ThE MyStErIoUs BoY

Submitted into Contest #29 in response to: Write a story about someone dealing with family conflict.... view prompt

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The day I realized that my family was it. I thought about it but then i realized i saw it. the thing that kept me from my beloved ones. I looked around then i heard it. I ran down the stairs and into my parents room but they were yelling at each other so they didn't hear the noise. i left the room and went to explore and found the truth. i never knew that it'd be there but i realized it wasn't a dream and never found out. i cried and cried and never stopped but then i really wanted to play and then i realized that my sister was being super annoying. I never knew that id ever be the one to fly north to the caves and i flew away to the Netherlands and then i realized it was never meant to be. I went out but instantly flew up and i realized that this was all just a dream and i sighed in relieve.

The day I realized that my family was it. I thought about it but then i realized i saw it. the thing that kept me from my beloved ones. I looked around then i heard it. I ran down the stairs and into my parents room but they were yelling at each other so they didn't hear the noise. i left the room and went to explore and found the truth. i never knew that it'd be there but i realized it wasn't a dream and never found out. i cried and cried and never stopped but then i really wanted to play and then i realized that my sister was being super annoying. I never knew that id ever be the one to fly north to the caves and i flew away to the Netherlands and then i realized it was never meant to be. I went out but instantly flew up and i realized that this was all just a dream and i sighed in relieve.

The day I realized that my family was it. I thought about it but then i realized i saw it. the thing that kept me from my beloved ones. I looked around then i heard it. I ran down the stairs and into my parents room but they were yelling at each other so they didn't hear the noise. i left the room and went to explore and found the truth. i never knew that it'd be there but i realized it wasn't a dream and never found out. i cried and cried and never stopped but then i really wanted to play and then i realized that my sister was being super annoying. I never knew that id ever be the one to fly north to the caves and i flew away to the Netherlands and then i realized it was never meant to be. I went out but instantly flew up and i realized that this was all just a dream and i sighed in relieve.

February 19, 2020 16:07

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

Im so proud

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

the proudest

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

the most proud

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

the best

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

the bestest

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Charlotte Moore
16:08 Feb 19, 2020

the most best

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