Submitted to: Contest #294

The Quiet Presence

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who’s at a loss for words, or unable to speak."

Fantasy Mystery Sad

In a quiet village nestled between the hills and the bay, life had its rhythm, its routines. People liked the slow-paced days, the charm of the tree-lined streets, and the smell of fresh bread from the bakery on the corner. And then, one day, she arrived. 

No one knew her name, where she came from, or what she was. She just appeared, wandering into town one breezy afternoon, moving with a strange, jerky gait, like she wasn’t entirely sure of her own legs. 

The townsfolk didn’t recognize her face because, in truth, she had none. Instead, her head was a smooth, unbroken sphere of white plastic, utterly featureless. Her steps were hesitant, as if each one surprised her. She bumped into lampposts, staggered off curbs, and wandered into storefront windows, leaving soft smudges in her wake. 

It appears that the girl could not see nor hear. She did not speak. The people didn’t know how to react to her; she unsettled some, while others were curious, or even compassionate.  

Her body moved as if living, tucking at appropriate points in her movements, flexing at her shoulders, elbows, knees, and other joints. Her skin was as pale as her head, soft and smooth but not plastic. 

Children, with their boundless curiosity, gathered around her as she shuffled down the sidewalks, sometimes poking at her strange plastic head with sticks, giggling as she stumbled. She never reacted, simply continued her journey through town as if driven by some invisible compass. 

At first, most people ignored her, or regarded her as an oddity. But over time, they noticed things—small things that made her seem more than just an odd fixture. She never ate, never drank, and never slept, as far as anyone could tell. 

Days passed, and still she wandered, always on foot, making loops around the town, returning to the same places as if remembering something long forgotten. She never grew tired, never faltered, only moved with that eerie, stumbling rhythm. 

Some were annoyed, shouting at her to get out of the way or move aside. But she never acknowledged them, never wavered, as if oblivious to their voices. Others were kinder, pulling her out of the path of oncoming cars, saving her from falling off the harbor dock, or steering her away from snarling dogs.  

On more than one occasion, someone took pity on her, leading her to a bench in the park, hoping she might find rest, though it was never clear if she understood. The bench became her home, a place she returned to every day to sit quietly, unmoving, unaware, timeless. 

One day, a little girl saw the plastic-headed girl standing in front of the bookstore, tilting her featureless head as if sensing the aroma of new books but unable to place them. The child walked up to her, slipped her small hand into the girl’s soft fingers, and stood silently with her. 

For the first time, people saw her take pause, her head inclining as though to sense another’s presence. Her fingers twitched as if to acknowledge the child’s gesture. 

An artist came to paint a picture of the girl. She stood still as the sun climbed in the sky. He perfectly captured the reflections off her featureless plastic face and the sharp edges of the shadow she cast on the tetherball court. 

When he began to clean his brushes, the girl stood in front of his artistry in an attitude of intense study. It was the first, and last, time she seemed to take notice of anything external. After several minutes of concentration, she nodded, as if giving her approval. 

Over time, the townsfolk grew used to her. They called her simply “the girl.” Like General Grant’s statue in the middle of the roundabout, she became a silent fixture in their lives. People stepped around her when she slowly walked up every street in the village. Was she exploring or simply lost? 

Rumors grew about her origin. Some said she was an android left behind by a forgotten project, or an alien scout sent to study human life. Others whispered she was a lost soul, cursed to wander until she found peace. 

But perhaps the strangest thing of all was how, in the midst of a bustling town, she became a kind of silent confidant. People found themselves drawn to her stillness, her constancy. They would sit beside her on a park bench and speak of their troubles, as if the Girl could somehow understand, and in her quiet, give them solace. 

One evening, the dressmaker found the girl staring into her display window. Picking up her tape, the dressmaker measured the girl’s silhouette, noting the size of her slight bust line, her shallow waist, her slim hips. Then the dressmaker picked out a pastel blue Bobby dress and fitted it around the girl. 

She didn’t resist or seem to notice, standing perfectly still with her arms away from her body. When she was clothed, she simply walked away. The girl never stopped at the dressmaker’s shop again and she never took the dress off, wearing it even as it wrinkled and started to wear out. 

When she paused in front of the donut shop, the kindly old baker offered her a sample of each. But she hung her head slightly and walked away, leaving people half believing she was melancholy about lacking any sense of smell or taste. 

Years passed, and the townsfolk began to notice other things about her too. Though she never changed in appearance, her stumbling gait softened, her movements more fluid, more natural. She no longer bumped into things as often, no longer stumbled. 

And sometimes, when the sunlight struck her just right, they thought they saw a faint, shimmering outline around her—a suggestion of features that might have once been a face. 

Then one evening, just as suddenly as she had arrived, the girl was gone. She left no trace, no footprint in the dust. The bench where she often sat felt emptier, and the children searched the town streets, hoping to glimpse her strange, white head moving through the shadows. But she had vanished, leaving only memories. 

In time, people moved on, as they always do. Yet every now and then, someone would find themselves on that bench, looking out at the setting sun, feeling as if they weren’t alone. And maybe, in that moment, the girl was there still, listening quietly in a way that only she could. 

Posted Mar 14, 2025
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Sandra Moody
23:23 Mar 23, 2025

Loved how people were just starting to reach out to her...but then she disappeared! Maybe we'll hear more in another story!?

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17:47 Mar 22, 2025

I like this! The girl feels creepy and zombie-like. I definitely felt intrigued to know more about her... but she wandered away but I had the chance!

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14:34 Mar 22, 2025

Definitely mysterious and sad. The details bring us closer to the girl, the generalizations about the town's responses and her/its lack of responses create vagueness and a sense of long duration. This is a quiet story, succeeding in sketching a sense of how AI works (random iteration) and in creating an atmosphere of sorrow about human identity. The reader is left wanting a bit more action, but it's not essential to the story.

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