The imagining secret passway

Submitted into Contest #34 in response to: Write a story about someone who finds a secret passageway in their house.... view prompt

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It was slimy snakey dancing fooling that tried to have this woman to enter her closet she didn't know what to do he kept popping up every night telling her to come into his secret passage with her mystery thinking one day she walk and she got a little bit closer and she looked over and it was a little door and he kept waving took her to tell her to come into the secret passage how much they fool over there and has so much different stuff going on over there one day she came upon herself to think upon her fear it was not only that he was scary but he was kind of adventurous to her and she really wonder what was behind that door so he left for a while she walked over to the door peep inside went inside it. As she walked inside it was trees everywhere she looked over it was a big puddle of water not only was it a water it was a waterfall with a little island next to it she thought oh wow what. aventure look at that island over there and as she opened the door and looked and she could only just think but she was afraid that she'll get trapped inside and not know what to do to get out so she did a little bit of monkey see monkey do and a little bit of pondering and she's firing and boiling in her soul wonder what's on the other side of that door and she say what was there but I could only imagine if she was to go inside of their so she thought well maybe I'll just go in for a little while so she stepped foot in there and she had all her problems, all problems back at home ... Tell her about it a rude awakening ,her best friend begins to blow her off she looks so peaceful over there has she peeked in a little bit closer and stuck her head inside it really is really bother her that she didn't have the type of friends that she has so maybe she thought she can probably escape over there and see what see what it was about. What type of activities is going on over there help her get away from her life a little bit so she goes over there and shes a little sneaky thing and a snake I was looking for her pops up hi you finally made it you finally came over here let me show you around she said oh no I have to get back I have to get back he said we'll just let me show you around all we have to do is just walk around for a little bit I'm so excited that you came so as she built up the steam in the courage in her why not he said I have to get back I had to go to school I have things that I have to do rockin just show you around for a little while would you like that uhmmm well I guess I can look around for a little while she said what a little yay around face so he chuckle and get the slithering around ,but come along come on let me show you around so much fun things to do over here I can only imagine she said in her swampy voice so he told her about how they used to ride on boats and how they used to play kickball and how they just used to have so much fun she's like what what happened are y'all still having that type of fun cuz I would love to join in well no not really but we're still doing a little bit of stuff okay well I'll look over here in just a little spot that we have oh wow that is so dreamy do you really like it, it's a jacuzzi in there and its just oh my gosh it's so much stuff let's go outside.... Oh I really shouldn't why not I'm telling you it was nothing in there so much fun you have nothing to be afraid of trust me really you can trust me promise I'll bring you right back... Sorry she looks around at ARC nice cozy room so they goes inside he shuts the door behind them will that door open back up she screams and yell at him of course it will have nothing to worry about it's something you're up to something just come along just come along all right so she goes over in as the sand runs through her toes in the harness that she's thinking about something pondering she's real curious about what's going to happen so his little sneaky ways she knew he was up to something it's just something about this island so then a little girl come over hi what is your name and a snake speaks please just go just go if you want to run away before she even comes over I'm just introducing myself cheese whiz lol saw she just looking over there just blowing up in her mind fireworks in everything she's just so stunned by what she sees so Mercy Mercy Mercy she say to herself oh my gosh this is so beautiful and a little girl says can I hang out with you for today find no go bug off...so did she bust it worse okay it's okay he's like are you sure you posed to be just us I want to show you around all the different secret places around here and she she just wants some attention so she say we can be so she will never forget this moment is a chill laid-back in the sand wow this is so nice as the water began to almost touch her feet she jumps back well I bet that water is cold how about we go for a dip the little girl say go we're just going to lay here and enjoy the nice hot sun that she looks over at him why is she thinks to herself why is he being so mean and cruel like that oh well all right time to get up relaxation is over time to finish our walk if I would have to ditch this little girl is so much stuff that I want to show you here should I wear I have to get home for dinner the little girl sets herself

March 22, 2020 00:30

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