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Christian Fiction Adventure

"Dear reader my name is Alison Moon and I'm sixteen years old", I loved hanging out with my friends every night after school. one fateful night me and my friends had a fight and then went on our separate ways, during the night. I saw a black cat. as I followed the black cat through the crumbling cemetery, the moon cast eerie shadows on the weathered headstones. The cat's eyes glowed like lanterns, guiding me toward a grave hidden behind a tangle of overgrown vines. The inscription on the stone read

"Emilia Roseburg, Beloved witch, 1720-1745

I shivered, sensing the weight of forgotten centuries. suddenly the Cat vanished, and a chill wind swept across the graveyard, I heard whispers-faint, urgent, and familiar.

"Emilia... find the artifact... before midnight..."

the voice was mine, yet not mine. a memory, long buried, stirred within me. In the silence, I sensed a new presence-the Witch's Ghost, her eyes blazing with purple flames, wrapped in an ancient pitch-black cloak. "My time is far from over and I will possess you Alison Moon" the witch's ghost stated.

I recalled the Jesus amulet I was wearing around my neck and was underneath my school blazer. the ghost rushed towards me speeding to possess me, as it entered my body I screamed " In Jesus, I revoke you demon". The ghost fled from my body. furthermore, the ghost incinerated from my glowing amulet. from the very moment I said, "I surrender my Soul to Jesus my savior" and a faint whisper replied, "Better late than Never".


I departed from the cemetery and walked home, upon arriving I opened the door, and it was 5:00 AM in the morning I saw my mother, father and grandmother standing at the door and I dropped to my knees crying and commenced asking for forgiveness telling them I would never, walk during the night. and then I shared my experience up until 7:00 AM. I went to school as a Christian.


As I walked through the school gates, the morning sunlight felt like a warm embrace, chasing away the lingering darkness of the previous night. My friends, Rachel and Mike, approached me with concern etched on their faces. "Alison, what happened? You look like you've seen a ghost," Rachel asked, her voice laced with worry.

I took a deep breath, gathering my thoughts. "Guys, I need to tell you something. Last night, I had the most terrifying experience."


Mike's eyes widened. "What happened?" I recounted the events in the cemetery, from following the black cat to encountering the Witch's Ghost. My friends listened, their expressions changing from curiosity to shock. "Whoa, that's insane," Mike exclaimed. "Are you okay?" Rachel placed a hand on my arm. "We're here for you, Alison. You're not alone." Throughout the day, I couldn't shake off the feeling that the Witch's Ghost's presence still lingered. But every time I touched the Jesus amulet, now visible outside my blazer, I felt a surge of protection and reassurance. At lunchtime, I sought out our school's pastor, Father Michael. I needed guidance on how to navigate this newfound spiritual awareness.


"Father Michael, I think I've been given a second chance," I said, sharing my story once more. He listened attentively, his eyes filled with compassion. "Alison, your faith has saved you. Remember, Jesus is always with you, guiding and protecting you." With renewed resolve, I walked out of his office, determined to strengthen my faith and resist the forces of darkness.


But as I turned a corner, I caught a glimpse of a figure watching me from afar – a figure shrouded in shadows, with eyes that seemed to burn with an otherworldly intensity. The Witch's Ghost's ominous words echoed in my mind: "My time is far from over..."


Was this the beginning of a new battle?



As I walked down the hallway, the figure vanished into thin air. I quickened my pace, my heart pounding in my chest. "Alison!" a voice called out. It was Emily, a quiet and reserved classmate. She approached me with an unsettling intensity in her eyes. "Emily, what's wrong?" I asked, sensing something off. "I've been having dreams," Emily said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Dreams of the Witch's Ghost. She's calling to me, Alison." My instincts screamed warning.


Was Emily being targeted by the same dark forces?


"Emily, we need to talk to Father Michael," I urged. But Emily's expression turned cold. "No, Alison. I've already made my choice." With those chilling words, Emily turned and disappeared into the crowd. I felt a shiver run down my spine. Was Emily now a pawn in the Witch's Ghost's game? Determined to save my classmate, I sought out Father Michael once more. "Father, Emily's in danger," I explained. "She's being drawn to the Witch's Ghost." Father Micheal expression turned grave. "Alison, you must be cautions. the forces of darkness will stop at nothing." Together, were devised a plan to protect Emily and uncover the witch's ghost's true intentions.


After school at exactly 13:00 PM Alison walked home subsequently, changed her clothes upon arriving at her home. furthermore, she informed her parents about the investigation she and her friends would embark on. aided by Father Micheal.

Alison picked up her friends Mike and Rachel. there were heading to Emily's Home with their bikes. Rachel and Mike were wearing necklaces of the holy cross bestowed by Father Micheal upon them. their mission was simple, it was observing Emily for the duration of the day.


As the trinity observed Emily tailing her, she spent the entire day alone. the sun settled and the trinity were preparing to return home. as it was 20:00 PM their plans were interrupted when a black cat came out of an abandoned mansion. the trinity witnessed from a hidden distance. the cat turned around and entered the mansion and so did Emily. racing against time the trio sprinted through the cobblestone street leading them to the mansion. upon entering the creaking door slammed and locked itself.


Emily was nowhere to be seen the trio went up the staircase and begun searching for Emily in the attic. the clock struck it was 00:00 PM Emily walked out of the basement holding the artifact of Emilia the witch, which would be used in resurrecting the witch. the ghost of the witch was gone destroyed by Alison. the witch was now using the black to possess atheist and spiritually weak individuals like Emily.


Emily went up the staircase. meanwhile on the attic the trinity discovered a pearl purple eye which was the sole source of the witch's lifeforce. Emily was coming to fuse the artifact and the eye this would cause the instant fusing of the witch and Emily. As Emily ascended the stairs, the trinity held their breaths, hiding in the shadows of the attic. The pearl purple eye, pulsating with an otherworldly energy, seemed to be calling to Emily. "Guys, we have to act fast," Mike whispered, his eyes fixed on the eye. Rachel clutched her holy cross necklace. "We can't let Emily fuse the artifact and the eye." Alison nodded; determination etched on her face. "We need to separate Emily from the artifact." Just as Emily reached the attic, the trinity sprang into action. Alison and Mike rushed toward Emily, while Rachel guarded the pearl purple eye.


"Emily, stop!" Alison pleaded, grasping Emily's arm.

Emily's eyes had turned an eerie shade of purple, and her voice was no longer her own. "You can't stop the resurrection," she hissed, wresting free from Alison's grip. With the artifact in hand, Emily approached the pearl purple eye. The trinity watched in horror as Emily's fingers reached out to merge the two. Suddenly, Rachel lunged forward, holding up her holy cross necklace. The cross glowed with a faint light, repelling Emily. "NOOO!" Emily screamed, stumbling backward. The artifact fell from Emily's grasp, and the trinity breathed a collective sigh of relief.


But their respite was short-lived. The pearl purple eye began to glow brighter, and the air thickened with malevolent energy. "Emily, snap out of it!" Alison cried, shaking her friend. Emily's eyes flashed with recognition, and for a moment, she was herself again. "Alison...help me..." Emily whispered, before the purple glow consumed her once more. The trinity realized they had to destroy the pearl purple eye to break the witch's hold on Emily.


Alison, Mike, and Rachel knew they had to act fast. They surrounded the pearl purple eye, ready to destroy it. "Alison, say the words," Father Michael's voice echoed in Alison's mind. "In Jesus' name, I command you, evil spirit, to depart!" Alison declared. The holy cross necklaces glowed brighter, and the eye began to tremble.

"No!" Emily screamed; her voice now fully possessed by the witch.

With a burst of faith, Alison, Mike, and Rachel touched the eye. A blinding light enveloped them. When the light faded, the pearl purple eye lay shattered. Emily stood before them, freed from the witch's grasp.


The trio hugged, tears of relief streaming down their faces.

"It's over," Alison whispered. But as they turned to leave, a faint whisper echoed through the mansion: "The Witcher's legacy lives on...in you, Alison Moon. "Alison's heart skipped a beat. Had she truly defeated the witch, or merely inherited a new destiny? The trinity exited the mansion, ready to face whatever lay ahead.


Alison, Mike, and Rachel returned home, forever changed by their ordeal. Emily, now free from possession, began her journey toward healing. Father Michael watched over them, knowing the battle between light and darkness never truly ends. Alison gazed up at the moon, her heart filled with a newfound sense of purpose.


"I'm ready," she whispered, "for whatever comes next."


THE END.

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November 05, 2024 09:18

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14:12 Nov 14, 2024

In a world where witches, wizards, and dark magic greatly captures the zeitgeist of today's society, it's refreshing to see someone combatting the dark arts with God and Christian ideology. This felt very much like a classic Star Wars film in that there is a well-defined good side and a well-defined evil side. I particularly enjoyed the end where the narrator explains that the battle between good and evil never truly ends, coupled with Alison's resolve that no matter what, she'll be ready to face any adversity. This story definitely feels ...

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Sanele Mazibuko
14:23 Nov 14, 2024

thanks for advice and acknowledgement. I appreciate it and this will help, hone my skill.

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Cindy Calder
03:05 Nov 14, 2024

This was a very interesting and intricately woven tale of good and evil. I enjoyed reading it very much.

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Sanele Mazibuko
09:08 Nov 14, 2024

I appreciate this, thank you

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