(The end of this is not for children that are twelve or under! If requested I will rewrite the end! I hope everyone enjoys!
I walk,walk,and walk some more
Then I start to explore…
I skip with all my soul,
then I suddenly fall down a hole!
Spirals of red and even black
My,is that a sac…?
Dots scattered,and speckled white,
This is such tremendous sight!
I spin,spin,and spin some more
Whatever is this for?
This is a dream…yes it must be!
I see stripes as far as I can see
Tables,Flowers,and even one rake
And I believe I see a milkshake!
I gaze upon the walls,
Spotting not pictures,but stress balls!
Mounted as if trophies across the stripes
Some dark,some light
I reach the bottom,bouncing off the floor
I grew invisible wings and start to soar
I meet the ground once again
As if it were an old,envied friend
I stand and dust off
Then I suddenly begin to cough
My throat dry as well as parched
It felt as if I had been starched
I look and walk across the halls
Spotting some sports balls
I skip on down the bouncy stone hall
I do not remember being this tall..
I ate cake just minutes before
Could this be what the cake was for?
I just saw it sitting there
I could not help myself to just stare...
The cake,so small and sweet
Of course I would like it to eat!
So I climb,climb and climb with all my might
Finally that cake was in my sight!
I was locked on,trapped…in a trance
Me and this cake were ready to dance
Looking back,I quickly realize
It did indeed change my size
I quietly move along the enclosed ground
That is,until I was found!
A small white rabbit,chubby and cute
Why,he was in a business suit!
He took out his watch,standing proud
However his small mouth never made a sound
I quickly backed away as he said words
Rabbits are seen,but never heard…!
He let out a loud sigh,then groaned
“Little girl,go home…”
He then waved with a friendly depart
Leaving me alone again,with only my heart
The hallways darkened as fear grew
A threat she thought existed but never knew…
Her mind uneasy as she continued to walk
But the whole way she did not talk
She found a beautiful,and attractive light
Showing nothing but colorful trees in sight!
She ran to the end filled with hope!
That is until she landed on soap-
She slipped,tumbled and fell
Then let out a great big yell
She recovered back on her feet
Then another came up to greet…
His eyes,big,wide and blue
Why,his gaze is fixed on you!
He greets you with his smile,up in the air
And even then his eyes still stare…
Not a breath,not even a blink
You suddenly see his nose,it's bright pink!
Fur disappears as,his smile fades…
You hope it's time to end this charade
Still worried,and stuck in a dream
Everything may not be as it first seemed
You walk through colorful trees
Then you spot some pineapple bees!
Squirrels appear in the vines
Why,their fur looks divine!
The light bounces off red,and brown
They are a lot shinier than the ones in town…
You continue seeing many crazy things
What else may this dream bring?
You walk the whole way through
Then another is talking to you
She is petite,agile and gray
A mouse who refuses to stray
She inches closer and closer as you look
Is she carrying a small pocket book?
Her eyes are big and wide,
Why,she has a sword on her side?!
The little mouse scurried along
That is after she sung you a song
You dance slowly to the silent wind
Until you smell something very thin…
A faint fragrance,like peppermint tea
You start to look around and see,
You spot a table,and three guests
They were having a tea party if you had to guess…
You see the purple floating cat,the rabbit,and a man
Could they be a trio or a band!?
You begin to loosen up as you go and join
Then the man throws a coin!
You caught the coin and looked back
The mad man then loosens his belt for slack
He bellowed and cheered
Why,Alice! I'm glad you're here!
It's me! The mad hatter! You probably don't know…
But it is me! The hatter who watched you grow!
I watched as you twirled in your pretty blue dress
But you never saw me,I would guess…
Your kindness rewards you
Just keep your heart golden and true
Welcome to wonderland,we have trinkets,treasures and goods
Unique animals and turquoise wood!
My eyes meet the yellow grass under me
And my mind can finally see
Like curtains in front of my eyes
Everything seemed as if it was a disguise
Too much to believe,all too quick!
I feel like I may be sick…
The Cheshire cat…I remember now
He hides from others…he does not prowl
The mouse that went “Squeak,Squeak”
Why,she always loved to eat!
Even now she is devouring cake
Letting her roam the table may be a mistake…
The rabbit,in his black little tux
His job must have really sucked…
He always timed everything just right
I wonder if he ever had time to get a bite…?
He hurried off on and scurried along
And then I think the hatter pulled out a bong…?
He blew smoke as he let out a sigh
Then he told me his goodbye
He retired anxiously as he headed home
Then I realized in his hat was a bone…
He held keys to whatever he had
And I realized it was also a human bone! That he was bad!
A shock ran through my spine and blood ran cold
Then I ran…refusing to be bold
I hurried back to the door
This was all a huge lure!
Something insane and strange
I never want a change!,
Weather it be better or worse
I do not want to end up in a hearse!
I am too young,only thirteen
I just hope i'm not seen
Not by the hatter,the rabbit,or the mouse
I just want to return to my house!
I reach the entrance,And I open the door
Whatever did I come to wonderland for?
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I hope whoever reads this enjoyed it,yes the end is not child like...but if requested i can make a kid's version. Other than this i hope anyone who read this enjoyed it! The beginning was off beat but as i went on it was easier to read!
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Damn, I was excited about that.
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Forgot to say i will not be on at all during weekends now,you know,no wifi ant home and all :T
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Oh, right, that's sad. but at least there are days of the week
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sorry i keep forgetting to tell you lol,also my birthday is on the 22th of october :3 imagine an overwhelmed-self contained mature fifteen year old
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Oh,and do you like regular stories better or the rhyme schemes?
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oh and probably wotn be on today,got practice test day REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Your birthday is coming up, and yes I like stories with rhymes lol and good luck on your tests
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omg i am sooooooo pissed right now.Yesterday and the day before they promised up two hours of free time outside after the test,but because the test would not work,so we were left with less twenty minutes,and they only gave half the school a pop,i watched them roll ten unopened crates away and leave the rest of us with just water.
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and we dont see our schools so i dont know what i got
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Got it posted but it was kinda rushed. And I needed twenty five more words to post it. xD
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