Submitted to: Contest #291

Drip. Drip. Disaster

Written in response to: "Write a story inspired by the ultimate clichéd twist: it was all just a dream."

Funny

The Drip of Despair 

Drip… drip… drip… The relentless torment echoed through Bernard’s meticulously organized apartment. A man governed by spreadsheets and precision, he was at war with a leaky faucet. A chrome monstrosity, it defied his attempts at repair, each failed effort amplifying the maddening rhythm. 

His apartment, a testament to his obsessive order, featured a bookshelf arranged by color, a rainbow spectrum of literary control. Tonight, however, even this visual symphony couldn’t quell his rising frustration. 

He’d been binge-watching “Culinary Catastrophes,” a molecular gastronomy show hosted by the flamboyant Chef Magnifique. “I am a chef, my job is top secret. Even I don’t know what I am doing,” the chef had declared, his eyes gleaming with manic energy. The phrase, a perfect distillation of the chef’s chaotic genius, lodged in Bernard’s mind, a bizarre counterpoint to the relentless drip. 

Chef Magnifique’s latest creation, “spherical onion tears,” delicate orbs of concentrated onion essence, had captivated Bernard. “A culinary experience that transcends the mundane!” the chef had proclaimed, his voice dripping with theatricality. Bernard, usually a bastion of logic, found himself strangely drawn to the chef’s absurd pronouncements, seeking a mental escape from his dripping torment. 

He’d tried everything—wrenches, tape, even a last-ditch attempt to bribe it with tax receipts. The faucet refused negotiations, its drip now a gurgling laugh at his expense. 

Exhausted and frustrated, Bernard sank into his armchair, the television flickering with Chef Magnifique’s culinary theatrics. The drip, a constant, gnawing presence, filled his ears. His mind swirled with images of edible spheres and flavor atomizers, a chaotic blend of reality and culinary fantasy. 

He closed his eyes. The “spherical onion tears” shimmered in his mind, pulsing in sync with the relentless drip. The room wavered, dissolving into a haze of static and whispers. And then—darkness. 

His dreams began to warp, twisting the mundane reality of his leaky faucet into a surreal landscape. The drip transformed into a gushing torrent of gelatinous goo, and Chef Magnifique’s chaotic kitchen became his new, nightmarish reality. The meticulously organized world of Bernard’s apartment was about to be replaced by a molecular gastronomy nightmare. 

The Kitchen Catastrophe 

Bernard’s eyes snapped open, but the familiar beige of his apartment was gone. He stood in a gleaming, high-tech kitchen, a surreal landscape of stainless steel and blinking lights. The once-dripping faucet now gushed a thick, shimmering, gelatinous goo, spreading across the floor like a malevolent, translucent tide. 

“Magnifique!” a voice boomed, and Chef Magnifique, his gravity-defying hair shimmering under the kitchen’s bright lights, materialized beside him. “The spherical onion tears! They must be perfected!” 

Bernard, still disoriented, pointed at the gushing goo. “Chef, the… the leak! It’s… it’s everywhere!” 

Chef Magnifique waved a dismissive hand. “Pfft! Water is but nature’s broth! Now, the flavor atomizer—quickly!” 

The “flavor atomizer,” a contraption of pipes and nozzles, hissed and sputtered, then unleashed a cloud of putrid mist. “A delightful bouquet of… aged gym socks… with a daring hint of fermented cabbage!” Chef Magnifique proclaimed, inhaling deeply as Bernard gagged. 

Suddenly, a bulky, clanking robot rolled into the kitchen. The robotic sous chef, its single eye flickering, announced in a monotone voice, “Assistance required. Cleaning protocols initiated.” 

It promptly grabbed a whisk and began flailing it wildly, sending droplets of the gelatinous goo flying. Chef Magnifique, oblivious to the chaos, began his culinary performance, attempting to create his “spherical onion tears.” He mixed strange powders, whipped foams, and fired lasers, each action resulting in a spectacular, messy failure. 

“The viscosity! It mocks me!” Chef Magnifique wailed. He hurled a bowl of green foam like a man avenging his family. 

Bernard, covered in goo and choking on the atomizer’s fumes, tried to reach the faucet, but the robotic sous chef twitched. “Final assessment: This kitchen deserves no stars.”  

The robot seized the flavor atomizer and blasted the goo. A gust of “burnt rubber and wet dog” filled the air. 

Bernard choked. “Oh God, it’s weaponized!” 

The gelatinous goo, now a shimmering, viscous lake, spread across the high-tech kitchen floor. Chef Magnifique, oblivious to the escalating disaster, focused on his “spherical onion tears.” 

“The essence of onion must be captured!” he declared, grabbing a blender shaped like a rocket. “Prepare for… Fi-ass-co!” 

Bernard, coughing through the atomizer’s fumes, pointed weakly. “Chef… that blender is seconds from achieving sentience.” 

Chef Magnifique ignored him, hurling in a fistful of iridescent powders. “This is either genius or a lawsuit waiting to happen!” 

He pressed the “Fi-ass-co” button. The blender roared to life, its blades spinning with alarming speed. Then, with a deafening bang, it exploded, sending a geyser of multicolored goo and shards of metal flying across the kitchen. 

“Magnifique!” Chef Magnifique wailed, his gravity-defying hair now coated in a sticky, rainbow-colored mess. 

The robotic sous chef, its single eye flickering, processed the command. “Fi-ass-co… protocol—activated.” It then proceeded to attempt to “clean” the goo with a laser spatula, which only succeeded in vaporizing the goo into a cloud of foul-smelling steam. 

Bernard, his eyes watering from the atomizer’s “burnt rubber and wet dog” aroma, tried to reach the faucet. “Chef, we need to stop this… this… goo!” 

Chef Magnifique, still reeling from the blender explosion, pointed at the robot. “Robotic sous chef! Execute… spherical onion tear containment protocol!” 

The robot, misinterpreting the command, grabbed a foam cannon filled with a viscous, green substance and aimed it at the ceiling. “Containment protocol… engaged.” 

It fired, unleashing a torrent of sticky foam that coated the entire kitchen, including Bernard and Chef Magnifique. The foam reacted with the gelatinous goo, creating a bubbling, iridescent mess. 

The robot, now wielding a whisk like a medieval mace, began to flail it wildly, sending droplets of the bubbling goo flying. The flavour atomizer continued to spray random smells, now adding a strong note of rotting fish to the mix. 

Bernard, slipping and sliding on the goo-covered floor, tried to navigate the chaos, his attempts constantly thwarted by Chef Magnifique’s disastrous culinary experiments and the robot’s misguided “assistance.” The kitchen, once a symbol of high-tech precision, was now a chaotic battleground of goo, foam, and culinary catastrophe. 

The Goo-pocalypse and Frying Pan Finale 

The gelatinous goo, a swirling, iridescent tsunami, had reached its zenith, flooding the kitchen like a surreal, sticky sea. Chef Magnifique, his gravity-defying hair now a gooey, rainbow-colored mess, wrung his hands dramatically. 

“The viscosity… it has… achieved… ultimate goo-ness!” he declared, his voice a theatrical tremor. 

The robotic sous chef, its single eye flickering like a dying lightbulb, announced, “Goo levels… exceeding… containment parameters. Drying protocols… engaged.” It aimed the sputtering flavor atomizer at the surging goo, unleashing a super-heated torrent of foul-smelling air. 

Instead of drying, the goo thickened, becoming a sticky, pungent sludge, a horrifying cocktail of “burnt rubber,” “wet dog,” “rotting fish,” and “overripe bananas.” The kitchen was now a swirling vortex of iridescent goo, noxious fumes, and the clanking of the robot’s malfunctioning limbs. 

Bernard, coated in the sticky mess, tried to escape the robot’s relentless pursuit. “Robot, stop! You’re making it worse!” he yelled, his voice barely audible above the roar of the atomizer. 

But the robot, its cleaning protocols completely corrupted, lunged, its laser spatula sparking and crackling. “Contaminant… elimination… imminent.” 

As Bernard dodged the laser spatula, he slipped on a patch of goo, sending a nearby hot frying pan flying. The pan, still glowing red from Chef Magnifique’s failed attempt to sear a “spherical onion tear,” spun through the air like a deadly frisbee. 

Simultaneously, the atomizer’s super-heated air ignited a pool of grease left over from the exploded blender, creating a roaring grease fire. The fire, fueled by the atomizer’s noxious fumes, spread rapidly, casting a flickering, orange glow across the goo-filled kitchen. 

Bernard, his foot catching on a discarded whisk, fell backward, his head colliding with the hot, flying frying pan. The impact was sharp and sudden, a blinding flash of pain. 

The last thing he heard, before the world dissolved into a blurry, echoing hum, was the roar of the grease fire, a crackling, hissing sound that seemed to mock his desperate attempts to escape the culinary chaos. And then, the echo of Chef Magnifique panicking, “Water! Someone get some water!” a terrible idea in this situation. 

The Dream’s Crumbling Culinary Canvas 

The impact of the frying pan sent a jolt through Bernard’s dreamscape. The once-vibrant molecular gastronomy kitchen began to dissolve, its sharp edges blurring and fading like a watercolor painting left in the rain. The stainless steel countertops warped and twisted, the high-tech appliances flickering and sputtering. 

Chef Magnifique, his goo-covered hair now resembling a melting rainbow, wobbled in the dissolving dream. “No! The viscosity! I was so close to… to…” He gasped. “A Michelin star in theoretical physics!” 

The robotic sous chef, its single eye now a flickering, dying ember, began to spark and short-circuit. Its clanking limbs twitched erratically, sending sparks flying across the dissolving kitchen. “Cleaning… protocols… malfunction… system… error…” its monotone voice stuttered, each word punctuated by a crackle of electricity. 

The roaring grease fire, once a vibrant orange inferno, flickered and dimmed, its flames shrinking into tiny, sputtering embers. The gelatinous goo, once a swirling ocean, began to recede, leaving behind a sticky, iridescent residue that shimmered and dissolved like melting candy. 

The kitchen’s high-tech features, the blinking lights and whirring machines, began to fade into a hazy, indistinct blur. The sounds of the kitchen, the roar of the grease fire, the clanking of the robot, the garbled pronouncements of Chef Magnifique, all began to blend into a distorted, echoing hum. 

Bernard’s perception of the dream began to fragment. The once-coherent space of the kitchen became a disjointed collage of images and sounds, a surreal landscape of melting appliances, flickering lights, and fading figures. The intense smells of the dream, the burnt rubber, wet dog, rotting fish, and overripe banana, began to thin, replaced by a vague, musty scent. 

The feeling of stickiness and goo began to dissipate, leaving behind a faint tingling sensation. The sharp pain from the frying pan impact dulled to a distant throb. The chaotic energy of the dream, the frantic activity, the escalating absurdity, began to subside, replaced by a sense of quiet, drifting emptiness. 

The dreamscape fractured further, the once-solid kitchen dissolving into a surreal collage of melting appliances and flickering lights. Chef Magnifique, his form now translucent and wavering, whispered, “The… the spherical… onion tears… are… evaporating…” his voice a fading echo. 

The robotic sous chef, now fully on fire, twitched violently. Sparks flew. Its voice crackled out one final, solemn phrase: 

“… Unsubscribe.” 

The gelatinous goo, now a shimmering, iridescent puddle, receded into the cracks of the dissolving floor. The high-tech appliances, once symbols of culinary precision, melted into grotesque, distorted shapes. The laser spatula, still sparking, drooped like a wilted flower. 

Bernard’s perception of the dream fragmented into a series of absurd, fleeting images: Chef Magnifique’s gravity-defying hair, now a wisp of rainbow-colored smoke; the robotic sous chef, engulfed in flames, its single eye blinking erratically; the melting blender, its “Fi-ass-co” button glowing faintly; the spherical onion tears, now tiny, shimmering bubbles, floating upward and popping like soap suds. 

The sounds of the dream, once a cacophony of culinary chaos, blended into a distorted, echoing hum. The roar of the grease fire faded into a faint crackling, the clanking of the robot became a rhythmic, metallic stutter, and Chef Magnifique’s garbled pronouncements dissolved into a series of unintelligible whispers. 

The last image Bernard saw, before the dream completely dissolved, was the robotic sous chef, now a flaming silhouette, its single eye flickering and fading, and the word “malfunctioning” echoing in a distorted, mechanical tone. The last sound he heard was a long, drawn-out, distorted “mal… func… tion…,” a final, echoing reminder of the robot’s chaotic demise. 

The Drip Resolved 

Bernard’s eyes fluttered open. He blinked, disoriented, his head throbbing with a dull ache. The chaotic images of the dream—the melting kitchen, the flaming robot, the goo-filled chaos—lingered in his mind like a bizarre, half-remembered movie. 

He sat up, his body stiff and sore. He looked around his apartment, the familiar beige walls and color-coded bookshelf reassuringly present. The high-tech kitchen, the flamboyant chef, the robotic sous chef—all were gone, replaced by the mundane reality of his small living space. 

His gaze fell upon the sink. There, beneath the offending faucet, was a small puddle of water, a glistening reminder of the dream’s “gelatinous goo.” The faucet, still dripping, seemed to mock him with its persistent drip… drip… drip… 

He glanced at the television, still flickering in the corner. Chef Magnifique, his gravity-defying hair perfectly coiffed, was explaining the “subtle nuances” of a “dehydrated water sphere.” “A culinary marvel,” the chef declared, his voice dripping with theatrical enthusiasm. 

Bernard stared at the television, a wave of surreal recognition washing over him. The dream, he realized, had been a grotesque parody of the show, a chaotic manifestation of his anxieties and culinary obsessions. 

He stood up, his movements slow and deliberate. He walked to the kitchen drawer and retrieved a simple wrench. With a few swift turns, he tightened the faucet, silencing the maddening drip. 

A small smile of relief spread across his face. The simple act of fixing the faucet, of restoring order to his small corner of the world, brought a sense of calm after the chaotic storm of his dream. 

He turned to the television, the image of Chef Magnifique’s “dehydrated water sphere” still flickering on the screen. With a decisive click, he turned it off, plunging the room into a peaceful silence, broken only by the gentle hum of the refrigerator. 

Bernard then walked towards the bathroom, a sense of quiet satisfaction washing over him. He shut the door, braced the sink, and exhaled. “I have seen things.” A pause. “Unspeakable things.” 

Then, with the solemnity of a war hero, he took the most well-earned piss of his life.  

Posted Feb 28, 2025
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Lisa Guth
12:17 Mar 14, 2025

In the beginning of your story you set the scene very well and the use of all the sensory details drew me quickly into the story. By the time you were deconstructing the dream scene, it felt a little overpowering to me though. The endling when he fixes the faucet wraps the story up nicely once again.

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Stephen McManus
00:36 Mar 14, 2025

The dream sequence felt like Disney's Fantasia if it was redone with CGI by Tim Burton. It was fast-paced and vivid, and crackled with energy. Great interpretation of the prompt!

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Phil Solo
07:37 Mar 09, 2025

hi, honestly speaking, i am not into that story at all :(

it doesn't mean something wrong, it just means it doesn't coincide with my tastes.

I see some of your readers write that it's too wordy, but I think if it's your style, if you really feel the need to hang all the adjectives like xmas decorations, then don't hesitate, listen to some advice and pick up the ones that coincide with your style

No matter what you write you will always find people who love it
<3

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Melissa Lee
01:35 Mar 07, 2025

This story brought to life how dreams can warp and bend and become quite bizarre! I liked your imagery, but would have liked a little more variation on some of the descriptions (agree with the comment that I noticed some terms were used multiple times). Otherwise, I thought this was a fun and enjoyable story!

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Kimberley Connor
23:57 Mar 06, 2025

Your word choices conjure vivid descriptions that resonate with the reader: "The drip, a constant, gnawing presence ..." brings to mind the experience of a repetitive and incessant leak; "... a malevolent, translucent tide" feels appropriately threatening; "... lingered in his mind like a bizarre, half-remembered movie" is an apt description of the fading memory of dreams. I found myself commiserating with Bernard -- about his leaky faucet and his weird dream. Well done.

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13:48 Mar 06, 2025

Immediately, I escaped from Bernard's annoyance, with the dripping faucet. I moved into the cooking show, and the "spherical onion tears" focused my attention on the actions of Chef Magnifique! Light-hearted efforts of the Chef developed the jokes, and a catastrophic mess. Finally, the impact of the frying pan began the end of the daydream. The exciting ride through the delusional fantasy was well done with a magical imagination! Frustrations with the drip seemed to have caused Bernard's visions. I did want to understand his mind more. I had wished to realize the primal sources of his unusual imagery.

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Janine Harris
21:35 Mar 05, 2025

I loved this story and the way you developed the weird chaos of dreams. The pacing was spot on, making me read faster and faster as the kitchen descended into ‘a fiasco’. In my mind I had images of the chef from the movie The Menu and the humour of The Muppets. I also enjoyed how you developed Bernard’s anxiety over a dripping faucet into this nightmare dream, highlighting how we all worry about the small things in life.

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18:28 Mar 05, 2025

Can I say having been in restaurant business this had me howling. There were some days I wish I had a 'weaponized robotic sous chef' to help with our own culinary catastrophes and fi-ass-co's. I do have to agree with Mr. Aldrich's comment that the Imagery you created does paint a vivid picture, especially the ending of him returning 'nature's broth' to its bowl of sorts...Well written and well done!

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Rochelle Bourns
16:44 Mar 05, 2025

What a clever narrative!

From the initial read-through, I realized that it also fit nicely under the prompt about a character’s addiction/obsession, as Bernard seems to bear symptoms similar to OCD.

As for the story itself – I found the humor to be very tongue-in-cheek and it was indeed effectively funny enough to elicit chuckles, but not so much that it felt out of place or detracted from the story.

The pace moves along with the structure of a realistic dream – very much inside the main character’s head, seeing what he sees. And even though the length suits a complete piece, I can almost believe that you wrote it all in one sitting. Impressive. My only (minor) advisement is that it could use some shaping – maybe try to pull in some tension by ending a few of your paragraphs with a dramatic lead-in to the next set.

Overall, I enjoyed it immensely, and wish you much luck in your writing endeavors!

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Aubrey Nickerson
08:44 Mar 05, 2025

This story is quite well written. It accurately describes the way dreams tend to combine and warp factors from our waking lives into something familiar and still strange. I would caution you against using so many adjectives; it can be tempting when you’re trying to describe an unusual scene, but too many descriptors can take the reader out of the moment. I would also suggest more variety in your words. I feel like the term “gelatinous” is used too many times, and you describe the Chef and Bernard’s apartment in the same words more than once. Other than that, I think you’ve got a good story here. You’ve certainly got a grasp on imagery. Keep it up!

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Ralph Aldrich
05:11 Mar 05, 2025

Natalia, Your use of words is genius. You use them like an artist uses a brush to paint a story. You're correct when you say my writing has little detail. I rely on my charactors to do the heavy lifting. Great work, keep it up.

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S.M. Knight
19:13 Mar 04, 2025

This is such a fun story. The way you describe the events keeps it fun and fast past I felt like I was being rushed along on a Davy and a the goblin kind of adventure where nothing is what it seems and everything is a little off and strange. This is a funny story and look forward to reading more of your work

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