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One day, the day that it happened. it all started with that mistake. And here I am, faced to court. All I did, all my mistakes, they've finally come back. And though I thought that they'd left me, they stick on to me like a shadow.


Now I am ready to go to jail but then that flash of light. It came so sudden then I woke up in a crystal castle. I look around but no one was here. I tried to recall what just happened but I couldn't. My head hurts as I tried to get off of the bed. I went out the door and then I saw it. The thing that brought me here. I screamed but then I relized what just happened. I closed my eyes and hoped for all this to just be a fake dream but then as I pinched myself it accually hurt so that was when i realized it was real.


One day, the day that it happened. it all started with that mistake. And here I am, faced to court. All I did, all my mistakes, they've finally come back. And though I thought that they'd left me, they stick on to me like a shadow.


Now I am ready to go to jail but then that flash of light. It came so sudden then I woke up in a crystal castle. I look around but no one was here. I tried to recall what just happened but I couldn't. My head hurts as I tried to get off of the bed. I went out the door and then I saw it. The thing that brought me here. I screamed but then I relized what just happened. I closed my eyes and hoped for all this to just be a fake dream but then as I pinched myself it accually hurt so that was when i realized it was real.


One day, the day that it happened. it all started with that mistake. And here I am, faced to court. All I did, all my mistakes, they've finally come back. And though I thought that they'd left me, they stick on to me like a shadow.


Now I am ready to go to jail but then that flash of light. It came so sudden then I woke up in a crystal castle. I look around but no one was here. I tried to recall what just happened but I couldn't. My head hurts as I tried to get off of the bed. I went out the door and then I saw it. The thing that brought me here. I screamed but then I relized what just happened. I closed my eyes and hoped for all this to just be a fake dream but then as I pinched myself it accually hurt so that was when i realized it was real.

February 01, 2020 18:02

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Hazel Mount
18:02 Feb 01, 2020

I'm proud of my work

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Hazel Mount
18:02 Feb 01, 2020

really proud

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Hazel Mount
18:03 Feb 01, 2020

super proud

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Hazel Mount
18:03 Feb 01, 2020

The most proud

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Hazel Mount
18:03 Feb 01, 2020

Prouder than anyone

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Hazel Mount
18:03 Feb 01, 2020

The proudest

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