MOM
Mom 24/03/20 3:47pm
Hey do you know what time you’ll be home?
Mom 24/03/20 4:52pm
Supper’s ready
Mom 24/03/20 5:23pm
I just got the email from the hospital! How are you doing?
Mom 24/03/30 7:26pm
What, you don’t speak to your mother anymore?
Mom 24/03/20 8:45pm
Good night
Keri 25/03/20 10:05am
Hey Mom, sorry I missed your texts. I couldn’t have my phone while they did the testing
Mom 25/03/20 10:07am
And???
Keri 25/03/20 10:07am
You know how the virus could only get people whose respiratory systems were compromised? Well now it’s mutated and I’ve got it, so I have to live here until I test clean
Keri 25/03/20 10:08am
The doctors say we’ll be here for a couple weeks at least
Mom 25/03/20 10:09am
That’s crazy. Are you in the hospital?
Mom 25/03/20 10:09am
Who is we?
Keri 25/03/20 10:09am
We’re in a little house, or apartment, or something. Right close to the hospital
Keri 25/03/20 10:10am
And there are five other people here
Mom 25/03/20 10:10am
How are you feeling?
Mom 25/03/20 10:11am
Well?
Keri 25/03/20 10:11am
I feel mostly fine. It’s just an exaggerated cold
Keri 25/03/20 10:11am
Well what?
Mom 25/03/20 10:13am
I’m waiting for your descriptions
Keri 25/03/20 10:13am
Ok, give me a minute
Keri 25/03/20 10:16am
There’s one girl (I think her name is Ingrid, I’m not sure) with straight dark hair. She has bags under her eyes and only climbs out of her bed to eat and swear. She must be feeling awful, maybe she got it worse than me
Mom 25/03/20 10:17am
She doesn’t sound very nice
Keri 25/03/20 10:18am
Roxanne is very sweet. She has dark skin and gorgeous eyes. She’s worried about her baby (an adorable little boy, he’s seventeen months, she showed me pictures) and face times her husband to check on how they’re doing all the time
Keri 25/03/20 10:18am
And I think Ingrid is just scared
Keri 25/03/20 10:21am
Then there is Peter. He looks like the guy from the Pentatonics who can sing really high but he can’t and he always wears socks with his sandals. He’s a Jew, which is super fascinating and I’m going to ask him about the Bible yet
Keri 25/03/20 10:25am
Mr. Hildebrandt doesn’t do much. He’ll watch whatever’s on the TV, eat whenever we do, and ask what day it is all the time. He’s got dementia but is only about sixty
Keri 25/03/20 10:26am
No questions or remarks?
Mom 25/03/20 10:27am
Sorry sweets I was on the phone with your dad. He’s on his way home empty
Keri 25/03/20 10:27am
No loads?
Mom 25/03/20 10:28am
All the factories are shut down
Keri 25/03/20 10:28am
Ahh
Mom 25/03/20 10:29am
Hey you said there were five people there right?
Keri 25/03/20 10:31am
Oh yeah. Caleb would be so offended. He’s tall and lanky, messy dark hair, a complete goofball. Early teens
Mom 25/03/20 10:34am
He sounds familiar. Send a pic
Keri 25/03/20 10:35am
I’m not just going to randomly start taking pictures of people!
Mom 25/03/20 10:36am
Tell him your mom is curious
Keri 25/03/20 10:36am
Nope
Mom 25/03/20 10:37am
Come on
Mom 25/03/20 10:37am
Please?
Keri 25/03/20 10:38am
Nopers
Mom 25/03/20 10:40am
What are you doing?
Keri 25/03/20 10:40am
Sitting.
Keri 25/03/20 10:41am
Everything is clean except for Ingrid’s blankets and Peter’s pile of socks by his bunk, and Roxanne said she wanted to make lunch so I’m on the couch
Keri 25/03/20 10:41am
You?
Mom 25/03/20 10:42am
You know, same as usual. School, making kombucha, thinking of what to make for supper
Keri 25/03/20 10:43am
I miss you guys
Mom 25/03/20 10:44am
We miss you too sweets :)
OG GROUP
Sara 25/03/20 2:32pm
Making brownies!
Keri 25/03/20 2:33pm
Ugh so jealous… I don’t think we even have baking ingredients here
Sarah 25/03/20 2:33pm
You’re gonna have to mail some of those to Florida for me
Marian 25/03/20 2:34pm
Hey Keri how are you doing?
Sara 25/03/20 2:34pm
Keri how are you?
Sarah 25/03/20 2:34pm
What happened?
Keri 25/03/20 2:35pm
Oh goodness! Give a girl some time to respond :P
Keri 25/03/20 2:36pm
I feel like I’m in one of Marian’s shows. Stuck in a house with a bunch of random people to see if we survive
Keri 25/03/20 2:36pm
Only this one isn’t full of ridiculously hot people
Sarah 25/03/20 2:37pm
Wait so what happened?
Sara 25/03/20 2:37pm
The virus right?
Keri 25/03/20 2:38pm
This one’s different. They don’t know how to treat it, so we have to stay isolated to keep it from spreading
Marian 25/03/20 2:39pm
At least you have wifi right?
Keri 25/03/20 2:39pm
Yes so the millennial inside me is content
Sara 25/03/20 2:39pm
You’re Gen Z, not millennial
Keri 25/03/20 2:40pm
*sarcastically rolling my eyeballs
Sara 25/03/20 2:40pm
Hey, if you weren’t wrong I wouldn’t have to correct you
Marian 25/03/20 2:41pm
That’s two negatives in a sentence
Sarah 25/03/20 2:41pm
Come on girls
Keri 25/03/20 2:42pm
That just means the one cancels the other out. Like, since I am wrong she corrects me. If I was not wrong she wouldn’t have to
Marian 25/03/20 2:43pm
I knew you were going to say that
Keri 25/03/20 2:43pm
#consistency
Sara 25/03/20 2:44pm
So what are you doing with all this free time now? Getting lots of writing done?
Keri 25/03/20 2:44pm
No. I don’t have my laptop and it takes so long to write on my phone…
Marian 25/03/20 2:45pm
You poor dear
Sarah 25/03/20 2:45pm
You should ask if they’ll let you have it
Keri 25/03/20 2:46pm
I think I will. I am starting to go crazy
Sara 25/03/20 2:46pm
You can do this! It’s only a couple weeks, right?
Keri 25/03/20 2:47pm
Pray to God it’s no more
Sarah 25/03/20 2:47pm
We are
Sara 25/03/20 2:47pm
Yes
Marian 25/03/20 2:48pm
Of course dear
ALEX
Alex 25/03/20 7:03pm
Hey you attacked today
Keri 25/03/20 7:04pm
Yeah I haven’t played in so long
Alex 25/03/20 7:05pm
Classic
PHIL
Phil 25/03/20 7:07pm
Hay whats up
Keri 25/03/20 7:07pm
Hay is for horses
Phil 25/03/20 7:08pm
She takes the bate
Keri 25/03/20 7:08pm
Bait?
Phil 25/03/20 7:10pm
What. Ever. Spencer. What. Ever.
ALEX
Alex 25/03/20 7:12pm
Ask for troops. I have dragons
Keri 25/03/20 7:13pm
I want valks
Alex 25/03/20 7:14pm
No you need air troops too
PHIL
Phil 25/03/20 7:13pm
You didn’t answer my question
Phil 25/03/20 7:13pm
Answer
Phil 25/03/20 7:13pm
Me
NEW GROUP
Keri 25/03/20 7:15pm
Aww you guys both miss me
Alex 25/03/20 7:16pm
Yup
Phil 25/03/20 7:16pm
We can’t watch lord of the rings without you
Keri 25/03/20 7:16pm
Ahh so the truth comes out
Alex 25/03/20 7:17
Yeah that too
Keri 25/03/20 7:17
Oh goodness
HALLIE
Hallie 26/03/20 9:52am
I seen your update! Rati’s girlfriend is blind!?
Keri 26/03/20 9:52am
She’s not his girlfriend yet
Hallie 26/03/20 9:52am
But she’s going to be right?
Hallie 26/03/20 9:53am
She had better be
Keri 26/03/20 9:53am
Of course she will be
Hallie 26/03/20 9:53am
Ok good
Hallie 26/03/20 9:54am
What made you think of making her blind?
Keri 26/03/20 9:54am
Actually I have no idea. At first she wasn’t going to be. Then the idea just came into my head, and I couldn’t get rid of it.
Keri 26/03/20 9:55am
So now she’s blind
Hallie 26/03/20 9:56am
Cool. How’s it going there?
Keri 26/03/20 9:56am
I don’t mind solitude. But no books, no laptop, and strangers… this is not my cup of tea
Hallie 26/03/20 9:57am
Its all research, dear. It’s all research
Keri 26/03/20 9:57am
Aye, and prayer practice. Lord give me strength
Hallie 27/03/20 12:34pm
Hey did you get the email with the new prompts yet?
Keri 27/03/20 12:36pm
Yup just read it
Hallie 27/03/20 12:36pm
Did you decide which one you are going to do?
Keri 27/03/20 12:37pm
No
Hallie 27/03/20 12:37pm
Are you doing one this week?
Keri 27/03/20 12:37pm
I’m working on it
Keri 27/03/20 12:38pm
You don’t think anyone will mind if I put them in it, right?
Hallie 27/03/20 12:38pm
I don’t think so
Keri 27/03/20 12:39pm
I just realized I forgot to put my dad in the story!
Hallie. 27/03/20 12:39pm
Can’t you just add him?
Keri 27/03/20 12:39pm
But I’m already almost done…
Hallie 27/03/20 12:40pm
Which prompt did you choose?
Keri 27/03/20 12:40pm
The texting one
Keri 27/03/20 12:41pm
It’s okay, Dad would have just called me anyways. I’m good. I’m sure he won’t hold it against me.
Hallie 27/03/20 12:42pm
Wait its only noon. You’re writing your submission already?
Keri 27/03/20 12:42pm
Yes you should be very proud
Keri 27/03/20 12:43pm
I’ll probably put off finishing it till midnight again though
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I’m so glad you mentioned me. I was beginning to think you wouldn’t. 😜
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Of course I would mention you!
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Aww shucks 😆😊
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I didn't know you were talking about real people! I loved this story!
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Haha yes I was; when I write in first person, it is so easy and fun to pull my family and friends' personalities into the story with me! It's also a great excuse to have them read my work and tell me what they think about it.
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Wow, Keri for some reason I didn't realize until the end that you were actually talking about real people! I really like that aspect of this story.
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Haha yeah, a lot of the short stories written in first person incorporate my family and/or friends from church, so if you keep reading my stories, some other names will become familiar 🤣
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That's pretty cool!
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Whoa, I didn't realize until the end that you were actually writing about yourself! Did this actually happen to you? I have to say, big fan of Lord of the Rings too. Also, the line about typing on the phone was funny (my sister went through the same problem when she didn't have her laptop on vacation!). Very impressive!
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I’m glad you liked it! And no, it didn’t happen to me. Whenever I use first person, I do actually use myself as the main character, though, so you’ll probably find a lot of character similarities in my stories.
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And yes... LOTR is awesome! My brothers and I have our own little geek sessions over it
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