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Fiction Teens & Young Adult Inspirational

You never knew what will appear in your life people you met may mark your life some may leaving lesson learned what is left is a remaining a good memory pepoel always come and go unexpected chances worth to take to mark a trial in each steeping step through a journey of your life opportunity happened taking trial is to see if it meant for you to walk forward ahead leading you to an opening door to your future ,your first love you met is rare to find uneasy to forgot to be forgotten through the passing aging of years of life passes through young love sweetheart senior high was unsure knowing the meaning of true happiness love meant after college accomplished after high school for a moment time and years were younger life haven't age life was free and heartache wasn't painted but fill with colorful feelings unexpected things worth to walk through to know what happened ahead of you Love between wound never thought it would heal why do purest love can't dissolve it’s purest feeling it’s flooded in pain of the heartache why doesn’t it want him at the same time it’s heal you when he held you why do the best feelings meant to be bury deep down within you and your the only one that has to swollen your pride for him given chances given another hopes thought he would take my hand to be his permanent but the heart won’t bare another wounded lies that keep me restless is it wrong to love him purest from within your heart it’s killing slowly as I've heard him gonna get married but now keep a firm soft smile though the wound can’t be heal once summer afternoon my whole heart shattered within me lifeless for a moment on the hospital bed just a smile bright others days at the community club house but inside your heartbeat breaking still praying for strength how could love so purest meant to be separated I've waited for him to change all his words was just like a lullaby that is no longer new to hear it , please god give me strength to live another life secure me if he meant for me lead us in marriage if he isn’t the one why my soul and heart longingly to hold him missing him god if we don’t meant for each other let time separate us separate us as it’s heal please firm this heart alive once more, love is everything to me not to sure to love again but surely recover I let him go in your wishful blessings i realize love came after marriage but it’s taking sometime as the first person you’ve met isn’t necessarily meant to stay for you instead you learn the purest feelings that love came within your soulful heartbeat for the first time caused you love with your true feelings from your heartbeat that meant to feel the heartache losing sleep till time separate as longer years becomes less moment never turning back to him since the moment you’ve given green lights to love marriage become someone first purest love miracles happen as prayer blessings leading you to your soulful soulmate a purest love that cure everything in once spring break in the city heart of Amman a love unexpected a dream of his face appear like a dream in awaking daylight my prayer of miracles has secure ease my weaken heart regrowth strength somehow that how his purest love given chance to love for a new begging the best feelings for the rest of my life once summer July engagement till our white wedding in July 15th I'm blessed to be his only women he’ll ever love I bless to be call Mrs. beautiful soul or hearing where is your beautiful wife I’m blessed to be his love isn’t nasecarily you buy expensive gifts it's about treasure moments aspire one another to look forward ahead instead of looking back the love you thought was your first was actually just the starting ending to reach your happy ending love is a trial that you learn to recover to heal to lead you to a better place as wound easen and true purest love lead to happiness that perpouse lead in a holy vows of promises among spouse women are those rose that need to blossom that feeds love from her man if a man love his women she love him the same that blossom each other's feelings love is accomplished little things in appreciated one another by action and words that met the true value respect understanding one another feeling respect one another through bad and good days love is valuable part of life that always there since we were born love is a miracle blessings that cure everything only the heart could reflect how it's feel pure love is the action of words of a little things you done for one another is simplist ways that you care for one another pure love is like rhyming words of poetry express the purest feelings that came within your soulful heartbeat remember long relationship is a health happy marriage that blossom each other's purest love through the aging less hours of moments in each other's life that love has values a longingly heart that longingly to be hold in the arm of your spouse longingly kisses and warmth hugs that spark alive through awakening life spark a romance alive bed of roses or bath of roses a romantic candle dinner with a heart touching melody spark a memory of love each dance step moments, expressing feelings for one another, boyfriend girlfriend are mostly happened during school year that sometimes doesn't last longer caused it's temporary some it's last longer that lead to marriage some separated caused it's doesn't meant for you to stay purest love is complete if two soul if two heartbeats purest feelings combine in one that lead a promising holy vows among two person that lead a happy marriage.

October 05, 2020 21:19

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18:19 Oct 11, 2020

" it's a a story of pure love in a younger age, a highschool sweetheart separate during high school year, and it's too late to get back again, waiting became years and years forgotten within time she give chance for one person and he became his first boyfriend love only could be found in vows

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Claire Jennings
16:49 Oct 15, 2020

The sentiments behind the story are really beautiful and the idea was great as a first submission. I did however find it difficult to read due to the lack of punctuation and the flow of language used And had to read it a few times to get it straight in my head

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