyes
22:43 Sep 03, 2025

Martha and Matthew’s dynamic has a very familiar, lived-in feel, like we’re dropping in on an ongoing sitcom episode. Their banter is definitely full of personality 😁 Thanks for sharing!

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Viga Boland
12:50 Sep 04, 2025

Thanks for reading and commenting Athena. I love your description i.e. “very familiar, lived-in feel, like we’re dropping in on an ongoing sitcom episode.“ That is what I picture when I write dialogue-only pieces.

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Jack Kimball
02:32 Sep 03, 2025

I think this story cuts a little too close to home, having been married 34 years.

I do know, anyone who can write like this must always be the most beautiful in the room, something about the eyes when they’re telling stories.

Welcome back Viga!

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Viga Boland
19:02 Sep 03, 2025

Aww Jack… flattery will get you everywhere especially with this 79 year-old lady 😉😂

I’m very glad you could relate after being married 34 years. It’s been 53 for us!

Thanks for the welcome back. Don’t know if I’ll be sticking around. The muse doesn’t strike very often these days, but it’s always good to hear from an old friend.

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Tori Smith
21:57 Sep 02, 2025

Using dialogue only was a clever way to immerse the reader, like they're there listening to this funny misunderstanding. Very fun!

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Viga Boland
19:05 Sep 03, 2025

Glad you enjoyed it Tori. My favorite way of writing but not every prompt invites this style. Thanks for reading.

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Martha Kowalski
01:46 Sep 01, 2025

"Is this another Martha moment or is it a full-blown Martha meltdown?" - wow, I relate hahaha :)

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Viga Boland
12:15 Sep 01, 2025

I presume relating doesn’t just apply to your name hahaha 😂

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Helen A Howard
07:49 Aug 31, 2025

Lots of fun and laughter with this one! Matthew may be able to multitask but he’s pretty hopeless when it comes to picking up the subtleties of conversation. Whatever her age, Martha needs to be seen as a desirable woman.

Lots of misunderstandings here. The more he said, the deeper his hole got. The back and forth banter was funny and witty. Full of observations about the frustrations of handling getting old and a long term relationship. I laughed aloud as I was reading.

He really needs to get that hearing aid sorted? But will he? Wonderful stuff. I look forward to reading it

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Viga Boland
13:17 Aug 31, 2025

Hey Helen! Thanks so much for commenting and for your various astute observations. You certainly have no trouble reading between the lines like Matthew does!

You’re very kind to say the back-and-forth banter was funny and very witty. Thank heaven I haven’t lost all my ability for writing these banters. I was afraid I may have rusted out like the tin man because of lack of oiling! Now, if the prompts keep coming that the trigger something in my brain I hope to be able to write a few more of these or maybe something else

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Wendy M
18:32 Aug 30, 2025

That's funny! Poor Martha, Matthew hasn't a clue. Well done for getting that across so clearly.

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Viga Boland
03:00 Aug 31, 2025

Thanks for reading and commenting Wendy. Nice to met you BTW.

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Nick Migliaccio
17:41 Aug 30, 2025

Are you sure you did not take that from the audio on our nanny cam?
Just change the names, and the subjects and BINGO! There I am at home.
But I must admit the hearing aid helped. Now lets see if the glasses kick in
else !! Good work my friend ! Cutting through the punctuaton obstruction
was refreshing ! ! !

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Viga Boland
02:57 Aug 31, 2025

Thanks for reading and commenting Nick. Glad you could relate to the scenario. Isn’t that what we writers hope for i.e. that our readers find a bit of themselves in our stories?

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Lois Corey
13:33 Aug 30, 2025

Funny rendition of a conversation that will be familiar in many households

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Viga Boland
14:51 Aug 30, 2025

Thanks for reading and commenting, Lois. My objective in writing these banters is to bring some well-needed laughter into our lives these days when there seems to be so little to smile about.

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Michael Williams
12:51 Aug 30, 2025

Loved the banter, Viga! You’ve shown me a way of doing it without all those quotation marks. The back and forth was authentic — I’ve heard many of these kinds of conversations before. You capture the tension. I kept wondering how Matthew was going to pry his foot out of his mouth.

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Viga Boland
13:06 Aug 30, 2025

Oh Michael…I’m so glad you read it and loved it. You just made my day and restored some faith in myself. I must confess I love churning out dialogues between the Bickering Banters but they don’t come easily if the prompt isn’t one that triggers me.

And I’m delighted if I have somehow helped a seasoned writer like yourself see a different way of writing. Perhaps you could challenge our real world group to give this type of writing a “go” in the future? I firmly believe it’s an exercise all writers need. Narrative is easy by comparison LOL.

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Mary Bendickson
17:27 Aug 27, 2025

Glad yo see they are alive and well and still bantering.😊

Maybe you've heard already Trudy passed away. I don't know any details. She 'll be sadly missed here as one of the great talents and encouragers.

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Viga Boland
20:18 Aug 27, 2025

Thanks for stopping by and leaving me a comment Mary. Much appreciated. I hope you enjoyed the banter.

No, I didn’t know about Trudy. As I said, I haven’t been over here in months. Very sorry to hear that. She was great to talk with.

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Mary Bendickson
21:34 Aug 27, 2025

Must have happened very recently because she last posted first part of this month. I just heard yesterday.

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