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Submitted to: Contest #81
Written in response to: "Write about someone asking out an old crush, only to realize their crush doesn’t remember they’ve ever met before."
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Friendship High School Romance
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ohhhh yass, new thread then? :)))
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Ahhh Maryanne, congrats on posting your first story! It was a really enjoyable read, great dialogue and plot..and all that jazz XD
I'm pretty confused though, I'm reading this from a phone soo I might be wrong, uhh was this story written and fit into one paragraph? Also the font is big aandddd...well, I'm reading this from a phone soo hehhehe, it's oddly convenient XD
Ohh but really, great story, I love how Hayley's so nice despite not remembering Tristan...also the ending! Ughhh best part, it's so simple and sooo happy and eek...I'm in love~
Alsooo hehehe, made me burst into laughter for some reason XD:
"Wait Hayley, what game do you think you're playing? I've known you forever. This hurts man."
Lol XD
I love it! Great job, Maryanne, keep up the good work! :)))
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