Submitted to: Contest #317

The Watcher on Fifth

Written in response to: "Write a story in which a stranger warns someone about events yet to come."

Mystery Thriller Urban Fantasy

Lena Maxwell always thought New York moved too fast for anyone to notice the small details, the quiet ripples beneath the surface. But that evening, the city slowed, as if the world itself had been inhaled and was holding its breath.

She left her office in Midtown at nine, as she always did, the streets still crowded but the hum of business winding down. She liked to walk home, past the neon-smeared signs of corner diners, the street performers packing up their guitars, the sharp tang of wet asphalt after a sudden rain.

Tonight, though, something felt off.

It started with the man on Fifth Avenue. He didn’t look out of place at first: mid-thirties, a wool coat, black hair slicked back, hands shoved deep into pockets. But he was staring at her—not casually, not the kind of glance one gives a stranger in passing—but like he knew her, like he had been waiting.

She slowed, pretending to tie her shoe at the edge of the sidewalk. He mirrored her pace.

“Miss Maxwell?” His voice was calm, almost soft, but carried an urgency that made her skin prickle.

She froze. “Do I know you?”

“No,” he said, and then hesitated, as if weighing his words. “Not yet. But you will.”

Something in the way he said it—certain, measured, heavy—made her take a step back.

“I think you have the wrong person,” she said, though her voice cracked.

“No. I don’t.” He took a step closer, hands still buried in his coat pockets. “I need you to listen. It’s important. Very important.”

Lena’s instincts screamed to cross the street, to run. But curiosity rooted her in place.

“What is it?” she asked.

He glanced around, as if noticing the bustling city for the first time. “You’ve heard of coincidences, right?”

“Yes…” Lena replied cautiously.

“They’re not.” He shook his head. “Everything you think is random, everything you believe is chance, is part of something bigger. Something that’s coming.”

She laughed nervously. “Look, I don’t know what—”

“You have to trust me.” His eyes locked onto hers. “In three days, something happens. Something that changes everything. And you… you’re at the center of it.”

Her pulse quickened. “I think you’re mistaken. I don’t—”

“Listen!” he interrupted, the urgency now cutting through the noise of the street. “You’ll be offered a choice. A decision. If you make the wrong one, lives will be lost. People you don’t even know yet will die.”

Lena’s rational mind screamed. Stranger danger, mental illness, maybe even a scam. Yet something—an invisible thread she could not name—kept her rooted to the spot.

“How do you know this?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.

“Because I’ve seen it. Because I’ve been there before. But you… you’re the first chance to change it.”

She glanced at him, taking in the impossibility of it all: the vague familiarity in his voice, the way he seemed both lost and desperate. She should have walked away. Everyone would have. But the pull of something inevitable—and terrifying—was too strong.

“Okay,” she said finally. “Suppose I believe you. What do I do?”

He exhaled sharply. “You wait. Watch. And don’t make any moves until you know who’s watching you.”

“Who’s watching me?”

His eyes darkened. “You’ll see. And then you’ll understand why I had to find you tonight, on this street, at this exact moment. Time is… fragile.”

Before she could ask more, a car honked, a cyclist yelled, and the spell broke. He stepped back, melting into the crowd. By the time Lena blinked, he was gone.

She spent the rest of the walk home trying to convince herself it was a hallucination, a trick of the stress and the rain and the late hour. She told herself that the next three days would be normal, mundane, like every other day in the city.

But the universe rarely gives ordinary.

The next morning, Lena’s office was buzzing with news: a massive blackout had hit several blocks downtown. Phones and internet were out; traffic lights failed; panic rippled through the streets. It was inconvenient for most, but for her, the memory of the stranger made her pulse quicken.

The day passed without incident for her personally. Meetings, emails, the endless hum of work. But she felt the edges of reality trembling, as if the city itself was holding its breath.

On the second day, she noticed it. A man sitting across from her in the subway, sketching her face into a notebook. A shadow in the coffee shop window that moved just slightly when no one was behind it. And always, always, the sense that someone, somewhere, was waiting for her to act.

By the evening, her rational mind was fraying. She went for a walk again, this time down Fifth Avenue, tracing the steps she had taken when the stranger found her. The streets were quieter, more attentive somehow. And then she saw him: the coat, the black hair, hands deep in pockets, watching her from a distance.

“You’re back,” she said cautiously.

“You saw,” he replied, not moving closer. “Good. That means time is still on our side. But it won’t be for long.”

“What do you mean?”

“The choice,” he said simply. “You’ll see it tonight. Don’t take it lightly. Don’t trust appearances. And remember this: sometimes the wrong person gives the right answer, and sometimes the right person gives the wrong one. Look beyond the obvious.”

She swallowed hard, her chest tightening. “I don’t even know what I’m looking for.”

“You’ll know when you see it.”

The third day arrived with a storm. Thunder rumbled through the city as Lena walked home from work, soaked and shivering. The power was out in her neighborhood, streetlights dead, emergency sirens wailing in the distance. And then she saw it: a small child, crying on the sidewalk, a man looming over him, shouting.

Instinct and fear surged at the same time. Without thinking, Lena ran. She didn’t know why she ran—she just did.

The man saw her coming and hesitated, just long enough for the boy to break free. Lena scooped him up and turned. In the chaos of the storm, the shadows around them shifted. Figures—dozens, maybe hundreds—watched silently from alleyways, cars, and windows.

Her mind went back to the stranger’s words: Look beyond the obvious.

The man who had threatened the child was not looking at her; he was watching someone else. And then Lena understood. The real danger was not the man in front of her, but the choices she had yet to make, the people she had yet to protect.

The storm passed. The child was safe, returned to frantic parents who didn’t know how to thank her. The shadows receded. And somewhere, in the distance, Lena felt the same thread of inevitability loosen, just a little.

She walked home, drenched, exhausted, but alive. And when she turned down Fifth Avenue one last time, she saw him again—the stranger, watching her, a faint smile on his lips.

“Remember,” he said, fading into the night, “time is fragile. But you… you are stronger than it.”

And just like that, he was gone.

Lena went to bed that night with the storm still ringing in her ears, the city quiet around her, and a certainty that her life—and everything she thought she knew about the world—had changed forever.

Posted Aug 25, 2025
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