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Jackie's media by the seashore Is quite a tattletale, villagers fear her when she came for they know gossip is near, Jackie couldn't keep a secret to save her life she struggled and the end story is that she always embarrassed someone. so she came to town thinking she changed. An elderly woman was so sick that she couldn't speak. She spilled a tale about Jackie's best friend but Jackie overhears. Jackie try to keep it to herself but couldn't contain the tale as she tried to think of a plan so she rush by the seashore where she could release her pain as she ran and ran towards the shore, she have gotten tired, some villagers yelled: "come aboard!!" Jackie stop to laugh at it had reminded her of the tale that she was so hesitant to tell. Jackie got distracted and start to talk and talk until she had spilled the tale, The villagers were shocked and surprised by such a horrid tale so no one could beer or contain it so it spreads through the town, It went up and down all around it was the rumor of the season but Jackie was always the one to blame. she felt guilty as she walk through the town, her smile was no longer there it turned upside down representing a "u" shape pattern, and her eyes running like a waterfall, her nose leaking like an old house during a rainstorm for she knew she was the one to blame. She was finally at her best friend's house before she knew what hot waters she was in. Her best friend was so jolly to see Jackie but as Jackie proceed to tell the tale the expression on her friend's face quickly began to change, Jackie walked out even more depressed, seeing her best friend being shame for something she has accidentally done so Jackie went to the seashore where she was never seen again. Jackie media by the seashore was quite a tattletale, villagers feared her, when she came they knew gossip was near...Well, this was the tale of Jackie for no one knew where she went some even say she was taken by God to be judged for her evil deeds others say she drowned herself after realizing what she did so you decide what happened to her...the end
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Sorry, this story is so short lol.....But this story is about a girl by the name of Jackie media who couldn't stop herself from starting gossips so she embarrasses others in the progress which she starts to realize she was the problem and her ending was very mysterious no one knew where she went... In the first part, the little jingle "Jackie media by the seashore is quite a tattletale, villagers fear her when she came for they know gossip is near" and the last said "Jackie media by the seashore was quite a tattletale, villagers feared her when she came for they knew gossip was near" The use of present tense and past tense was used to represent the mysterious vanish of Jackie. Hope you enjoy this short story and i apologize for the shortness of it.
Recommendations
(first off these are just opinions lol)
Making the word limits a little smaller would help a lot of us a lot
if you guys have time maybe suggest where we can improve on our stories
This part is to fullup the wordlimit
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Writers notes
Sorry, this story is so short lol.....But this story is about a girl by the name of Jackie media who couldn't stop herself from starting gossips so she embarrasses others in the progress which she starts to realize she was the problem and her ending was very mysterious no one knew where she went... In the first part, the little jingle "Jackie media by the seashore is quite a tattletale, villagers fear her when she came for they know gossip is near" and the last said "Jackie media by the seashore was quite a tattletale, villagers feared her when she came for they knew gossip was near" The use of present tense and past tense was used to represent the mysterious vanish of Jackie. Hope you enjoy this short story and i apologize for the shortness of it.
Recommendations
(first off these are just opinions lol)
Making the word limits a little smaller would help a lot of us a lot
if you guys have time maybe suggest where we can improve on our stories
This part is to fullup the wordlimit
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Jackie's media by the seashore Is quite a tattletale, villagers fear her when she came for they know gossip is near, Jackie couldn't keep a secret to save her life she struggled and the end story is that she always embarrassed someone. so she came to town thinking she changed. An elderly woman was so sick that she couldn't speak. She spilled a tale about Jackie's best friend but Jackie overhears. Jackie try to keep it to herself but couldn't contain the tale as she tried to think of a plan so she rush by the seashore where she could release her pain as she ran and ran towards the shore, she have gotten tired, some villagers yelled: "come aboard!!" Jackie stop to laugh at it had reminded her of the tale that she was so hesitant to tell. Jackie got distracted and start to talk and talk until she had spilled the tale, The villagers were shocked and surprised by such a horrid tale so no one could beer or contain it so it spreads through the town, It went up and down all around it was the rumor of the season but Jackie was always the one to blame. she felt guilty as she walk through the town, her smile was no longer there it turned upside down representing a "u" shape pattern, and her eyes running like a waterfall, her nose leaking like an old house during a rainstorm for she knew she was the one to blame. She was finally at her best friend's house before she knew what hot waters she was in. Her best friend was so jolly to see Jackie but as Jackie proceed to tell the tale the expression on her friend's face quickly began to change, Jackie walked out even more depressed, seeing her best friend being shame for something she has accidentally done so Jackie went to the seashore where she was never seen again. Jackie media by the seashore was quite a tattletale, villagers feared her, when she came they knew gossip was near...Well, this was the tale of Jackie for no one knew where she went some even say she was taken by God to be judged for her evil deeds others say she drowned herself after realizing what she did so you decide what happened to her...the end
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