Shadows of Persistence

Submitted into Contest #242 in response to: Write about two characters who meet and/or fall in love in a museum.... view prompt

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Fiction LGBTQ+ Mystery

Ella, though not her real name, was a skilled agent operating under the guise of an ordinary woman, parked her car outside the Salvador Dalí Museum in St. Petersburg, Florida. She glanced at the clock on her car’s dashboard and exhaled a sigh of relief as it read 2:02. Still twenty minutes early, she had time to assess the situation before her mission commenced.

The museum was unusually quiet for a Tuesday afternoon, but Ella didn’t mind. Dressed in nondescript black pants and a purple blouse, she blended seamlessly into the surroundings. Her teal socks, a subtle identifier, hinted at her true purpose. She wandered through the exhibits, absorbing the artwork with a practiced eye.

Finally, she arrived at The Persistence of Memory, Dalí's renowned masterpiece. Settling onto a nearby bench, she feigned interest in the surreal scene before her. Glancing at her phone, she noted it was 2:19, still a few minutes until her scheduled rendezvous. Ella snapped a casual photo of the painting and posted it online, a calculated move to maintain her cover.

Lost in the distraction of social media, Ella failed to notice the woman observing her discretely. With a teal accent scarf signaling her as the contact, the woman approached and sat down, placing a small black briefcase between them. She was average height and slim, with short brown hair and brown eyes. Ella couldn't help but admire her striking appearance, though she felt slightly inferior with her shorter height and curvier build.

"Excuse me, do you have the time?" the woman inquired, echoing the predetermined code phrase. Her voice was smooth and alluring, causing Ella to try and suppress any rising attraction.

Glancing at her phone, it was 2:22, and Ella confirmed with the chosen code phrase, "Twenty after two."

"Thank you," the woman replied, preparing to depart.

“What do you think of his work?” Ella inquired, nodding towards The Persistence of Memory, unable to resist engaging with the enigmatic stranger.

A flicker of surprise crossed the woman's face, but she recovered quickly. “I believe Dalí was extraordinarily talented. His reinterpretation,” she gestured towards The Disintegration of the Persistence of Memory, “is particularly intriguing.”

Ella sensed the woman's discomfort, mirroring her own. Was there more to this encounter than met the eye?

“What's your name?” Ella asked, veering far from the scripted path, her curiosity piqued.

The woman hesitated, then offered, “Anna.”

“I’m S–” she started, almost giving away her real name. “I’m Ella,” she finally managed.

Anna's eyes widened, recognition flickering briefly before she masked it with a smile. “Clever choice of name,” she remarked, her tone cryptic.

Ella let out a small gasp as she realized that both their codenames mean “she” in different languages. But also knew better than to name the link out loud. She blinked, astonished by the revelation. They had both chosen their names for the same reason. She felt their connection deepen, their shared secrets weaving a delicate thread between them.

Ella's heart quickened as she extended an invitation to Anna. “I'd love to get to know you better,” she blurted out, her boldness surprising even herself.

But Anna's response was tinged with reluctance, a reminder of the barriers separating them. Anna's expression faltered, her reluctance palpable. “As much as I'd like to, it's not advisable,” she said softly, rising to leave.

With a heavy sigh, Anna walked away, leaving Ella to contemplate their encounter. A pang of disappointment washed over her as she watched Anna disappear into the museum's depths, leaving behind unanswered questions and unresolved tension.

Ella lingered on the bench, stealing one last glance at Dalí's works before retrieving the briefcase. With practiced nonchalance, she proceeded to her car, the weight of secrecy heavy on her shoulders.

Once seated, Ella hesitated, her fingers hovering over the briefcase. Temptation gnawed at her resolve, but she knew the rules - no exceptions. With a resigned sigh, she texted her superior, confirming the package's security.

“Proceed to secondary drop off,” came the reply, a reminder of her mission's urgency.

As Ella navigated the streets, her mind drifted back to the museum, and Anna. Would their paths cross again? The uncertainty hung in the air, a tantalizing mystery yet to be unraveled.

Despite the looming deadline of her mission, Ella couldn't shake the feeling of connection she had with Anna. It was more than just a chance encounter; it felt like the universe had conspired to bring them together. But as a secret agent, she knew better than to dwell on such thoughts. Her duty came first, no matter the personal cost.

But as she drove through the city, Ella couldn't help but replay their conversation in her mind. Anna's cryptic remarks, her enigmatic smile - they all hinted at a deeper connection between them. But what was Anna's role in all of this? And why did she seem so reluctant to engage further?

The questions swirled in Ella's mind, refusing to be ignored. But with each passing mile, the answers seemed to slip further away, like grains of sand slipping through her fingers.

Arriving at the secondary drop-off point, Ella's focus snapped back to the task at hand. With practiced efficiency, she completed the transfer and resumed her journey, her thoughts still consumed by Anna.

As she merged onto the highway, Ella made a silent vow to herself. She would find a way to uncover the truth about Anna, no matter the obstacles in her path.

As if on cue, her superior sent her a text message, "What did you say to your contact? She was asking about you. By name."

Ella couldn't help but grin that Anna was asking about her. Obviously, she felt the connection, too.

She used the rest of the drive to figure out how to respond. Once she was safely in her driveway, "I just wanted to know more about her," she typed, innocently.

"Do you know how dangerous it is to have two agents in the same place? Now we have to transfer one of you," the boss replied.

Ella's heart sank at the news, and she threw her phone across the car. It landed at the foot of the passenger's seat with a thud. Tears welled in her eyes, realizing her hopes of ever seeing Anna again were effectively dashed.

After sobbing for a few minutes, she took comfort in the hope that they could still meet again if the universe desired it.

March 22, 2024 19:46

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BROOKLYNN LOBB
16:02 Mar 27, 2024

uhhh ok

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Emilie Ocean
17:42 Mar 26, 2024

That was so beautiful, Ellie. I really enjoyed it. It was subtle. I wish there was more! I'm dying to know whether Ella and Anna met again and had a HEA :)

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