It's quiet.
No, not exactly.
There's sound,
faint—
a distant chorus
vibrating from the trees
outside my window
where the katydid's quaver:
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
It's an endless cry
that I easily
close my eyes to,
nothing like the cry
of a newborn,
the newborn sleeping,
finally,
in the bassinet
next to me.
The thought
of his cry
jolts me
and I sit up.
Is he breathing?
I stare at him:
his chest,
his ribs,
waiting,
watching,
counting
my own heartbeats until
wait—
I shuffle out of bed
and lean over his
fragile body,
listening,
waiting,
counting
my own heartbeats until—
there it is.
A breath.
Another.
He's fine, Mommy,
I tell myself
for the hundredth time.
He's fine.
Rest.
I crawl back
into my bed,
sink back
into my pillows,
close back
my leaden eyelids…
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
The muted vibration
of my phone
cuts through the chorus
and my eyes peel open.
I reach for it,
laying on the bed beside me—
just in case—
and look at the screen.
It's him.
I cup my hand
around my mouth,
"Everything all right?"
"Hi, yeah," he says,
"I know it's late but...
your dad…"
I sit up.
"Is… Is he not
answering the door,
again?"
Quiet.
No, not exactly.
I hear his breathing
through the phone.
"I hate to ask," he says,
"since it's so late,
but can you come sign
for the medicine again?
I can't just leave morphine
at the door."
A stir
from the bassinet
steals my attention.
I wait,
watch,
count
my own heartbeats until—
he's still breathing.
I shake my head.
"No, of course not.
That's fine!
I'll be there in
five minutes."
He sighs,
"Thank you…"
My husband stirs,
lifts an eyelid
and I motion
to the phone.
He already knows.
I'm out of bed
and dressed
within seconds,
tiptoeing toward the
bedroom door but
wait—
I hurry to the bassinet:
watch,
listen,
count
my own heartbeats until—
Mommy.
He's fine.
Go.
I turn,
walking on the
balls of my feet
out the door
and into the humid night.
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
katy katy did,
katy katy didn't.
Their melody
is louder now.
It's strange
how they permeate
the air, envelope me
in their chirps.
It's almost as if
I can feel it,
their song
oscillating
through my bones.
Though now,
obscured in the sticky darkness,
their unabating cry
doesn't sound much
like a lullaby
anymore.
It sounds
like a warning.
I pause,
listen,
wait,
count
my own heartbeats until—
It's fine.
Go.
Hurry.
I pull into the drive,
cutting the headlights,
and creep
to my father's house, careful
not to wake
his curious neighbors.
Standing
on the porch
is a man I've met
many times before,
briefly, but numerous—
always in this same spot
but never quite this late.
He looks sleepy.
So do I.
"Thank you for coming out."
His voice is raspy.
"I know it's late,
but I'm running behind
and your dad's prescription
was last on my list."
He lowers a clipboard;
hands over a pen.
I scribble my dad's name.
"I understand," I breathe.
"I'm just sorry
you had to wait
for me."
He tucks the papers
under his arm
and gives me
a package.
"I think it's brave
what you're doing
for him.
You're so young."
He stills.
I sigh.
"He is, too..."
He opens his mouth
and I watch his eyes
search for words—
something,
anything,
but nothing comes out.
He shuffles his feet;
pats my shoulder;
retreats to his truck.
I watch him pull away,
reverse-drive
down the road,
turn around,
leave.
Quiet.
No, not exactly.
A dog barks
from a distant yard.
I comb through my keys
until I find the white one
with the faded pink letters
that read,
"home".
I rub my thumb across them,
as if the touch
will bring back
their vitality,
as if this morphine
will bring back
my father's
vitality…
I open the door
to darkness.
It's unusual
for him
to have all the lights
turned off.
"Dad?"
My voice
barely escapes
my throat.
I wait,
listen,
count
my own heartbeats until—
nothing.
I step inside,
close the door,
glide to the kitchen
and flick on the light
above the oven.
Quiet.
No, not exactly.
I hear the fan
whirling
in his bedroom.
I breathe, realizing
I hadn't done that
since coming inside.
"Dad?"
I don't know why
I called his name—
I'm sure he's sleeping—
but something…
something
isn't quite right
here.
I leave my keys
on the table
and step
toward his bedroom.
I pause,
listen,
breathe,
count
my own heartbeats until—
I open the door.
Moonlight flickers across the floor,
it's white dress mottled
with the inky stripes
from the blinds
in the window.
I step inside;
the door bumps lightly
against the wall,
a peeve of my father's,
but suddenly
I don't care about that.
I see him on the bed,
lying on his back,
his frail arms
criss-crossed against his
bone-thin chest.
His face—
still,
waxen.
I can't move.
I'm not even sure
when I took my last breath,
but I struggle to find one
now.
My lips are dry,
sticky.
I lick them,
ungluing my mouth
so that I can choke out—
what, exactly?
"Dad?"
The name catches
in the persistent hum
of his little bedside fan,
and I don't know
if I'm upset
that I have to say
his name
again,
or if it's because I know
he won't hear me.
I step closer.
Just one.
"Dad!"
I watch,
wait,
listen
count
my own damn heartbeats until—
I leap to his bed,
my palm pressing against
his forehead,
his cheeks,
his cold
cold
cold
lips—
"Dad!
Wake up!
Please,
don't go yet!"
I shake him.
And I shake him.
And he doesn't move
and I know
I know
I know
he's not going to but
"I'm not ready
to let you go
just yet!"
My stomach
plummets.
My ears
burn.
My mind
is screaming
screaming
screaming—
Is he breathing?
Stop.
Listen.
Wait.
Count
my own heartbeats until—
It's quiet.
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Such a beautiful story. I loved the prose and the story kept me hooked in.
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So beautifully written Frostie. It made me cry.
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