BEAUTIFUL ANSWER FROM LIFE…!

Submitted into Contest #59 in response to: Write a story that feels lonely, despite being set in a packed city.... view prompt

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Creative Nonfiction Drama

One girl name is Lily was really UPSET because she felt very lonely.

Lily was sat at near one of garden benches.

Her Friend ‘Lovely’ was across the garden. And she saw Lily. She looked like sad, so Lovely went to her close and sat at same bench. And asked to her, “Are you upset?”

Lily replied: “YES,”

“Why??” Lovely Asked..

Lily replied in sad voice, There are too many because…

·        Because, someone do something wrong with me!

·        Because, my heart was broken!

·        Because, I was failure!

·        Because, I am not capable!

·        Because, someone not understand me!

·        And Because, I am lonely…!

Lovely said, “But this all ‘because’ are valid to become you upset?”

Lily saw to her for…

“You know you are not lonely and failure and not unable and so on”, Lovely replied.

Lily asked to her friend in tense voice, “How you know what the feeling of lonely girl”

Lovely was thinking sometime and suddenly she remembered a story and she said,

“Hey Dear, I’ll tell you a story and I am sure you’ll get the spark from it! So you want to listing it?”

Lily was thinking sometime time and replied: YES, Tell...

Lovely Started story...

"An Old Man, a satisfied an Old Man was at end of the life…

“This time an Old Man ask a simple question to his Life: “Lovely Life, I fulfilled my all the needs that time you were with Me.!”

Life said: “YES Man…”

Old Man said: “So now your turn you told me what you need from me?”

Life said: “You already gave me, Man!”

“Which thing I gave you? I didn’t remember anything”, An Old man said."

Lily Said, “What was the Answer from the Life”

Lovely Continued her Story again…

“Life said: “When you worked I worked, when you spend a happy time I spend too, when you spend bad time I spend too, what you do thing I do same thing! In short you gave me your every moment which you will live, Man!

But I have an issue, when you alone you forgot I was there, Man! Why every people are forgot that they are not alone even not lonely because I were there!

You know what, in this world to many people think they are alone or no one with them, but the fact is they are live in this world when there are a spirit within them self which is never let go until they die!

Your child left you, wife left you, husband, friend, sister, brother and the entire person in your life left you, maybe in some case but they left you. But I am Life or Spirit only one who never left you until you die, Man!

"When you born I born

When you’ll die, I’ll die!"

Never forgot that you are not only who spend your life moment, I am there too.”

“YES! My Lovely Life YES…” An Old Man replied.”

Lovely said with excitement, “STORY have what a HAPPY END!”

Lily said with happy voice, “Wow it means I am not Lonely, and even I am not only one who sad, unable, and upset…”

Lovely saw her with delighted eyes….

Lovely continued, “Because Lovely Life With me!!”

Lovely got a relief.

Lovely said, “In this word of our life no such thing made us “UPSET” because, every little bad thing give you an experience about life which taken in to another place. May be sometime it make you very strong.”

Girl Asked, “Really?”

Lovely replied, “Sometime we think life was too horrible.”

“YES, you are right! Like,

1.   There is no such thing which happening well with me.

2.   I am really upset.

3.   There is no place for me in this word and etc…”, Lily replied

“But you know what when something happen badly with us, it was good. Because our elders told from a long time only one thing “WHATEVER HAPPENS IS FOR GOOD”. Why they told like this. Because they had lot of experience about life. They never told without any experience. So why we take a little bad thing and made our mood ‘UPSET’.” Lovely said.

Lovely continued, “If your mood become “UPSET” then go outside take a fresh air and do whatever like you to do!”

Lily said, “You know when I am meet you then I thought I am lonely, I am upset but now I realized I am not lonely and upset because every moment, every little moment life with me!”

Lovely her Mouth shaken.

For little moment both are not spoke not even a word. Both were happy for they had beautiful life. They had some problem, issue, bad thing but they had “LIFE”.

After little moment Lovely said, “Now, I have to go. I have to do some work.”

Lovely baked to her way and give last advised to Lily, “Look, You are never lonely because life with their… well Bye-Bye and Take-care.”

Lily replied, “O.k., You too!”

Lily thought, “How was I full? I thought I am lonely and all this happened with me is bad and so on… but I was so wrong all this happened for good and I am not lonely because Life with me…”

Suddenly Lily’s phone rung! Called from her mother,

Lily said with greeted, “HELLO! Mother!”

Her Mother said, “Today you live alone at home because me and your father will go for diner you’ll must stay at home by your safe, Honey don’t feel lonely!”

Lily Smiled and replied, “Don’t worry Mother I’m not lonely even I’m lonely because Life with me…”

Her Mother socked by listen Lily’s answered.

Lily cut her mother’s call and stood up and spread her arm and spoke out loud:

“Aye life listen I am not lonely and never be sad again because you are with me and when I felt sad you felt so you do such a lovely thing for me so now my chance to give some relief and give you some happy moment which we spent together.”

Lily banded her both hand and took to the heart and said,

“THANK-YOU, Thank-you so much! Life. Now I am not lonely!”

September 18, 2020 16:24

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P. Jean
18:21 Sep 19, 2020

Sweet story to learn from about the important things!

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16:13 Sep 21, 2020

Thank-You

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