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Reedsy competition.
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Write about someone whose job is to help people leave their old lives behind .
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          CHAPTER ONE
        Things seemed better
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 Itâs all gone. Yes, it did at the right time. Am not distressed anymore. Never would I. Crazy I was.
The dark sparrow pierced, dark crowds; even when I had seen it but to no prevail.
Life lied hopeless.
 My life could ever be such a mess,â I had never found the meaning of life than how I see it now. âIts like a heaven on earth!â
It seems itâs now a paradise ,âI came to know life havenât just ended when we thought it did.â
Whenever we think is over Life proofs itself right.
Knock Knock she knocks at a door, Lady opens ( her face so sad which shows she had much troubling her.) Dina had heard her cry from afar. Before she could ask the lady had burst into tears already. Telling her of the problem, âOh no you shouldnât be this wayâ (she reacted to her story) Life could be so bad, hopeless, but we never need to worry about our past this way, I had lot of life experiences but decided to go on itâs like a heaven on Earth! . Sometimes conflict ever solves so many problems. Dina had also told her stories making her laugh which got lot of attention.
 The young innocent looked at her with a smile.
 (Really Now she had found a meaning of life after sometime with Dina).
           The Screamer!
  Kira was so nifty in nature, had always wanted to be with the Love of her Life. Meanwhile, falling in love wasnât what she expected as the Love of life fled before their wedding so dearie and close. She blubbed so many times and tries committing a suicide before they had met.
          CHAPTER TWO
           Grateful!â€ïž
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 The next morning Kira knocks at Dinaâs door. Wow as she opened it. It was the young lady actually with some bundles of flowers falls on Dinaâs shoulder âthanks for helping me get up my pastâ ( with a drip of tears down her cheeks) âI understood things happened because thatâs not how I was destined to be, how bad people leave me and how I loved my present life all because of you.âÂ
Taking her up in her hands you donât ever have to worry dear Thatâs the message of Redemption Dina smiled with a bliss. Itâs not much she replied (feeling rest concern of the affection as she saw it was too much and she doesnât ever need to bother). Huh! See dear, you donât ever need to bother is just mere you donât owe anyone any obligation even though you do if shouldnât be much okay? Dina said but, to her Kira meant lot.
   [  How they had ever Metđč~~~Â
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 Dina had noticed her why Walking through her stairs to the roof. Seeing her screaming so badly from afar (âHell no! what had happened my life had being ruinedâ) quickly getting off her building and knocking at her door. Reay she had thought her the meaning of life.]
 Thanks Dina. She looked at her and smiled and they gave a huge hug.
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 CHAPTER THREE
           Summer walkđ
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 They went out on a summer walk saw a Guy who was a scribbler fixing up his car, he pursed took off the sea of sweat off his face. He suddenly started kicking his car with his feet so bad âwhatâs the problem?â they asked as they approached âmy car broke down and I donât think it would be ever work again, my mum lays sick, my muscle pains and my only daughter is ill she walks close to me and says âfather promise you would never leave me and mumâ every morning times I stop her before she could ever finish a word, the old man says deeply in touch, I feel distressed and its normal for everyone and I have run out of cash. They took a took a look at themselves âI will help you Kira said( it was the lady she advised putting on a responsibility) the man looked in doubt because it was really much. âI am a doctor I willâ she says( the young lady who ever wanted to commit a suicide was a doctor who fell in love with her the wrong one.) âLife could be intimidating times but we have to ever keep goingâ she said.
        CHAPTER FOUR
        I live for itđ©ââ€âđâđ©
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 The next day, The old man and family were admitted, feeling so strong after treatment âI had found the meaning of life, I had thought life had being such a messâ he says tryâs to kneel thanking Kira but she stops him âyou donât need to do thatâ( she says with so much affection) we are all human. My life had changed and really I had found meaning of life~ The scribbler. Taking him up ânever give up thatâs the message of redemption pass it on she said with a smile.â
  As Kira and Dina were alone the gave themselves a high five for getting a puzzle once again and helping people getting off their past. later giving themselves a huge hug.
The next day Kira kept a touching message at Dinaâs door  Â
    Thank you!
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Thank you for being there when there was no one.
Thank you for coming into my life when no one did.
Thank you for making my life change a second after I met you.
Thank you for teaching me the ways of life; my life changed completely after we met.
Thanks for the Love and care you showered on me.
Thank you for letting me lay on your shoulder when I felt Incomplete.
Thanks for being my accomplice.
I Really mean it,
You wonât just understand. It may be mere but means a lot for me
I Brought two words to you on this special day.
  Thank you!
     Regardless
I was rejected like I was cursed.
 I was broken as if I was Christ.
The Glooming music tells me lot of secret,
I wasnât just justifiable,
I have my self for those who even donât need me.
I looked cheap and worthy to be spat on --I deserved it.
  âThe heart beats lot of a thousand times within an hour we donât ever have any reason to always be sad. Now I will keep on spreading the news of Redemption. I Live for it!â~YOUR BELOVED KIRA.
          THE END
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This was assigned to critique so here goes: I couldn't finish reading it because by the second chapter, I still didn't know what it was about. Next, you are mixing tenses e.g "She blubbed so many times and tries committing a suicide before they had met." Bubbled is past tense while tries is present tense. That doesn't work. Also "it's like a heaven on earth" is wrong. The 'a' is misplaced which has happened a couple of times over the text I read. You improve by continuing to write, and read a lot. All the best.
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Thanks đ
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Iâm sorry, I didnât understand a thing in this story. I donât even have questions to ask because I donât know what I read. Was this meant to be in an abstract writings style? I really wish I could like it, but I just donât know what was happening. In any case, keep writing and I wish the best for your stories. <3
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Thanks for your advice đ
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