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Creative Nonfiction Drama Inspirational

Fishing is not about catching fish, nor is it about the fishing equipment used, nor the type of sharp hooks, weapons and bait used to trick fish or the thick and strong fishing line used for fishing. However, this is something that must be done in order to fulfill the lives of fishing fishermen. For whatever reason, the target fish and their friends are found in all waters, both fresh water and sea water, where they are used.


It is clear that the inhabitants of fish and ponds in the ocean are very happy if they are fished with conscience and patience, especially for anglers and fishermen in tricking the fish. Fish will always be sincere and happy towards every human who hooks them even though they are unknowingly being tricked slowly instead of being hurt by changing the color, sense of creativity and intention of the water where they live.


Fishermen rely on ropes, hooks and nets to get their catch, they rely on the tides of sea water to anchor at night while fishermen find it difficult to anchor their boats and cannot get to land. They often work at night because it is the biggest wave in their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life


Tides and night determine the place where the two celestial bodies collide and are witnessed by the Sun on the other side of the world. The sun could only peek at the event. Poets and fishermen become actors who embody God's creation.


There is hope in the sketch of the fishermen's skill in catching fish, even though their lives are increasingly marginalized from civilization and are starting to be marginalized because they do not have education or stability, nature always looks uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent. Similar to the desires of fishermen who always experience ups and downs in earning a living


The engine on the boat can no longer be used because it has expired from what his father left behind. There is hope in the causal sketch of a qualified fisherman. Nature always seems to be uncertain, sometimes shady, sometimes turbulent, similar to the desires of fishermen who always go up and down in search of a living, the engine on the boat can no longer be used because it is already very old.


Fishing nets remain loyal even though they are sometimes torn due to age or being carried on coral rocks, but this does not reduce the feeling of continuing to fish for the survival of him and his family. The boat he rowed never complained, fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of their lives and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and sincere because they knew their function.


The calm blue sea is as calm as the feelings of a child who wants to dedicate himself to his late father and mother and his surviving siblings who always support his family. A steady soul is used to facing storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature, in harmony with the towering mountains in the range of hundreds of islands presented in nature, the same way to the depth of the trough like a fisherman's dream.


For example, Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. The waves crashing, the wind and the storm that hit him were as if he had passed through his old age.


His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Economic difficulties prevented him from seeking treatment because he did not have health insurance or insurance, either government or private. Bagas was forged by his father armed with excellent maritime knowledge. Their family are real fishermen


Fishing nets remain faithful even though frequent tornadoes occur. The boat he rowed never complained when the engine couldn't be used because it often broke down. Fish are also willing and willing to be netted and fished for the survival of themselves and their families. The marine biota obtained seemed willing and willing because they knew their function.


Fish and deep sea inhabitants are always silent and moving, unlike marine mammal inhabitants who are always joking and humming happily as if there is never a problem. That's how whales and dolphins always sing happily with their distinctive shrill voices and always cheerful demeanor. Likewise, the waves are angry with the sea dwellers which always cheat on the coral. Right now he does not even have the heart to slap the waves or curse them with his venomous chatter because the fact is that He never laments his fate, no matter how hard life at sea hits him, he still exists and lives with gratitude.


He had to give up his education for the sake of a decent living for his family. Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta is his transit home and the sea is his main home. His mother was forced to let him go because of the bond between his little children who were supposed to be Bagas' younger siblings. He was forced to give in for the success of his younger siblings' education


The island is 28 nautical miles from the center of the country's capital "Jakarta" which will no longer be used for environmental, political or whatever reasons that the fishermen clearly never care about. Even though the remains of colonialism are still visible, it can be seen that this is the outermost island close to the capital of this country.


"Harapan" or “hope” in English Word is being the name of this island is a hiding place for the nation's warriors to escape in the past from the pursuit of my nation's invaders in the past and is truly a hope for the fishermen who inhabit it.


The sea is blue and calm, as calm as the feelings of a small child who always supports his mother and younger siblings. A steady spirit is used to being hit by storms. Abundant catches are a manifestation of humans who are always grateful and protect nature. In sync with the towering mountains on the edge of the island which are clearly visible when the weather is good, in sync with the depth of the trough like the invisible dream of fishermen.


This island is indeed a tourist destination for both local and foreign tourists. It looks very exotic and the island's residents look well-established from the outside, but not the Bagas family. His family was hit by waves and abrasion of material until it became small white sand that dotted the vast waters of Jakarta. It's sad, but that's the life that must be lived.


April 24, 2024 02:21

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Q1 _
06:51 May 02, 2024

SINOPSIS: The story delves into the profound meaning behind fishing, emphasizing that it's not merely about catching fish or the tools used, but rather about fulfilling the lives of fishermen and their families. It portrays the challenges and resilience of fishermen, particularly through the example of Bagaskara, a young fisherman supporting his family after his father's passing. Despite facing hardships such as economic difficulties and the deterioration of their boat, Bagaskara remains dedicated to his family and the sea. The story also t...

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Safira Nihaya
06:51 May 02, 2024

the story is very good 🔥🔥 the synopsis : in the midst of the harsh life of a fisherman, Bagaskara, a 15 years old fisherman's son, must take on the responsibility of providing for his family after the departure of his sick father without access to health services. Despite economic difficulties and deteriorating environmental conditions, they persisted with strong spirits. On Harapan Island, where they live, despite being an exotic tourist destination, the Bagas family must fight against material abrasion that threatens their survival. Despit...

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Nayla Pebiyanti
06:48 May 02, 2024

The story is a story description, telling about a child named Bagaskara, a child who was willing to lose his education in order to earn a living to meet his daily needs, having to work for his mother and younger brother.

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Amanda Exflora
06:47 May 02, 2024

very good story. This story tells about a young man named Bagas who lives on Harapan Island, Jakarta. He left his education to support his family by becoming a fisherman. Even though the island is beautiful and a tourist destination, the Bagas family lives in economic difficulties. This story highlights human sacrifice, resilience, and connection to nature.

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Mutia Faradila
06:44 May 02, 2024

The synopsis tells about the life of a fishing boy named Bagaskara who has to take responsibility for supporting his mother and younger siblings after his father died of an incurable illness. Bagaskara had to struggle amidst harsh nature and economic difficulties, risking his education for the sake of his family's survival. He lives on Harapan Island in the Thousand Islands, Jakarta, a place that was once a hiding place for warrior-sailors from invaders. Even though the island is an exotic tourist destination, the life of Bagaskara and his f...

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Mias Shakilah
06:43 May 02, 2024

Wow, the story is very good. The story is a descriptive story, telling about a child named ''Bagaskara'', a child who is willing to lose his education in order to find a name. He dropped out of school to support his mother and younger siblings, even though he experienced many difficulties every day, he never complained about his fate, he always lived with gratitude and never gave up on making ends meet for his family. From this story we can take the message and motivation to always be grateful for what we have and to always fight to achieve ...

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Zahra Hanifah
06:43 May 02, 2024

A very interesting story, telling the story of Bagaskara, who is a tough and humble teenage fisherman, who is forced to take over the responsibilities of his family after the departure of his father, leaving them in economic difficulties. Even though he is still young, Bagas has extensive knowledge about marine life which he inherited from his father. His family's life on Harapan Island in the Seribu Islands, Jakarta, is often filled with difficulties, but their enthusiasm as true fishermen never fades. Even though he had to sacrifice his...

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Sisilia Mutiara
06:38 May 02, 2024

The story is a descriptive story, telling about a child named Bagaskara, a child who is willing to lose his education in order to earn a living to meet his daily needs, having to work for his mother and younger brother. From this story we can take the message and motivation to always be grateful for what we have and to always fight to achieve what we want to get.

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03:40 May 02, 2024

Sinopsis: Tells the story of a 15 year old boy named Bagaskara, he replaced his father's profession to become a fisherman. His father died of an illness for which there was no cure. He dropped out of school to support his mother and younger siblings, even though he experienced many difficulties every day, he never complained about his fate, he always lived with gratitude and never gave up on making ends meet for his family. Comment: i think this story is in the form of a descriptive teks, From this story we can take the message and motivat...

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Tyara Ramadhani
03:38 May 02, 2024

a good story, tells the story of a boy named Bagaskara who is 15 years old, he replaces his father's profession to become a fisherman. His father died of an illness for which there was no cure. He dropped out of school to support his mother and younger siblings, he never complained about his fate, he always lived with gratitude. From this story we can take the message and motivation to always be grateful for what we have and to always fight to achieve what we want to get.

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Raudhatul Jannah
03:24 May 02, 2024

Sinopsis Cerpen "DUSK PADDLING" Fishing has been a vital part of human survival for centuries, with various methods and tools used to catch fish. The oldest known fishing net dates back to 8300 BC, made from willow, and was discovered in Finland. Fishing nets have been used by many cultures, including ancient Egyptians, Romans, and Native Americans, who employed different techniques and materials to catch fish. In modern times, fishing nets continue to play a crucial role in the fishing industry. Monofilament nylon fishing nets are pre...

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Selma Emon
02:35 Apr 30, 2024

the story is a story description, telling the story of a child named Bagaskara who has a profession as a fisherman. His father leave him forever because disease. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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Indri Indri
01:00 Apr 30, 2024

I think this story is in the form of a narrative text. I really like Bagaskara's character because he is a hard worker for his family and doesn't give up easily, even though he is still young, he still works hard for his family. His story is a reminder and motivation for us to always be grateful for what we have, to fight with all our strength to achieve our goals.

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Sahruloh .
00:59 Apr 30, 2024

Cerita ini sangat menarik dan wajib untuk di baca👍🏻.. Karena cerita ini menggambarkan tentang seseorang bernama "BAGASKARA" Dengan usia 15 tahun, Anak nelayan yg harus menja tulang punggung keluarga nya (ibu dan adiknya). Sebab ayahnya meninggal karena penyakit yang belum ditemukan obatnya. Cerita juga ini mengambarkan rasa perjuangan seorang anak, rasa syukur seorang anak atas kerunia yg tuhan berikan. Dimana seorang anak ini di tuntut untuk bekerja keras demi kelangsungan hidup keluarga

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Aprilla Rilla
00:54 Apr 30, 2024

the story is a story description, telling the story of a child named Bagaskara who has a profession as a fisherman. His father leave him forever because disease. From this story, it can be concluded that you never regret fate, no matter how hard the problem is happening, must still exist and live with gratitude.

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Mutiara Yolanda
00:53 Apr 30, 2024

this story is good and really motivates those of us who are less than grateful because there are still many people out there who have not been fortunate in economic matters, and teaches us to always be grateful for what we get and that a father also works hard to provide for his family and a child who helps him for the family, he is still small but has helped his parents work to support the family.

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Cahya Maharani
00:53 Apr 30, 2024

Cerita tersebut merupakan uraian cerita, menceritakan tentang seorang anak bernama Bagaskara, seorang anak yang rela kehilangan pendidikannya demi mencari nafkah agar bisa memenuhi kebutuhan sehari-hari, harus bekerja untuk ibu dan adiknya.

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Siti Jazila
00:52 Apr 30, 2024

The story is very interesting and also very inspiring

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Sintia Asmi
00:52 Apr 30, 2024

The story centers on Bagaskara, a 15-year-old fisherman's son who must become the backbone of the family after his father dies. Bagaskara's life is full of challenges, he has to fight against poverty, limited education, and dependence on nature that is not always friendly.

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Fahrulrozi 130
00:50 Apr 30, 2024

Synopsis of this story Fishing must be done to support fishermen. They often work at night because this is the biggest wave of their lives which is an ideal outcome for their family life. Bagaskara, the son of a fisherman who now has to support his mother and younger siblings. He is only 15 years old. The harshness of nature has made him strong and humble, abundant catches and the difficulty of getting fuel for fishing have become his daily life. His father had to die because he was suffering from a disease for which there was no cure. Eco...

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