Start your story with the line, “This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives,” and end it with, “By then it was too late.”

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“Just Politics” by Courtney Haynes

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. But somehow, as Frida and her daughter Molina stepped out of the holding facility, hopelessness still ravaged their souls. Frida stared into the horizon trying to suppress the horrors of before. Six-years-old with the weather look of an ancient woman, Molina grasped her mother's hand which she hadn’t touched for what seemed like an eternity. She searched for some type of affirmation in her mother’s grip, but it was not there. Her words fared no better. "Your aunt will b...

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“A Perfect Life” by Bill Willoughby

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This was supposed to the happiest day of their lives, up to that point, at least. The entire family had been there for their wedding. The vows were exchanged, the people clapped and cheered, the cake was cut, the dances were danced, the music and champagne flowed, the guests laughed, and the couple ran through a shower of rice.The car was decorated by the best man, the groomsmen, and the bride’s cousin. They pulled out of the church parking lot and drove away from the city they had grown up in.It had all started way back in third grade; they...

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“The Wedding March” by Lane Keely

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. Everything about this wedding had been meticulously planned; down to the number of white roses in the bridesmaids bouquets and the brand of shoe shine the groomsmen used. There was just one, slightly important problem, Craig hadn’t shown up yet. “What do you mean ‘he isn’t here yet’? I can’t get married without someone to get married to!” That’s the bride, Denise. A usually sweet girl, Denise was quite frustrated with her husband-to-be’s tardiness and was storming around ...

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“The Tragic Honeymoon ” by Proteller James

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Janie McCrory This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives, janie giggled and Shrieked as harry tickled her and smacked her from behind, she tried all her possible best to wiggle away from his mischievous touches but she was a second too late and he scooped her up in his arms. He looked her dead in the eyes and saw the glint of happiness and passion behind those green eyes and he knew just perfectly that she was the right choice for him "I love you" he groaned, she was about to reply him back but he tossed her ont...

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“Ready or Not” by Jessie Winterspring

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. Or at less, it should have been for Colette. She turned eighteen that day and got her wished to have Garaboldi escort her for her debutante party. He was her father's friend, a good fifteen years younger than her dad, but still many years older than her, eleven years to be exact, but she can’t help get attracted to him. Garaboldi wore his curly, dark brown hair short. He was 6' 0" tall, solid-built with dark skin, and got piercing brown eyes which makes women sigh, but he also ...

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“A Day To Remember. A Day To Forget” by Greg Gillis

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives, but fate had other plans for the bride and groom. The weeks that led up to their wedding day were spectacular. Beth had been fitted with a beautiful silk and lace wedding gown, strapless and elegant, while her five bridesmaids were dressed in chiffon gowns with V-shaped necklines and a slit up the left leg. &...

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“Happiest day of their lives” by R L Brewer

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Not sure about this one. Tell me if it doesn't make sense. This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. The old cliche, the big wedding with all the trimmings. Along with the big cost blowout with the perfect dress and the flashy cars, it was going to be a tough act to follow. The bride was dressed in her lacework and beading, makeup perfect, exhausted by breakfast. The flower girl was already in tears and the baby page boy had dirtied through his nappy onto the white trousers. Great grandmother, grandmother and several aunti...

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“Shattered Glass” by Marcia H.

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. The invitations were sent out months ago. The RSVP’s were already in, the pretty burgundy dresses were brought for all ten women, the smallest pink and white dresses were bought and fitted for the littlest members of the bridal party and of course, the bride and groom were all ready for the ceremony. Three years ago a chance meeting turned into a proposal of marriage. Athena started her day just like she did on every other day. She hated Mondays because Monday’s took he...

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“Happiest Day For Who??” by Judith Buskohl

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“This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives.” Paula looked at her brother, Simon who had been standing beside her most of the day for moral support. She was glad that he had been there for her to support her when she felt like passing out. Since that awful day of their parents had got killed for seventeen dollars, her life had seemed like it was upside down and changing every moment. This morning, she had felt like the sun was going to shine on her and chase away the clouds of depression away. As the day...

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“The happiest day ” by Tuang Rhi

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives but it wasn't. She had already planned for the wedding dress the one she had dreamt of wearing. If it wasn't for that stupid call; she received two hours before her wedding day, then she would have been married to the prince of her dreams. Her hands were frozen and her ears denied to listen whatever the person on the other line said. Her eyes were already dripping wet with tears. The word's rang in her ears loudly and clear enough for her heart to bleed. Happy life with Sam is w...

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“This or That” by Joe Swanson

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This or That This was supposed to be the best day of their lives, and now…? “Doesn’t it always seem to be the case, that just when you reach for that last cookie you’d been fantasizing about all day, it is… “Yup! And I’m really sorry about that. I had no idea it was the last one. I have to admit, I never even looked into the jar. There’s something about that face on your pig cookie jar, that makes me feel creepy. So I don’t spend anymore time in its presence than necessary. I usually lift the top of its h...

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“Never Again” by Sonja V.

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives, but as Michelle stared into the photo of her and Louis at the sunset on the beach that summer night that changed their lives, she wasn’t so sure she was ready to do this. RING RING. She turned quickly to face her phone on the bed. She picked it up and answered it. “Hello,” She said. “Hi Michelle! Are you ready to go?” Melanie asked. “Right,” She replied as she threw her coat on and slammed the...

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“Teddy's tale of time” by Hannah Richards

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Teddy’s tale of time This was supposed to be the happiest day of my life. I finally get to meet my grandfather. I have heard the most amazing stories of his travels from my family. My mom said that when he was only 10 years old, Grandpa Buck fought off a lion with only a spoon. The closest I have gotten to meeting gramps is over a call when I was 8. Now I’m 15. A little bit about me. I am in the 10th grade, doing okay. I have made the football team every year, mom thinks that I got grandpas fighting genes. I think it is because my dad's brot...

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“Joyous Day Dead” by Hazen D

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This was supposed to be the happiest day of our lives. It was the day when we would welcome the little one home. The one we’d talked so long about in the car rides, picking names for hours, daydreaming about the hue of the eyes or the color of the eyes. Whether they would need braces, or glasses, or a brace. What was this little life that we awaited so eagerly? Who would they be? Irene sat up in the bed, her right-hand slapped Andy’s head. “She’s coming...

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“Broken Dreams” by Kelly Alaniz

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Kelly Alaniz Short Story 13 November 2020 Broken Dreams This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives. Instead, it turned into a nightmare of broken dreams. Everything was ready, all the planning, the flowers were ordered and delivered, the chairs were decorated and in place, and the torches were ready to be lit. Everyone was assembled on the beach Everything the couple had waited for, worked for, and hoped for was about to come true. The bride was getting dressed and the groom was fretting over his tie. The knot had t...

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Start your story with the line, “This was supposed to be the happiest day of their lives,” and end it with, “By then it was too late.”

Submissions are closed

✍️ 132 stories

“Just Politics” by Courtney Haynes

“A Perfect Life” by Bill Willoughby

“The Wedding March” by Lane Keely

“The Tragic Honeymoon ” by Proteller James

“Ready or Not” by Jessie Winterspring

“A Day To Remember. A Day To Forget” by Greg Gillis

“Happiest day of their lives” by R L Brewer

“Shattered Glass” by Marcia H.

“Happiest Day For Who??” by Judith Buskohl

“The happiest day ” by Tuang Rhi

“This or That” by Joe Swanson

“Never Again” by Sonja V.

“Teddy's tale of time” by Hannah Richards

“Joyous Day Dead” by Hazen D

“Broken Dreams” by Kelly Alaniz

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