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Inspirational Fiction

The mountain inside of her was a formidable challenge. It was made up of her fears, doubts, and insecurities. But she was determined to reach the summit, to conquer the demons that plagued her mind.

She was a young woman, her spirit tested by the trials of life. Growing up in a small town, she always felt like she didn’t fit in. She was different, and the people around her made her feel like an outsider. Her parents were loving but overprotective, and their expectations of her were always high. She had dreams of leaving her small town behind and seeing the world, but she never had the courage to take the first step.

She set out on her journey, her heart heavy with the weight of her emotions. She trudged through the darkness of her mind, her steps uncertain. She climbed higher and higher, the mountain becoming steeper and more treacherous with each passing moment.

As she climbed, she felt the weight of her past bearing down on her, the voices of self-doubt whispering in her ear. She remembered the time when she was bullied in school, the time when she was rejected from her dream college, the time when she broke up with her first love. The memories flooded her mind, and she felt like giving up.

But she pushed on, knowing that the summit was just within reach. She realized that she had to face her fears and doubts, and learn from her past experiences. She had to accept that she was different and that it was okay. She had to let go of the expectations of others and follow her own path.

Finally, after hours of climbing, she reached the top. She stood at the summit, looking out at the breathtaking view of her own mind. She had done it, she had conquered the mountain.

As she looked out at the world inside of her, she felt a sense of accomplishment and pride wash over her. She had faced her inner demons and emerged victorious. She knew that she would always remember this climb and the feeling of standing at the top of her own mind.

From that day on, she was determined to live her life on her own terms. She applied to a college in a different state and got accepted. She traveled around the world, met new people and experienced new cultures. She became a successful writer, and her books were read by people all over the world.

Later, as she looked back at her life, she realized that the climb of the internal mountain was the most challenging, but also the most rewarding journey of her life. She had learned that the most important thing in life is to be true to oneself, and to never give up on the journey of self-discovery.

But as she continued to climb, she realized that she was not alone on her journey. She had a companion by her side, a loyal companion who had been with her through thick and thin. A scruffy little dog that she had rescued from the streets. It had been her constant companion, her confidant and her protector.

The dog was her rock, her anchor, her guide. It would wag his tail, lick her face and cuddle up to her when she felt down, and it would bark and growl when she felt threatened. It was her companion, her best friend, her loyal companion.

As she climbed higher and higher, the dog would lead her through the treacherous paths, and he would always be there to catch her when she fell. It was her protector, her guide, her companion.

As she continued to live her life on her own terms, she met a kind and loving man who became her husband. True love is a rare and beautiful thing. It is the kind of love that can only be found once in a lifetime, if at all. It is the kind of love that transcends all boundaries and defies all odds. It is the kind of love that makes you feel like you are on top of the world, and nothing else matters. Love is like a rose, beautiful and fragile, yet strong enough to withstand the test of time. Together, they built a beautiful life, and they had two wonderful children. Her husband supported her in all her endeavors and encouraged her to continue pursuing her dreams and passions.

She continued to write and her books were even more successful, and her husband helped her to take care of her family and her career. Her children were her source of inspiration and joy. They would always remind her of the importance of family and the love that they shared.

She never forgot the journey of climbing her internal mountain and the lessons she learned, and she always made sure to instill those lessons in her children. She would tell them the story of her climb, and how her companion, her dog, helped her to reach the summit and to find her true self.


Years later, as an old woman, sitting on her porch with her husband and her dog she realized that she had lived a long and fulfilling life, and had passed on her wisdom to many who sought her guidance. Her eyes twinkled as she thought about the many lives she had touched, and the countless stories she had heard.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, the old wise lady closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She knew that her time on this earth was coming to an end, but she was not afraid. She had lived a good life and had no regrets.

In her final moments, she thought about the advice she had given to so many over the years. She had always told them to live in the present, to cherish every moment and to never take anything for granted. She had told them to be kind, to be compassionate and to always strive to be the best version of themselves.

With a smile on her face, the old wise lady passed away, her spirit soaring up to the heavens. Her body may have been gone, but her legacy lived on in the hearts of all those she had touched. Her wisdom was passed down through generations and her spirit will always be remembered as a guiding light for many.

The people who knew her well, said that the old lady’s spirit was still climbing the mountain, and they could see her smile from the top of the mountain at sunset. She left behind a legacy of wisdom and inspiration, and her memory will live on forever in the hearts of those who knew her.



The end.


January 20, 2023 22:09

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Wendy Kaminski
03:07 Jan 27, 2023

Just a lovely story, Petar - very hopeful and inspiring, seeing the lessons she learned in her climb play out throughout the course of her life. I enjoyed this, and welcome to Reedsy!

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Petar Hubavenski
18:45 Feb 15, 2023

Thank you so much.

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