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“The Siblings’ God Forgot to Give Us” by Kathleen Fine

“The key is under the flowerpot, next to the frog statue.” Casey recalled the instructions Muriel had given her a few days ago. Bending down, she lifted the heavy terracotta pot with both hands. She watched as a large earth worm raised its faceless head towards her, assumingly agitated by her interrupting its dark slumber.“Sorry, lil’ fella,” she whispered as she grabbed the brass key, placing the pot back down carefully as to not squish the tenant underneath. “We haven’t been there in a couple years…since mo...

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“Lilies” by Keira Shinn

They were both young when they fell in love. Just out of high scool; she was seventeen, and he was eighteen. Many, at first, called it infatuation, but they knew it was love right from the start. Not a day went by where they weren't together, utterly enraptured in each other's presence. They loved adventure and the outdoors, and he never grew tired of the way her auburn hair fluttered in the wind on top of a mountain or ...

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“The Collector” by V. S. Rose

The air was unrelentingly frigid, yet he did not feel its cold. His hands were blood-covered, chafed, and worn. A frozen bloodied body, skull cracked, laid on the white snow beneath him, slowly turning it a deep crimson. The heat, still radiating from the body, melted the surrounding snow like warm butter. The corners of his mouth spread into a satisfied grin; it was his fifth kill today. He reached across his body and pulled a serrated knife from its sheath on his hip. The blade glistened in the starlight, blo...

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“Forged in Fire” by Noel Turner

Ancient hinges groaned stubbornly as she opened the door. A quaint mountain cabin seemed a drastic understatement. Aged red cedar, warped by more than one hundred years of extreme weather, whined against her efforts to push it open it. “Well,” she said, “at least no one can sneak in, Mabel.” She set down the large cooler containing her groceries. Running her fingers along the wall...

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“The True Story of Goldilocks and The Three Bears” by Michelle Esposito

The flames flicked the night air, warming her freckled skin. She looked into the darkness beyond the fire, closing her eyes. She swallowed hard, and started to speak. "Have you ever heard the story of goldilocks and the three bears?" As her words echoed into the night, the air got even more still and ominous around the fire. Tears ran down her cheeks as she choked out the words in a rasp. "This is the true story." Her wo...

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“The Follicle Chronicles - Pt 1: Lifter of Wigs” by Jim Firth

CW: Swearing. Mild Peril.I didn’t realise how pale people from the city looked until I moved away. Tove thinks the urban water supply is laced with hair growth inhibitors, and I believe her—that would explain why everyone is hairless and smooth all over. Now that we’re convalescing at the cabin, our detox pathways have had a chance to eliminate the chemicals completely, and our follicles are sprouting for the first time. I don’t know what the history books will say, and I don’t want to speak too soon or sound arrogant, b...

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“Gone Away” by Laurel Hanson

I don’t know how I got here. That’s typical for me, at least for the last four years. It’s like a black wall went up in my brain, after which everything is smudged, jumbled, or simply missing. I’d wake up in alleys behind dumpsters with no idea how I got there. Sometimes in strangers’ beds or squalid mattresses in abandoned buildings. All pretty par for the course. But somehow, out of the fugue of my addiction, I must have finally made a good decision and gotten myself to my family’s summer cabin on the island.I’m s...

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“Throne of the Jarl ” by Henry Azure

The sparks flew from the ferrocerium rod like a sparkler on the fourth of July. The wood, though damp, stubbornly sprung to life, aided by the resin trapped within the cellulose. Jarl worked quickly to add small pieces of tinder. The flame needed to be coddled and was just as fragile and demanding as a newborn child. As larger diameter pieces of wood were added, the child sprang to life, shedding light and comfort onto the world around it. Knotted Pine paneled walls flickered into view beyond the confines of the river stone hearth. Large ...

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“Missing pieces” by Ross Dyter

The chants of the protestors faded as the door closed behind Harry. His footsteps echoed in the empty space as he approached the desk. The receptionist looked up, her straight, jet black hair cut to a perfect bob, not a strand out of place, her dark suit looked expensive, it probably cost more than Harry’s car. She smiled, that fake, forced smile employed by receptionists everywhere. “Mr Serwatka, how good to see ...

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“Herb Goes Hermit” by Murray Burns

Herb Goes Hermit Herb peered over the top of his cubicle, mesmerized by the agonizingly slow movement of the minute hand on the clock at the far side of the room. In his one lone, exhilarating act of defiance, he had tossed his watch into the waste basket in the company cafeteria years ago. Everything else in his life was constraining and suffocating. As illusory as it was, Herb could at least imagine he was freed from the bonds of time.Time. 34 years = 408 months = 1,768 ...

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“Running Man” by Sav Lightwood

Sports jerseys. Defunct firearms. Leather notebooks bound by thread and twine. Dilan was a man of memorabilia. Mountains of gimmicks and curios, littered and stacked and filed with seemingly no order. This was far from the truth, however. Dilan was an organised man. For what he was, he had to be, and he loved all the qualities that came with it; clarity, understanding, peace of mind. His belongings were e...

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“The Missing Piece ” by CJ Shutt

Staring out the window, she scanned the landscape. The night always played tricks on her mind and tonight was no different. She knew who her pursuers were but she hoped she lost them in the darkness. It would be Dawn soon, and she would lose all of her advantage. Alabaster skin seemed to glisten in the night, silky red hair fell in curls around her shoulders, piercing blue eyes met anyone that looked her way. She...

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“Alone in the woods” by Baxter Renfroe

“Suppose you hurt yourself…” Flora started with an awkward hesitation in her voice; she was standing against the kitchen table, a slender hand resting on her throat as though to wrestle the words back. “Who’s going to help you?” There was a silence that followed her question which was only broken when the kettle began to whistle on the stovetop. Flora’s hand fell from her throat and she turned away ...

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“The Mystery of Floren Woods” by Tamarin Butcher

The camera flashed. Jade blinked, even though it wasn't pointed at her. "I asked whether you recognize the victim, Ms. Galloway," the Detective Chief Inspector said impatiently. "The body?" Amy. "No, no, like I told that policewoman, I don't think I do. . ." "Don't think you do or don't?" the DCI prompted. "Well, I haven't' looked closely. . ." ...

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“Hero of the Appalachians” by J. Nicholas

(CW: dialogue, mature themes, tobacco use, alcohol use, violence) “You sure I am safe? They are not finding me?” Elena asked in her best English, which she’d studied since age thirteen. She wiped sweat from her brow, improbable with the driver’s window open, blasting cold air through the cabin of the Ford LTD. It was the 1974 model, they said, but that year was still two months away. These men ...

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Write about a character who, for whatever reason, retreats to a remote cabin.

Submissions are closed

✍️ 63 stories

“The Siblings’ God Forgot to Give Us” by Kathleen Fine

“Lilies” by Keira Shinn

“The Collector” by V. S. Rose

“Forged in Fire” by Noel Turner

“The True Story of Goldilocks and The Three Bears” by Michelle Esposito

“The Follicle Chronicles - Pt 1: Lifter of Wigs” by Jim Firth

“Gone Away” by Laurel Hanson

“Throne of the Jarl ” by Henry Azure

“Missing pieces” by Ross Dyter

“Herb Goes Hermit” by Murray Burns

“Running Man” by Sav Lightwood

“The Missing Piece ” by CJ Shutt

“Alone in the woods” by Baxter Renfroe

“The Mystery of Floren Woods” by Tamarin Butcher

“Hero of the Appalachians” by J. Nicholas

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Write about someone who realizes they're on the wrong path.

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