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Submitted into Contest #54 in response to: Write a story about a TV show called "Second Chances."... view prompt
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V artistic approach.
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thank you :)
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this is a lovely heartwarming story. With a moral too. Well done. Try using Grammarly to help with your writing. good luck
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thank you :)
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A second chance is the ability to relive your life with the experiences of the mistake you made. To learn from them, to grow and to understand. This story was absolutely wonderful and I hope you become a great author one day. People need stories like these to bring hope, uplift, entertain and enjoy. Best of luck to ya, Z
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thank you :)
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Amazing story. Your first attempt on Reedsy is great. Welcome. Well written. But you have some grammatical mistakes. It will come to us naturally. Nice job. Would you mind reading my story " secrets don't get burie?"
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thanks and I will read your story
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Definitely an interesting story. I think it was really good for a first submission despite a couple grammar errors which have been pointed out already. Keep writing, Amosh!
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thank you! and my spelling is Amogh:)
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Oh, I’m sorry, Amogh.
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It's ok Leya :)
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Here as requested! The story was amazing but just wondering about the font sizes as it did distract me... (and possibly some other readers!)
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I know that the font size was big but in my other story I managed it. Thank you :)
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Great story! There are a few grammar issues, but that is all easily fixable! The title instantly caught my attention, and overall a very interesting concept.
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Thanks
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Second chance is another opportunity to redo what you didn't or to try once again to achieve what you had aimed but failed.
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It's right
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Your Story was Fantastic
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thank you :)
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