Submitted to: Contest #295

A Murder Is Announced

Written in response to: "Write a story about a coincidence that seems too good to be true."

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Crime Thriller Urban Fantasy

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Late one evening in Yulin, Guangxi, a cryptic announcement appears across social media and local news outlets: “A murder is announced: June 21st, 8 PM. Location: X Street. Supporters are encouraged to attend.” The chilling message spreads like wildfire, sending waves of fear and curiosity throughout the city. For some, it’s a macabre invitation; for others, it's a silent threat. But for one man, it feels like destiny—a grotesque alignment of his darkest desire.

In a shadowed tea shop along the bustling X Street, Gregory Hales sits alone at a corner table. The space hums with muted conversations and the soft clinking of porcelain teacups, yet it feels detached from him. Gregory’s gaunt frame leans over a chipped ceramic teacup, his once-imposing presence diminished by the ravages of terminal cancer. His sunken cheeks and skeletal hands bear the marks of an unrelenting illness, but his eyes—oh, his eyes—remain alive, simmering with an unsettling intensity. It is not fear of death that grips him, but a fascination with the finality of his own willpower.

Gregory Hales is a man burdened by the specter of his past. Decades ago, he was a cog in the machinery of war, a soldier in the British Army during World War II. Then, he was killed out of duty, draped in the flag of his nation, the acts of violence sanitized by honor and necessity. Each kill was absorbed into the faceless mass of "enemy combatants." The rationale of duty had acted as both mask and shield, dulling the raw truth of his actions. But now, as cancer gnaws at the edges of his life, a different, primal desire emerges within him: the need to kill not for the country, not for cause, but for the sheer, unfiltered assertion of his will. To kill for himself, and no one else.

When Gregory first reads the announcement, his breath catches. His trembling lips murmur, “It’s too good to be true. Too good...” He repeats it, his voice cracking with something halfway between disbelief and longing. The cryptic message feels like a grotesque invitation tailored to him—a chance to indulge in his desire without guilt, oversight, or justification. Not a soldier following orders, but a man asserting his right to take life on his terms.

As he rereads the words, flashes of the war rush through his mind: deadened faces of fallen soldiers, the metallic sting of cordite in the air, and the weight of his rifle as he pulled the trigger. For decades, he had lived under the illusion that duty had driven him to kill. But now, finally, he admits the truth: he had longed to kill even then, hidden behind the shield of duty. This announcement feels like the moment he has been waiting for—a grotesque catharsis.

Gregory pours another cup of tea, his bony hand trembling as he lifts it. He scans the room with cold detachment, his calculating mind sizing up potential victims. Perhaps the elderly shopkeeper handing out steaming pots of tea? Or should it be one of the anxious-looking patrons sitting nearby? Everyone is a possibility. His withered body may be failing, but his mind remains razor-sharp, fixated entirely on the act that he believes will restore a piece of himself.

The tea shop, nestled amid Yulin’s labyrinth of alleys and marketplaces, is brimming with tense energy that goes unnoticed by the average pedestrian. Lanterns cast flickering light onto polished wood tables, their glow barely reaching the shadowy corners. The murmur of conversations inside blends with the melodic cries of street vendors outside and the occasional yelp of stray dogs slipping through the crowded lanes.

At one table, Lin Mei, a fierce and outspoken activist, slams her hand on the wooden surface, her sharp eyes darting toward the announcement she has opened on her phone. Dressed in a plain blouse and jeans, her presence is deceptively unassuming. “This has to be about the dogs,” she mutters to her friend, her voice quivering with anger. Mei’s recent efforts to uncover the underground trade of strays for Yulin’s infamous dog meat festival have made her both a crusader and a target. Any veiled threat feels personal.

In another corner, Charlotte Turner, an American journalist, works furiously on her laptop. Her auburn hair falls in messy waves across her shoulders, and her green blazer is slightly wrinkled from days spent chasing leads in the sticky Guangxi heat. Determined to uncover the truth behind the cryptic “murder” announcement, Charlotte’s fingers move swiftly over the keyboard while her hazel eyes scan the crowd. She catches glimpses of nervous faces, each one cataloged in her mind as a potential source or suspect.

By the counter, Camille Fournier, a French exchange student, sits with a notebook spread on her lap. Her flowing sundress and elegant scarf stand out in the subdued tea shop, but her distracted demeanor betrays unease. Her slender fingers absently twist the end of her scarf as she scribbles fragmented thoughts and attempts to connect the dots of this unfolding mystery.

Kenji Tanaka, a bookish Japanese coder with sharp glasses, lurks in the shadowy back corner, typing rapidly into chatrooms and websites on the dark web. His navy blue collared shirt looks crisp, but his furrowed brow and muttered curses highlight his frustration. Whether the announcement is a hoax, a genuine threat, or something else entirely, Kenji is intent on finding out.

Finally, Surin Boonchai, a dapper Thai businessman, sips tea from a delicate porcelain cup. His tailored black suit and the leather bag at his feet exude understated power. Surin’s connections to shady dealings and his ability to wield money like a weapon make him a figure of quiet authority. His reasons for being here are his own, but his calm demeanor belies an intricate plan forming in his mind.

As the minutes tick closer to 8 PM, the patrons of the tea shop, drawn by curiosity, suspicion, or something darker, begin to realize that their paths are set to intersect. Lin Mei’s righteous fury toward animal cruelty clashes with Surin’s pragmatic view that only money can buy real change. Charlotte’s investigative tenacity leads her to eavesdrop on conversations and gauge the sincerity of Mei’s outrage and Surin’s polished charm. Camille and Kenji, though quieter, work in parallel—Camille sketching symbolic connections in her notebook, while Kenji scours digital whispers for the truth.

And Gregory? He observes them all with clinical precision, the gears of his dark plan turning slowly. He doesn’t care about their noble causes, their convictions, or their fears. He knows only one thing: this night, he will taste true freedom. He will kill because he chooses to.

As 8 PM approached, the cryptic instructions lead the group down a shadowy alley beyond the buzzing markets. Lanterns flicker dimly, casting long shadows that seem to claw at the gathering strangers. Gregory’s heart pounds, his thin frame trembling not from his illness but from the anticipation of what is to come.

But the revelation is not what anyone expected. The "murder" is not the taking of human life. It is the chilling slaughter of dogs, rounded up in cages and prepared for the Yulin dog meat festival. The announcement that lured them was nothing more than a euphemistic call for supporters of this grotesque tradition.

Lin Mei’s rage ignites like a flame, her voice echoing down the alley as she vows to expose this cruelty. Charlotte types furiously, her instincts urging her to transform this moment into a damning story. Mei and Surin clash over methods, her moral charge colliding with his belief in money as the only savior. Camille and Kenji remain in the shadows, trying to process the horror before them.

For Gregory, however, the moment disintegrates into bitter disillusionment. This is not the murder he craved—the act of will and domination over another human being. His tightly wound fantasy collapses, leaving only the hollow truth of his waning life.

As Gregory trudges back through the labyrinth of Yulin’s darkened streets, the words “too good to be true” repeat endlessly in his mind, but now with a bitter edge. There is no such thing as an escapable murder. He thinks of the wars he fought, the lives he ended, and how even then, the act was never purely his own. A perfect murder—one born not from crime or cause but from pure, unadulterated will—requires careful planning, precise execution, and, above all, time.

Does Gregory, with his cancer-ridden body, have that luxury? His mind drifts to the whispers he has heard about China’s human organ trade. Could he pay for a new kidney, and extend his life just long enough to fulfill his desire? The chilling thought strikes him as he stops to rest, his hand bracing against the cold stone wall of an alleyway. His lips twist into an almost imperceptible smile. One does not simply kill without consequence, he thinks. Perhaps life itself must be bought at the most grotesque price to make death truly his.

Posted Mar 21, 2025
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KC Foster
01:14 Mar 30, 2025

This was so dark and sad. It is truly terrible that such things go on and its so impirtant that we face them head on. I really do just love your use of words. It's gorgeous and they flow through my mind like water. The immersion is incredible. Huh, and I didn't even notice the use of present tense (which i normally cannot stand). Well done!

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Sonia So
16:30 Mar 30, 2025

Thanks KC.

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Marty B
21:47 Mar 22, 2025

Thanks for sharing- this event seems terrible!

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Sonia So
06:02 Mar 26, 2025

😭 It still exists

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Sonia So
18:22 Mar 21, 2025

Yulin dog meat festival is a real event.

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