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Speculative Crime

He buried her in the forest before the leaves of the quaking aspen turned golden. No one noticed the tamped down soil, or the way the wild grasses died back all around her, or even the circle of whimsy brown mushrooms that erupted soon after.

And when autumn came, and the leaves changed, the trembling giant whose roots she fed turned scarlet instead.

“I am here,” she called. “Please find me!”

But, after the first frost, the leaves turned rusty, and were then indistinguishable from the rest.

No one noticed her, buried in the forest beneath the quaking aspen.

Snow falls, blanketing her in a cold white solitude with only her thoughts for company, and she wonders…

Does her family know she isn’t coming home?

Or do they maybe think she’s just run away from it all? Does anyone suspect foul play? Or has he once again convinced everyone of his harmless temper?

“We argued, but I loved her. I never would have done anything to hurt her.”

Then why did she (the other woman) drive her car—in neutral—into the lake?

She wonders what he’ll say about her.

“We argued, but I loved her. She said she would leave me a hundred times, and I guess she finally did.”

She wonders if anyone ever found the unused airplane tickets in the back of her underwear drawer, rolled up in a sock with the wad of twenties she’d been collecting for months? Did he find them? Is that why…?

Is that why she’s rotting away in the earth now?

Spring arrives and the bugs return, but she only has so much of herself left to give them. The grass grows back, greener than before, and the roots of the quaking aspen snake through her ribs.

He returns—and steps on her grave.

Just with one foot, at first. She thinks he’s testing the ground, or checking for bones sticking out of the soil; when he doesn’t fall through, he stands on her grave fully. The pressure on her chest is unbearable, but he already broke her heart once.

When he breaks her ribs, she feels nothing.

He steps off quickly, sheepishly, and reaches forward. He grabs a branch from the tree he buried her under and snaps it off with a quick tug.

Is that how she died? She remembers his hands on her neck and then nothing else.

It was so quick.

They argued. She told him she didn’t love who he was anymore, but she never got the chance to leave, like she’d planned to for months.

He walks away with his souvenir and she doesn’t see him again for a long time.

A million thoughts fill her up, and she wonders if she’ll ever have peace from them. They never ceased while she was alive, in her waking hours or otherwise, and now they continue even as her body returns to the earth. Restful oblivion does not come to her and she wonders… if not in death, then when?

Did Niki worry when she didn’t show up? Or did they just assume she never meant to arrive in the first place? Are they angry she broke her promise? What about her cat? Did they keep Mr. Jenkins? Is he healthy and happy with Niki?

And, more than anything, she worries no one knew her thoughts in those final months, because he stole her from her family and friends—stole her from herself, even.

She’d said so many awful things to so many people, and all they’d ever wanted was for her to be happy and safe. But she never listened—was too proud to admit she’d been wrong until it was too late.

She almost doesn’t recognize who she was in those final months anymore.

(Why does she even care? She’s not —— anymore.)

She begins growing out of her broken body the following year, and feels for the first time in a long time the gentle rays of sunlight beating down on her through the budding leaves of the surrounding quaking aspen trees.

However, almost before she can appreciate the new sensations that come with being a sprouting aspen tree, a browsing deer strips her of her leaves—and then a hare finishes her off.

But that’s fine. Her roots remain, and she continues pulling water and other nutrients from the ground for the giants she shares herself with.

They don’t speak, but she feels their sympathy as they wordlessly console her, and offer her their full support when spring arrives again.

She grows quickly with their tender support, and when the browsing deer returns, she has more than enough of herself to give.

When they see him again, they almost don’t recognize him.

He’s older, grayer. Feebler. He walks with a cane now and uses it to push around the mulchy layers of decaying leaves. The top layer of soil has grown sugary over the years and he has to hold on to branches as he steps up the incline, or risk slipping.

But he is himself still, and they could never forget his eyes. Warm like honey; hard like amber; and, sometimes, colder than moonlight. Wrinkles (and time) have softened his piercing gaze, but they still feel it as he looks about. There’s an unmistakable hint of sharpness—like raw edges on smooth river stones.

He does not recognize them.

They have grown up strong and tall since he saw them last, and the animal path he followed all those years ago has meandered ever so slightly off track. He is not lost, but neither can he find his destination.

He looks up, straining his neck, searching for the tree with the cracked-off branch—searching for the piece of them he broke. He turns around three full times, facing north after each spin.

Still, he does not find what he’s looking for.

Forgiveness. Closure. Maybe the tree he buried them beneath, which no longer stands.

It blew over some years ago, when the summer storms came. The uprooted stump is just to his right, but he does not make the connection, because the thick trunk was hauled away for campfire fuel the same year it fell.

He leans against his cane, silently stewing over his dilemma. He’s never had much patience for anything, really.

The wind rattles through their bare branches and a chill creeps through him. He shivers, hunching his shoulders against the stiff wind, and lifts his cane. He turns right, shuffling through the frost laden leaves, and unknowingly walks over their grave.

He stumbles over the exposed roots still attached to the rotting stump and falls—hard.

He lays there for a long moment, winded from his rough landing. When he recovers enough to move, his shifting is accompanied by a low groan.

He does not stand up—cannot stand up—and rolls onto his stomach, searching for his cane in the leaves. He does not find it; it flew quite far when he fell.

A crow caws overhead and he curses while struggling to push himself up onto his knees. One hand sinks into the frosty leaves, and closes around something smooth and roughly the same diameter as his cane.

He pulls on it, yanking it out of the ground after a couple of firm tugs. He’s not as strong as he once was.

A brown stained bone comes up, and he stares at it before flinging it away from himself with a startled cry.

He finally calls for help, having accepted that he’s too injured to escape the forest of quaking aspen on his own.

“Help!” he screams. “Please, someone!”

But no one hears him and each shout is more desperate than the last, until he’s screaming himself hoarse, sobbing between breaths.

“If a tree falls in a forest and no one is around to hear it, does it make a sound?”

The answer has never been more obvious to them than it is now.

No one noticed him, fallen in the forest beneath the quaking aspen.

November 06, 2021 02:28

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17:24 Apr 04, 2022

This story was beautifully written. The description was vivid and it felt like i was actually the story....while it was happening. Lovely, I can't wait to see what else you've written. Keep up the good work! Take my like.


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Amantle Moile
20:51 Mar 19, 2022

lovely story even if i read a bit late ,you are such an encouragement for some of us to continue writing stories .Truely an impressive work you have done


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Kayla Keiser
17:20 Mar 18, 2022

A Hit and run By. Kayla Keiser Heather was going to the store on foot. She saw a hit and run. She ran to find out if this lady in her car was ok. Her name was Sharen. Sharen told Heather how her arms are stift and can't move her arms and needs Heather to call the ambulance. Heather dialed 911 on her phone and held the phone to her ear. Sharen managed to tell the operator how she was heading to work and doesn't know who this guy was who hit her. No way of giving the driver's plate number or anything. The operator did start asking where she's...


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Shane Sardeson
22:24 Mar 14, 2022

I absolutely loved this story.


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17:25 Mar 14, 2022

Excellent story


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Kookie Boo
07:48 Mar 08, 2022

" Write about a character, animal or human, who is reborn as something totally different." I wonder what she was reborn as after- because I got a bit lost while reading the story but over all it is soo interesting and I love love LOVE it


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Aisha Mohd
06:29 Feb 25, 2022

this story is so good keep going <3


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Pp Balls
15:50 Feb 11, 2022

this story was so good i nutted myself


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Kathy Olson
16:20 Jan 26, 2022

Beautiful justice. This reminded me of The Corpse Bride. In the darkest depths of the story, this line chilled me - “Restful oblivion does not come to her and she wonders… if not in death, then when?” Congratulations on your win. I am new here and reading the winning stories to get the flavor of this place. So much talent here. What an amazing find. Masterful piece, Miya. Again, congratulations.


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Emily Johnston
23:13 Jan 23, 2022

This is amazing! I'm so happy I stumbled upon it. You are extremely talented. I look forward to reading more of your work!


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Alice Stannard
17:31 Jan 22, 2022

I LOVED this! Your descriptions were vivid, and I loved the gentle flow of her metamorphosis into a tree. Terrific writing. "Warm like honey; hard like amber; and, sometimes, colder than moonlight.–– just one of many descriptions that I loved.


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Matthew Wilson
23:21 Jan 21, 2022

This story sucked me in from the beginning and held me tight the whole way through!


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21:07 Jan 17, 2022

A really well written piece, it emotes so much pain and then acceptance. She is part of the earth, a real mother nature in this case. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on the win!


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Live To Write
12:49 Jan 17, 2022

Amazing Story. I loved it i appreciate your work👏👏👏👏


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Mike Davies
13:38 Jan 14, 2022

Simply beautiful.


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Goddess V
04:06 Jan 13, 2022

Wonderfully written.


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Eddi Prak
23:32 Jan 08, 2022

So whats the theme of this story?


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Rajiv Iyer
07:31 Dec 30, 2021

This was a stunning piece. The decomposing body providing nutrition to the trees, personified with thoughts. Quite a unique narrative. And the bone-chilling ending. Everything was terrific. At a meta-level, it makes me wonder if the writer has had experience burying bodies, and contemplating with a sense of guilt about what the dead would be thinking :P ... maybe that's the final twist: the entire story is about a writer writing a story out of guilt, to honor their victim :P ... (this is just a joke) In all seriousness, well done. Keep wri...


Myia Melendy
19:43 Dec 30, 2021

Thanks for reading! I pity the person who goes searching through my browsing history XD I swear I'm not homicidal--I'm just a simple writer... ;)


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Amna Abbas
13:16 Dec 13, 2021

This is beautifully written. A late congrats!


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Ivan Cardoso
18:05 Dec 09, 2021

Brilliantly done!


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