Submitted to: Contest #294

Memory, loss, and finding beauty in unexpected places.

Written in response to: "Write a story in the form of a letter, or several letters sent back and forth."

Fiction Inspirational Romance

Okay, here’s a story in the form of letters, playing with themes of memory, loss, and finding beauty in unexpected places.

Letter 1:

Dearest Amelia,

I hope this letter finds you well, or at least as well as can be expected. It feels strange, writing to you after all this time. Decades, isn’t it? Since our last hurried goodbye at the train station, smoke has swirled around us like a melancholic waltz.

I'm writing from the Isle of Skye. You remember how we used to dream of visiting, poring over photographs of jagged mountains and misty lochs, promising each other we'd escape London's grime one day? Well, I finally made it. Though, regrettably, you are not here with me.

The air is raw and clean here, Amelia. It bites at your cheeks and fills your lungs with a scent that’s a mix of salt and heather. The landscape is brutal, beautiful, and utterly unforgiving—much like life, wouldn’t you say? It reminds me of you, in a way. Strong, resilient, and capable of breathtaking moments of kindness.

I rented a small cottage overlooking Loch Harport. It’s nothing fancy, but it has a fireplace that roars like a contented dragon and a window that frames the Cuillin mountains perfectly. Every morning, I wake to the sound of the wind and the cries of the gulls. It’s a far cry from the rumble of the Underground.

The reason I'm writing is... complicated. After all these years, I discovered something amongst the papers your mother sent me after her passing—a small, pressed flower tucked away in a book of poetry. A forget-me-not. It has your handwriting on the back: "Skye, '72."

'72. The year we spent that summer painting in Cornwall. Before... everything.

I know your memory of those years, of us, isn't what it used to be. But the flower, the note—it sparked something in me. A longing, a curiosity, a need to understand. Was there something more to our connection than I remember? Was our goodbye at the train station much too premature?

So, I came here. To Skye. To see if I could find what that forget-me-not was trying to tell me.

If you feel up to it, I would love to hear from you. Any memory, any feeling, anything at all.

With love and a touch of trepidation,

Edward

Letter 2:

My Dearest Edward,

Your letter arrived like a ghost from a life I barely remember. Skye? Did we truly dream of Skye? The name rings a faint bell, like a melody heard from a distant room. The flower... that detail is completely gone.

I am well, or as well as a woman of my age can be. My days are filled with the gentle rhythm of routine: tea at eleven, a walk in the garden (though my knees protest these days), the crossword in the afternoon, and the evening news, which, frankly, only serves to depress me.

You ask about '72. About us. It’s all so... hazy, Edward. Like looking through a frosted window. I remember painting. Yes, Cornwall. Sun on my skin, the smell of salt and turpentine. A young man... was that you? With kind eyes and ink-stained fingers?

Everything is fractured, fragmented. The doctors say it’s the natural progression of things. A slow fading of the tapestry.

There was love, I believe. A deep, passionate love. But the details elude me. Was it a happy love? A tragic one? I cannot say.

Your letter brings a strange sense of peace, though. A feeling that something important is trying to surface. Perhaps you are the key, Edward. Perhaps you can unlock the memories that have been locked away for so long.

Write again. Tell me more about Skye. Paint me a picture with your words. Maybe, just maybe, a fragment will fall into place.

With a fragile hope,

Amelia

Letter 3:

Amelia,

Your reply warmed my heart more than you can imagine. It's enough to know I'm not alone in reaching for these faded moments.

Skye is a land of contrasts. Imagine mountains that scrape the sky, their peaks shrouded in mist, like ancient gods guarding their secrets. Imagine waterfalls cascading down rocky cliffs, their roar echoing through the valleys. And then imagine the quiet beauty of the lochs, their still waters reflecting the ever-changing sky.

Yesterday, I drove to the Quiraing, a bizarre landscape of towering rock formations and hidden valleys. It felt like stepping onto another planet. The wind howled, and the rain lashed down, but there was a strange sense of exhilaration.

I thought of you, Amelia, and how you would have loved to paint it. Your vibrant colours, your bold strokes… you always had a way of capturing the essence of a place, of bringing it to life on canvas.

Do you remember your painting of the Cornish coast? The one with the crashing waves and the dramatic sky? It was my favourite. I always thought it captured your spirit perfectly. A blend of fire and grace.

And yes, it was me, Amelia. The young man with the ink-stained fingers and the perpetually worried brow. I was desperately in love with you. Utterly, hopelessly, irrevocably in love.

Tell me, does any of that spark even a flicker of recognition?

With enduring affection,

Edward

Letter 4:

Edward,

Fire and grace... I like that. It sounds like someone I would have wanted to be.

I think… I think I’m starting to remember something. A picnic on the beach. Sand in my hair. Laughter. A shared kiss beneath a star-filled sky. Do you remember that, Edward? The constellations spread out above us like diamonds on velvet?

And there was a storm—a terrible storm. The waves crashed against the rocks, and the wind howled like a banshee. I was afraid. But you held me close and told me everything would be alright.

And there was a painting—a painting of the storm. Dark, brooding colours. A sense of raw power. I remember you admiring it. Saying it was my best work.

But the details are still cloudy. I can’t quite grasp the whole picture.

Tell me about the storm, Edward. Tell me everything you remember.

A flicker of light in the darkness,

Amelia

Letter 5:

Amelia,

The storm. God, yes, the storm. It was the night before you were supposed to leave Cornwall. To return to London and your family. I remember feeling a sense of dread, a premonition that everything was about to change.

The storm rolled in suddenly, catching us off guard. We were huddled in your cottage, the wind rattling the windows and the rain lashing against the glass. The power went out, plunging us into darkness.

You were terrified. I remember that clearly. Your face was pale, and your eyes were wide with fear.

I held you close, trying to reassure you, telling you that it would pass. But I was scared too. I knew that the storm was just a metaphor for what was about to happen to us.

We made love that night, Amelia. A desperate, passionate act of defiance against the forces that were trying to tear us apart. It was the most beautiful and heartbreaking thing I have ever experienced.

The next morning, the storm had passed. The sun was shining, but the air was heavy with the weight of unspoken words.

You left that afternoon. I watched you go, standing on the platform as the train pulled away. I knew, in that moment, that I would never see you again.

That was the last time I saw you, Amelia. Until now.

Does that bring anything back?

With a heart full of memories,

Edward

Letter 6:

Edward,

The train station... the smoke... I see it now. The goodbye. It was my mother who called me back abruptly, wasn't it? She had arranged another match, another suitable husband. You were... not suitable. Not wealthy enough, not established enough.

And I went. I always did what my mother said.

But the storm... the love... that was ours. And now I remember something else. A secret we kept. A promise. We were going to run away. To Skye. To live a life of art and freedom.

But the storm changed everything. I was pulled back to reality, back to duty. And that dream... it drowned in the rising tide.

The weight of it all comes crashing down on me now, Edward. The guilt, the regret, the what-ifs.

I am so sorry. Sorry for leaving you. Sorry for not fighting harder. Sorry for all the years we lost.

But thank you. Thank you for bringing back these memories. For reminding me of the love we shared. For showing me that even in the darkest of times, there is always beauty to be found.

Come home, Edward. Come back to London. Let us sit together in the garden and watch the sunset. Let us talk about Skye and Cornwall and the storm that changed our lives. Let us have tea at eleven.

Perhaps, in these final years, we can create new memories to overshadow the old ones.

With a love that transcends time,

Amelia

Letter 7:

My dearest Amelia,

Tears are streaming down my face as I read your letter. The memories are flooding back now, aren't they? The joy, the pain, the regrets... it's all there.

Yes, Amelia, we were going to run away to Skye. That little flower, pressed in that book, was a reminder of our secret. A symbol of hope.

And you are right. It is time for me to come home.

I will pack my bags and book a flight tomorrow. I will see you soon, my love. We will sit in the garden and watch the sunset. We will drink tea at eleven. And we will talk about everything.

Thank you, Amelia, for giving me this second chance. Thank you for reminding me what it means to love.

I will be there soon.

With a heart overflowing with love and anticipation,

Your Edward.

Posted Mar 14, 2025
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19 likes 6 comments

Emily Miles
14:19 Mar 25, 2025

"For showing me that even in the darkest of times, there is always beauty to be found." Oh I love that! That was a similar theme I explored in my story using this prompt, as well. :)

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Sandra Moody
15:25 Mar 23, 2025

Beautiful story! You captured nature and mood with amazing imagery! Love it. I'll put Isle of Skye on my bucket list!

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Jen Mengarelli
14:08 Mar 22, 2025

What a picture you paint with your words! I especially loved "slow fading of the tapestry," as a beautifully rendered image of aging.

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Susie Bennett
15:06 Mar 22, 2025

that is lovely of you. i enjoy art and love creating a landscape of colour through words. it also fits with my brand new book Framing FreedomA Journery Though the Lens and it is exactly that the landscape is a tapstry of freedom for everyone

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Humble Sparrow
11:31 Mar 22, 2025

Too sweet! Never too late to rekindle an old flame, apparently.
The descriptions are so poetic and exquisite and the pacing is spot-on. Well done!

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Rebecca Detti
10:11 Mar 22, 2025

Wonderful and so romantic!

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