Desperate remedies

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Adventure Creative Nonfiction Suspense

                       Desperate Remedies

Summer was just around the corner, and this late spring Sunday started off magnificently. Warm, sunny, and a gentle easterly breeze wafting out over the calm, Indian ocean. However, to a trained eye, a closer look at the red sky foretold of bad weather on the way. There was an old saying, "red sky in the morning, sailors warning, red sky at night, sailors delight."

Back in the 1970s, Rob’s normal job was as an electronics technician, but he did some moonlighting as a deckhand on a crayfishing boat. He had a standing invitation and would go out as often as he could, weekends, public holidays, and rostered days off. He didn't get paid, he just loved being out on the ocean. Saying that he didn't get paid was not quite right, he always came home with at least 40 or more crayfish that had a black-market value of about eight dollars each. Two large freezers at his place plus three others at family and friends' houses amounted to many thousands of dollars.

The twenty-meter Cray boat was anchored at the Ocean Reef breakwater located on a northern beach of Perth, Western Australia. He met the crew in the parking lot that was close by. The skipper, Bob, had a full white beard on a weathered, leathery face that made him look twenty years older. The other two deckhands, Josh and Simon (Simmo to his mates) were in their mid-twenties, and you could describe them as strong, scruffy and a bit rough around the edges. Rob was probably only two minutes late, but that didn't stop the ribald comments, "hey Robbo, get the leg over this morning?" They were great guys, and they all worked well as a team.

The heavy, wooden craypots were already set about eight kilometers offshore close to a small, natural reef. The work, although physically demanding, was a little monotonous with the occasional bit of excitement. The skipper would sometimes place a large, baited hook, usually with a live octopus, on one of the ropes that were used to haul in the craypots and nine times out of ten you would find a very unhappy shark had taken the bait. Bob would sell the sharks to local restaurants and, for the bigger sharks, sell the jaws to Japanese tourists. Today was no exception. They all knew something big was on the line when the winch used to pull the pots up started slipping. Eventually, a three-and-a-half-meter grey surfaced, and it took nearly twenty minutes to get it on board. These fish are very strong and dangerous; Josh managed a gash to his leg that needed bandaging.

They had almost finished when the skipper announced that a change in the weather was on the way, and they needed to hurry up. To Rob, the conditions hadn't changed that much. Maybe the wind was stronger, maybe the light had changed, or perhaps the color of the sky, but whatever it was, Bob had sea water running in his veins and he knew the weather was turning bad.

Just as they pulled the last pot and headed for home, heavy pelting rain hit them. The wind changed direction and significantly increased in strength. The sky turned black, and together with loud cracks of thunder and dazzling lightning flashes a very eerie, almost surreal scenario unfolded before their eyes. Rob wasn't that worried. They had a big boat, an experienced captain, and he had weathered much larger storms than this.

As they approached the breakwater, they could see many people standing on the rocks and frantically pointing to the windward side. It was obvious that some of them were shouting and although the crew were perhaps only fifty meters away, the noise of the storm and the deafening crash of the waves on the rocks made it impossible to hear them.

Bob turned the boat away from the lee side and headed around the breakwater to the other side. It didn't take long to see what was going on. A small aluminum boat, maybe four or five meters in length, was in dire trouble. It was just meters away from the rocks, and it looked like a lot of water had flooded the back end. Standing at the steering wheel of the boat was a large, middle-aged man. Just behind him was an equally large woman and three young kids. The look of fear on the woman's face said it all. With the waves crashing onto the boat and the howling wind both doing their best to smash the boat onto the jagged rocks, disaster was only minutes away. Bob, with his many years of experience, maneuvered the boat as close as he could to the stricken vessel; this was extremely dangerous as it put his boat in imminent peril of also being tossed onto the rocks. Rob motioned to the man that they were going to throw him a rope; he didn't look up, and his face was frozen in fear. Rob threw the rope perfectly, and it hit the guy in the middle of his chest. He didn't flinch, and the rope fell forlornly to the bottom of the boat. The eldest of the kids, an eleven- or twelve-year-old boy, got the idea. He grabbed the rope and scrambled to the front of the boat. He sat on the bow of the boat, clutching the rope in his hands. Unfortunately, no amount of gesturing could convince the young boy to tie the rope onto the conveniently located bollard. If they tried to tow the boat with him holding the rope, he would have been pulled into the ocean, probably to his death. The boat was almost on the rocks by now. Time had run out. Simmo didn't hesitate. He jumped into the maelstrom and swum to the little boat that was being tossed around like a cork. He scrambled on board, secured the rope, and took control of the wheel while Bob used maximum power to pull the hapless family to safety.

When the crew finally got to secure their boat and made their way to the shore, they were greeted by a TV news team and a large crowd who were cheering and calling them hero’s; being a little embarrassed with all the attention they managed to sneak into the nearby sporting club bar for a well-deserved beer.

The beers arrived just in time for everyone to see the rescued family get in their car and take off at a rapid rate. The boat trailer had been left in the carpark, and the boat was still on the ramp where it had also been left. Bob had a bit of a whimsical laugh and guessed that boating was now off the agenda for them.

Later that night, sitting in his cozy, safe house, with a crackling fire and a large whisky, Rob could hear the still raging storm outside and realized that today he had witnessed what desperate remedies had been taken to save that family from certain death. Bob had risked his boat and his crew while Simmo had done the bravest thing that Rob had ever seen.

April 28, 2024 07:03

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Krissa Svavars
15:06 May 07, 2024

Nice story. For an easier read you might want to put in more "breaks" in the text (like switching between lines a bit more) :)

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Bob Leask
07:28 May 09, 2024

Thanks. I'll try it next time.

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Carolyn O'B
18:10 May 04, 2024

Well written.

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Bob Leask
07:29 May 09, 2024

Thanks Carolyn. Did you enjoy the story itself?

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Carolyn O'B
18:19 May 11, 2024

Oh yes, love suspence

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