What the Bottle Remembers Part 1

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the line "Can you keep a secret?" or “My lips are sealed.""

Fantasy

The library always smelled faintly of dust and paper, as though the walls themselves were built from forgotten years. Lavanya loved it for that reason — timeless, safe, a place where secrets could settle into silence and never be disturbed.

That late afternoon, sunlight poured through tall windows, striping the tables in gold. Stillness lay heavy, broken only by the turning of pages and the faint creak of shelves that had borne their burdens for generations. Lavanya slipped into the farthest corner, clutching her backpack as though it carried more than books.

Drew noticed immediately. He always did.

His friendship was like that — an attunement so fine that even the softest tremor in her voice or the faintest shift in her shoulders never escaped him. Without hesitation, he rose and followed, each footstep a quiet echo of devotion. He never pressed until she was ready to speak; his presence itself was a promise.

When they sat, she placed the backpack on the table with disproportionate care, as if it contained glass dreams that might shatter at a touch. After a pause, her dark eyes flicking between him and the sunlight, she unzipped the bag just enough for him to glimpse it- a small bottle, glass shimmering faintly.

Inside, a liquid moved as though stirred by invisible winds, green and luminous, a captive storm folding endlessly in on itself.

Drew leaned closer, voice dropping into reverence. “Lavanya… what is that?”

She pressed a finger to her lips. “Can you keep a secret?”

The words gleamed between them, fragile as glass. Drew’s pulse quickened, but he nodded without hesitation. “Of course.”

Her shoulders eased. “They were going to discard it. A failed experiment, they said. But when I saw it… I couldn’t just let it go. It felt alive somehow. As though it had been waiting.”

She closed the bag, but the air still hummed with her confession. Drew studied her, recognizing the loneliness she carried like armor, the way she forgot she was allowed to lean. Today, a crack had formed.

“You don’t have to do this alone,” he said softly. “If you trust me, let me carry part of it.”

Her eyes lifted, hesitant, then softened.

“So you won’t tell?”

He covered her hand with his, warm and steady. “My lips are sealed.”

The library grew quieter still, as though even the dust motes and clock deferred to their vow. They weren’t just keeping a secret now — they were holding each other’s trust, the kind that endures long after storms in glass have faded.

That evening, as they left together, Drew noticed the bag glow faintly, a green pulse flickering beneath the fabric when shadows touched it. Once, he thought he heard a whisper, like distant leaves in wind. He glanced at Lavanya, but she walked calm and steady, unaware.

In the nights that followed, she would text him late — had he felt odd shifts in the air, sudden warmth, dreams pulsing with color?

He admitted he had. The bottle was no trinket; it was weaving itself into their lives.

Yet instead of fear, there was wonder. The library corner became their sanctuary, a place of discovery. Drew sketched the patterns glimpsed in the swirling green; Lavanya recorded the sensations in her journal. Their secret grew heavier, yes — but also luminous, something neither wanted to put down.

The nights stretched into weeks, and the bottle’s presence became impossible to ignore. At times it seemed to radiate warmth like a living thing; at others, it drew the cold so sharply that Lavanya’s hands trembled when she touched it. Drew began to sense moods in the liquid — restless surges when storms rolled over the city, a soft glow on quiet mornings, an almost mournful dimness when left untouched for too long.

One evening, as autumn pressed its chill against the windows, Lavanya confessed what had been haunting her. “It dreams,” she whispered. “I’ve seen it in my sleep. Places I’ve never been — ruins, forests, skies that burn green. And when I wake, it feels as though it remembers me.”

Drew leaned forward, elbows on the table, studying the flicker of her expression. “What if it’s not just an experiment? What if it’s a… vessel?”

Lavanya’s laugh was short, brittle. “A vessel for what?”

Before he could answer, the bottle shivered inside her bag. They both froze. The library was empty but for them, yet the air rippled as though someone had stepped through unseen. Dust lifted from the shelves in a thin spiral, catching the lamplight.

Drew’s hand found hers instinctively. “It’s listening.”

Her pulse hammered under his touch.

“Then we can’t keep it here anymore.”

They carried the bottle out of the library that night, wrapped in a wool scarf and tucked beneath Lavanya’s arm as though it were fragile as breath itself. The streets were quiet, the lamps haloed in mist, their footsteps sounding louder than they should have.

Drew kept glancing at the bag. “Do you feel that?” he asked.

Lavanya nodded. The hum wasn’t sound exactly, but vibration — a thrum beneath the skin, like standing too close to a vast engine.

Her breath fogged in the air though the night wasn’t cold.

When they reached her apartment, she set the bottle on the table. For a moment it was still. Then the green storm flared, and the glass cast shadows across the walls, twisting them into shapes neither of them wanted to name.

Drew reached out, then stopped short.

“Lavanya… it’s changing.”

She whispered, “It’s waking.”

The liquid inside no longer curled lazily; it surged upward, pressing against the cork as though trying to escape. The glass groaned.

Panic stabbed through Lavanya’s chest.

“It wasn’t like this before!”

Drew moved closer, his hand steady on her shoulder. “Then it’s responding to something. Maybe to us.”

The glow dimmed, softened, as if soothed by his voice. The swirling slowed to a steady pulse — almost like a heartbeat.

Lavanya exhaled, shakily. “It knows we’re here.”

Neither spoke for a long moment. Outside, a siren wailed in the distance, but the room itself felt sealed off, bound in green light and silence. Drew finally said what both of them feared to admit.

“If it’s alive… then someone’s going to come looking for it.”

Posted Aug 21, 2025
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Mary Bendickson
00:15 Aug 22, 2025

'glass dreams that might shatter at a touch' and other poetic phrases make your stories come alive. Is someone looking for them?

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Rebecca Lewis
15:00 Aug 22, 2025

I'm honestly not sure yet. I'm still working this one out. Just waiting on that one prompt that will inspire the rest.

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