Submitted to: Contest #303

Courtalise Thorn: The Villain of Another’s Tale

Written in response to: "Write about a character who becomes the villain in another character’s story."

Fantasy Fiction Inspirational

The court of Wonderland is a place where stories bloom and twist like wild roses—beautiful, unpredictable, and sometimes full of thorns. I, Courtalise Thorn, grew up beneath those tangled vines, part of a world that spoke in riddles and hid truths beneath painted smiles. I never asked to be a villain. Yet, in someone else’s story, that’s the role I was cast to play. The thorn that pricked, the shadow that darkened their light, the disruption no one dared admit they feared.

They say villains have no choice, that evil springs from desire or cruelty. But my story is more complicated, tangled with truths that others refused to hear, and a loneliness that shaped me far deeper than anyone expected.

I remember the first time I realized my reflection in Wonderland’s looking glass was fractured — shards of who I was scattered among the stories others told.

The Queen’s Court was glittering and cold, where everyone danced perfectly around the edges of rules as sharp as knives. I was different. Not because I wanted to be, but because I could not pretend to fit the delicate mold they demanded. My name itself whispered danger — Thorn — a reminder that I wasn’t meant to be soft or easily tamed.

From the beginning, I spoke too loudly, asked too many questions. Where others bowed their heads, I lifted mine. Where they spun tales to please the Queen, I sought the truth, even if it hurt to hear. The court needed perfection — a polished story with no cracks. But my cracks were visible in every glance I gave, every step I took.

“You are reckless, Courtalise,” they whispered behind fans and painted masks. “You disrupt the order. You don’t belong.”

And so, the story began — not mine, but theirs. I was the thorn in their garden, the villain in their play. It was a role I did not choose, but one I could not escape.

The trouble started on the day of the Queen’s grand feast, a celebration as dazzling as the twinkling stars above Wonderland’s sky. I entered the hall, heart pounding, hoping to prove I could be part of the court’s harmony.

Instead, I found myself at the center of a tempest.

It was the March Hare who first accused me, his voice sharp and accusing. “Courtalise Thorn stirs unrest! She questions the Queen’s will and twists the truth to suit her own whims.”

The crowd murmured, eyes darting between me and the Hare. The Queen’s gaze cut through the air like a blade, expectant and cold.

“I speak only what is true,” I said, voice steady though my heart raced. “There are cracks beneath this court’s surface, and ignoring them will only make the fall greater.”

They laughed — cruel and hollow — the kind of laughter that echoed long after the words faded. “Truth? In Wonderland? You are a fool to think you can challenge us.”

From that day, my name became a curse, spoken with fear and contempt. Courtalise Thorn — the wild card, the troublemaker, the villain who sought to unravel their perfect tales.

But villains don’t arise from malice alone. They are often forged in pain and resilience, in battles fought beneath the surface where no one sees.

I was alone, not just in the court but inside myself. The whispers of betrayal haunted me — friendships broken, alliances crumbling like dry leaves. Even the Mad Hatter, whose mind spun with chaos and riddles, turned wary.

“You’re too dangerous,” he warned one night beneath the twisted branches of the Tulgey Wood. “You make them afraid, and fear is a fire that burns everything it touches.”

But I could not stop. I refused to be silenced.

Because behind the thorn was a heart battered by neglect, a spirit bruised by misunderstanding. I was the protector of my own fragile truth, even if it meant becoming the villain in their stories.

The Queen’s Court thrives on stories — carefully woven tales that keep power balanced and secrets hidden. To be cast as the villain is to be painted with broad, cruel strokes, erased from nuance and complexity.

I watched as my actions were twisted, my intentions reframed into shadows. A refusal to obey became rebellion; a demand for honesty became deceit. They erased the moments when I helped, when I cared, when I held the fragile pieces of others together in silence.

One afternoon, I stood in the garden labyrinth, its twisting hedges a mirror of the tangled narratives surrounding me. The roses bloomed bright, but thorns glittered sharper.

I whispered to the wind, “I didn’t have a choice. If I stayed silent, I’d lose myself. If I fought back, I became the villain.”

The answer was a bitter one, but clear: sometimes, survival demands embracing the role others fear.

As Courtalise Thorn, the villain in their story, I chose to own my wildness. I stopped apologizing for being the thorn that could not be plucked, the storm that refused to calm.

The Queen’s Court saw me as the threat, but I became something more — a force that challenged their illusions and shattered their fragile peace.

I forged alliances with the outcasts: the Cheshire Cat, who vanished at will but whose eyes always saw the truth; the Caterpillar, whose slow wisdom whispered secrets beneath smoke rings; and even the Dormouse, whose quiet strength was often overlooked.

Together, we spun a new story — one where truth dared to breathe beneath the Queen’s shadow.

But every story told in Wonderland has two sides, and theirs was the one told loudest.

To them, I was chaos incarnate, a wild thorn disrupting the harmony. To me, they were blind gardeners pruning what they feared.

One day, the Queen herself confronted me beneath the weeping willow. Her eyes were sharp, her voice cold as winter’s breath.

“You were never meant to be part of this court,” she said. “Your place is as a villain in the tales we tell — a warning, a lesson.”

I met her gaze, steady and unyielding. “Then I will be the thorn that teaches you to listen.”

The story continues to unfold, shifting like the labyrinth’s paths. I remain the thorn, the wild magic no one can cage.

I am Courtalise Thorn — the villain in their story, but the hero of my own.

In Wonderland, stories can change, but some truths endure. And my truth is simple: sometimes, being the villain means refusing to lose yourself to a story not your own.

Posted May 22, 2025
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