Submitted to: Contest #314

Fighting the Truth—Canine World Version

Written in response to: "Write a story from the point of view of a canine character or a mythological creature."

Drama Fantasy Suspense

Dawn prowled the sleeping woods, clawing at our den with chill and promise. Comfort was not a lie we told each other as all of us siblings pressed close to one another. The night before, our world belonged to us. Our world was safe. Or so we thought. By morning, it was all gone.

I stepped out into the frigid air, which gnawed stinging teeth into my nose, a purple and navy sky streaked above me. The rustle of leaves whispered secrets, and I could sense the forest holding its breath.

The mournful howling from beyond the den made my fur bristle; my dam’s whimper told me enough. Alpha had fallen. The pack’s heart was gone, taken by a cold, distant claw in the dark. Loss, sharp and metallic, filled my mouth—no pup should suffer that bite.

His loss was a hollow ache that settled deep in my chest, a weight that pressed on my bones and blurred the edges of hope.

Scar-nosed elders padded up later, dropping my sire’s battered collar and faded scent blanket at our paws. Dry words. No tails lowered in sympathy. When Mother pressed them, the answer was simple: “Stricken down by one of the Rival Clans.” Nothing more.

Their eyes betrayed a cautious fear—they said little, but the silence screamed louder than any howl.

The Rival Clans— they ran the far ridges: the wolf packs of Old Pines, the foxes near the river, that feared coyote band. Their names were whispered in every den. Yet something in the elders’ averted eyes gnawed at me.

In their shadows, rumors curled like smoke, twisting and turning until even the bravest dared not speak them aloud.

Sire hunted for our pack, shielding us from storms and hunger. We rarely saw him. My dam, like any mother, held the burrow: grooming me; feeding us; teaching my smaller littermates, Lupo and Fina, to bat at sunbeams. Fina always tried to sneak up on dust motes, pouncing, and Lupo once tried to howl with a mouthful of moss. He sounded like a frog in the rain, but it made us all laugh. Even Mother, sometimes

She was the calm heart of our pack, which never wavered, even when the world fell away beneath our feet. The two of us had made our own, along the shadows we knew to be safest while still keeping a wary eye out. Devilment crept behind the bramble.

Days dissolved into hunger. Mother gnawed old bones, refusing fresh kill. Her eyes, wild and glazed, watched nothing. I became a den keeper and hunter both—scrambling for scraps, minding the pups. One time, I tripped over a half-buried branch, mud splashing all down my back. Fina snickered for hours. My dignity? Gone. Lupo and Fina were too young to scent tragedy. But I had to hold the pack together. There was no choice.

Each rattle in my belly was a reminder that the fight for survival was far from over. Her spirit seemed to wane with every passing day, a flickering flame in a cold wind.

One dawn, a stone inscribed with claw marks, half-buried at the den flap—a message from the Overpack Council: "Tribute Due by the next full moon." The pack had just enough scraps for each belly. Sire had always brought fresh kill and kept the Council satisfied. Without him, we were starving and exposed.

In our pack, she-wolves rarely left the den. My world was shadow, dirt, and root. I’d never hunted the wide woods, never bargained with the Council. Honestly? I was scared I’d mess everything up. But pretending was easier than saying so out loud. Mother couldn’t help me; her soul drifted in sorrow. Frost bit my heart as every burden settled on my tail.

The next sun, I crawled to the Council’s stone hollow, searching for hope. Was I doing the right thing? Heck, if I knew. My paws shook, not from the cold this time. When I spoke Sire’s name, the wise-dogs’ hackles rose. They huddled, then grudgingly tossed me a deal: a meager portion of meat each moon, barely enough for one hungry pup, let alone four. When I begged for more, they bared their teeth and sent me away.

The path was littered with fallen leaves and broken promises, each step heavier than the last. I kicked at a stone. The forest felt bigger and emptier, like I was the only one left holding all the broken pieces.

Slumping home, I heard a keen beneath the roots. Some hero I was. I couldn’t even catch a mouse if I sat on my tail. I crept down and found Mother, trembling, clutching Sire’s fur, tears soaking the earth. She burrowed into me, so small, and I felt lonelier than ever before.

It was the faintest sound, but it shattered the silence that had wrapped itself around our den.

Nights passed. I prowled the forest paths, begging for scraps. Everywhere, old dogs sneered: “Too young. Too soft. Not meant for the hunt.” They forgot that grief sharpens teeth, and hunger is its own teacher.

The shadows grew longer each night, and so did my resolve.

One night, memory stalked my dreams—a flashback to a moment old but haunting. I’d lain curled beside Sire when thunder boomed outside, the whole den shivering. “Never fear the storm, Kira,” he’d rumbled, warmth in his voice. “It's the only time the whole pack listens for the same sound.” I believed him then. Now, I clung to the words as armor.

Rummaging through Sire’s old scents, I uncovered an orange-stained clawmark scroll. “I offer my life for my pack’s safety.” His mark was there— Sire’s promise, final and unbreakable. My heart twisted. Why would he pledge himself so easily?

All night, I plotted. Dawn found me digging at the Council’s den. I pushed the scroll before the Council-Alpha, my paws trembling.

My mind raced with plans, sharp and desperate, weaving hope from the threads of despair.

“The scroll is drenched in blood,” I said. "So you just pretend it never was there?”

The old wolf whined, his cracked voice staring down at the black ball of fur, his tail twitch lashing up beneath him. “The Council had sacrificed too many times before, and one more failed promise would release their tenuous hold over the packs. I’m sorry you learned this. There’s nothing we can do.”

His words tasted of rot. Lies stung my tongue. Rage swelled. “You betrayed him. You betrayed us.”

But I would not cower. I would howl the truth to every moonlit corner of our woods. The Council’s voice, their bark and growl, ruled the air. But one pup’s howl can still be heard.

I spent the night scraping bark and forging mud into stories on stone. Stories of what really happened, of loss and courage. I placed them where every creature would pass: on logs, on stumps, beside the watering holes.

Each mark I left was a howl turned to stone, a silent scream against the cold deceit.

Once timid and unseen, as my words echoed in the woods, I found new strength in my stride. The spirit of Sire ran beside me.

The woods, once indifferent, now pulsed with a new energy—my voice, carried on the wind.

One dusk, a squirrel darted to our den, bearing a note: “Your story stirs hearts. Come to my log tonight, share your howl.” It was Edda, the clever crow who shared tales over the wind for all mothers to hear. Mother smiled—a real smile, for the first time in many moons.

That night, under the silver moon, I told my tale by the great fallen log. Edda listened, her feathers wet with sympathy. She urged every creature to help; by gifting meat, spreading whispers, giving what they could.

The light filtered softly through the leaves, bathing the gathering in a gentle glow.

Back at our den, Edda pressed a bundle into my paws—precious, nourishing kill. I tried to refuse, but generosity is a gift that must walk on. Mother’s eyes shone, the pups danced. I curled up, exhausted but alive with hope.

The weight of their kindness settled heavily on me, a reminder that even in darkness, light can be found.

In the days after, our den filled with gifts: tokens, food, even playthings for Lupo and Fina. The Council never offered help, but the pack—the woodland, the unseen hearts. It gave us a future.

Yet peace was a mask, barely clinging.

***

The air tasted of distant thunder, warning of an approaching storm both in the sky and in the hearts of the pack.

But the wind carried more than howls. Whispers twisted the roots: unrest was spreading, the Council’s authority wilting beneath moonlit truth.

One overcast dawn, the den trembled. Heavy paws thundered closer. Shadows lengthened as the Council-Alpha appeared at our entrance, flanked by hard-eyed muscle and two slick coyotes from the Rival Clans.

“Kira,” he barked, “enough. Your tales unsettle the packs. Step down, and your family will be spared.”

Mother pressed close, teeth bared. I shook—but stood. “The pack deserves truth, not fear.” I thought of running, but my inner self stopped me.

Irony gnawed with cold teeth: For all their bluster, the mighty Council cowered before a scavenger’s daughte—one they’d once dismissed as too soft, too young. Now, my howl unsettled their grip far more than any rival’s attack.

How strange that those who once doubted me now feared the howl I carried.

A sudden movement—a black-furred coyote lunged, knocking me aside. Pain flashed white. In the chaos, Lupo yelped, Fina cowered, Mother lunged. Edda dove from above, her beak a fury against the attacker’s eyes.

“I will not be silenced!” I shouted, the glen ringing. Through the thicket, creatures gathered; badgers, foxes, owls, the young and the tired and the angry. My howl tore the air: high, sharp, rising. One by one, others joined. The chorus surged; even old Brim, the skeptical husky, raised his scarred snout. Brim growled, “For all their rules, these council dogs couldn’t find the sun at dawn.”

“Yeah,” piped a young fox. “We’re not leaving, either. Specifically not, if Kira stands.”

My voice rang clear, a beacon cutting through the fog of fear and silence.

For a heartbeat, the Council-Alpha faltered, fear flickering in his eyes.

That’s when the coyote gripped my shoulder, drawing blood. A blur – Mother biting down, Edda’s wings flapping—then, suddenly, quiet. I staggered, pain hot and steady.

A small, defiant badger stepped forward, voice bold. “If Kira is banished, then exile us all!”

His eyes burned with a fierce light, illuminating the darkness of oppression.

Murmurs of assent: the forest united, the pack’s true voice swelling. The balance broke.

I looked into the Alpha’s face, from which kindness once had lived before power took its place—and saw defeat. “Let it be known,” he said, the old authority shattering, “truth demands a price – here is its blood.”

***

The night was thick with sorrow and triumph, a complex weave of endings and beginnings.

The Council retreated, their power hollow husks. That night, the pack howled not just for Sire, but for every loss the old rules concealed.

I lay by the den, wounded, yet fierce with survival. Edda perched close. My shoulder throbbed, and I twisted awkwardly, accidentally nudging Lupo’s paw. He grumbled in his sleep, tail thumping, and for a split second, I let myself smile. “You bled for every howl, Kira. But look, no one howls alone now.”

Outside, the healing song rose: thankful, uncertain, new.

But irony sang with it: I’d fought to bring the pack together, yet the wound at my shoulder would mark me always. Sire would never return. My childhood gone, courage my only inheritance. A happy ending for the pack , and a scar for me.

As dawn split the sky, Lupo curled at my side. “You’re not just a howler, Kira… you’re our Alpha now.”

A tear—pain or pride, who could tell, slipped to my muzzle.

That tear carried every story, every howl, every silent sacrifice that had brought us to this moment.

I had not just fought for truth. In losing everything, I gave the pack its voice.

Further off, a breeze picked up, carrying my father’s scent farther than fear could reach, carrying it all the way home—where no lie could ever cast its shadow

Posted Aug 07, 2025
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